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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #75 on: May 10, 2011, 05:33:55 AM »
What kind of animals are there? are they similar to animals we know like squirrels or rats?

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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #76 on: May 10, 2011, 06:22:49 AM »
He did say he was okay with his spot, but just this one I can skip. Sorry Kitt :C

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There are native beasts that are formidable like monsters, and animal types that we know too, like cats and dogs and birds. all kinds of shapes and sizes of beast
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #77 on: May 10, 2011, 09:57:15 AM »
You think I would pass THIS up...I think not!

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Name: Entaru "Needles" Korin
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Species: Artic Fox

Appearance:
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Skin/Coloring: Silver fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors:Black stripe down his nose and a white furred belly

Eye Color: Emerald Green
Eye style: Predatory
Hair Color:None...just fur
Hair Style:N/A

Build: Gangly
Weight: 179 lbs
Height: 6'3"

Clothing: Nazi Officer's Trenchcoat with Officer's Uniform
Accessories: Black ring with a ruby, a diamond, and a sapphire embedded into it.

Mode of Transportation: Often chauffeured by a military escort in an armored vehicle.  Otherwise on foot.  Rare occasions will see him in a lightly armored mechanical walker.

Weapons

Weapons: Laser Pistol, custom "Freddy Kruger" style gloves with syringes on fingers, vials of posionous liquids and gasses.
How they are carried:The pistol is carried in a holster on his side,underneath his trenchcoat. The gloves are attatched to his belt in such a way that he can simply slide them on. The vials are either carried in the gloves or in the small pouches that line his belt.

Limitations/Details: Pistol is medium range, medium-low accuracy but high damage. Requires highly radioactive energy cells, one cell is equivalent to 50 shots. Will last a LONG time if maintained properly.  Ill maintenece may cause dangerous malfunctions, destroying them gun as well as severely damaging the wielder.  Gloves are closequarters only and syringes break if hit too hard.  Vials break on impact with ground or when damaged.


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Class: Witch
Calling: Only employs posions. These are created inside Entaru's body which he extracts with his syringes and places them in vials to be used at later times. He is immune to his own poisons because of this..other poisons however, he is only slightly resistant to.
List and describe all spells: Dart Skin (always active)-Excesses of magical posions and acid build up in Entaru's skin and organs which can be removed and used as weapons.

Limitations: Can be a severe handicap if poisons are not removed for a period of time.  Can cause hallucinations, vomiting, debilitating cramps, dangerously high fevers, dehydration, and the air around him becomes toxic to passersby.
Breaks: N/A

Faction



What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP

How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: Sworn allegiance

How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Sheer contempt for the rebels and their leaders.

How does he/she feel about the border war?: Has no real opinion as he is more focused on the Rebels.

What Type of soldier is he or she?: Officer

Where does he/she serve?: Spends most of his time serving in Nil, but occasionally is sent to Chancey to deal with paticularly large problems.

State his or her rank or job.: Major

Life Story

Personality: Incredibly cold and spiteful, incredibly quick to condemn those who he feels are cowards or sympathizers. Rarely seen smiling unless speaking with a superior, torturing a POW, or in the presence of small children.

Bio: Born into a military family, Entaru was surprisingly unwilling to join the SSNP.  Instead he spent his time farming grapes for wine and building a family.  He was a happy man with a loving family who worked on SSNP soil.  His land however was close to the borders of the forests.  The natives, in an attempt to take back stolen land, pushed through the borders and attacked  the small province in which Entaru worked.  His farm was destroyed and his family of a wife and 3 children murdered.  That very night, after slaugthering the natives who attacked his home, he made a pact with a demon of Deilm.  The demon made him a walking nightmare, an aura of fear surrounding him at all times and terrible poisons dripping from every pore.  His nickname, "Needles," is spoken in a hushed tone as those who have crossed him have met terrible ends.  He shortly joined the military and progressed through the ranks due to both skill and fear from his higher ups that behind his smile lay a forked tongue laiden with innumerable tortures.



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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #78 on: May 10, 2011, 10:06:53 AM »
Pffft finally.

