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Creative Arts and Media => Serious RP => Roleplay => Serious RP Companion Board => Topic started by: x on May 05, 2011, 06:19:57 PM
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Atreju
(Sorry this is a mess! There was so much to do...just read the stuff, make a char sheet and go for it. I don’t really care. Sorry for the mess, again. I'll post my - rather important - character after someone else posts. So please post soon, even just for fun!)
Warning: This is an RP based off of a story and comic idea chain of mine. By playing in this RP, you are telling me you are willing to sit and listen to a bit of history about the world the Kin of my story inhabit, and that you are willing to take your time and learn about the species and settings within it. In other words, you are telling me you're willing to read through longer posts and the obviously long OOC below and use them