Sure whatever you are good and I'll put you in the posting order. X3 Being my mate, I hope mister powerful pact Entaru won't incredibly annoy me right? Right. Okay. Enough said.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #79 on: May 10, 2011, 11:12:03 AM »
Its no worries... I was asleep at the time  XP   Darn you time zones...

And like I told Katie, I'm now on a study leave, which means I dont have to go in to school  :3  (though I do need to revise for exams coming up soon) but that should give me some more freedom with when I post...

Oh, that and I just finished my coursework and handed it in!  ^_^  finally...


Anyway, Imha post now as it seems Katie just switched me and cuddles round.


edit:  Yo Entaru!  :P   long time no see!
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #80 on: May 10, 2011, 06:21:31 PM »
Kitt and Entaru ftw


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Emrelda posts after Kitt naow, and so on...:3 We will get the hang of it. Because I can understand and can predict how frustrating it will be to wait for nine people before you get to say one thing, this posting order is not permanent. Once we have gotten established that we are ready to commit and do this thing, I will close the RP save for special reserves and get rid of the posting order.

It's just that  for now I think it helps, while we slowly get into it...
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #81 on: May 10, 2011, 10:57:27 PM »
when are we going to get rid of the posting order? its kind of bugging me how I cant post my bits of story right after I write them.. oh. ok, well im ready to commit to playing this right now.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #82 on: May 10, 2011, 11:26:58 PM »
Pffft finally.

Sure whatever you are good and I'll put you in the posting order. X3 Being my mate, I hope mister powerful pact Entaru won't incredibly annoy me right? Right. Okay. Enough said.
Entaru be good....or bad...or good at bad....whatever.  XP
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #83 on: May 10, 2011, 11:31:50 PM »
one of the 'owners' of my characters sister was a famous, insane scientist because I knew you probably wanted to keep the Military leaders for a bit longer.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #84 on: May 10, 2011, 11:46:27 PM »
Honestly, I know it's hard, but I don't think we should get rid of the order. I don't like being left behind.

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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #85 on: May 11, 2011, 12:42:00 AM »
We would have a limit on posts per person per day to prevent that, as I know people, especially me, could get sucked in and just keep playing and leave all behind. It's just that I can already predict how a posting order with this many people would be unfair. If our characters are close together, especially fighting or something, you can't react right away to something someone said or did, you'd have to wait your turn and by the time that rolled around you could no longer say what you wanted to say, in fact the battle might be over entirely or completely changed by the time it's your turn. I only want to give people the opportunity to post right away, but not to a point others are left behind in the dust.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #86 on: May 11, 2011, 12:42:40 AM »
I would die without a posting order......Not to mention probably leave. I seriously do not enjoy free post...
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #87 on: May 11, 2011, 12:43:54 AM »
one of the 'owners' of my characters sister was a famous, insane scientist because I knew you probably wanted to keep the Military leaders for a bit longer.

Going good so far. Just remember to take your time. Slow writing in posts is good. :D


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I would die without a posting order......Not to mention probably leave. I seriously do not enjoy free post...

How come? I understand in smaller groups but it is simply very difficult for me to consider with this many people. Please, tell me your reasoning so I understand.


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Honestly, I know it's hard, but I don't think we should get rid of the order. I don't like being left behind.

I'm not saying we shouldn't keep the posting order, I'm open to it if players like it enough, I just really need an explanation of how a posting order doesn't leave one even further behind...And, of course, our players will have to follow the example of paying attention to everyone involved with their character in their posts instead of just ignoring a character because someone else whose turn was next wanted to say something too....and 0_o maybe I'm over thinking it but a posting order worries me. Then again, free post worries me too. T.T

Thoughts, people, please.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #88 on: May 11, 2011, 01:12:30 AM »
Wave posting?

I'm not to sure it will be hard, only if we are all in the same area. But I'm thinking if we are in diffrent places, it should be fine some what at least. I would like wave insted of an order, but maybe I'm saying that because I'm at the end and getting a bit bored :/, but I think it would do better for people with the time zone and schedule problems.
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Re: Atreju (OOC)
« Reply #89 on: May 11, 2011, 01:23:33 AM »
That was going to be my other suggestion. Wave posting. Katie posts first, then it's first come first serve until Katie posts again, assuming she waits for everyone to post. Though, it's not been too successful in my own RPs so far.

 

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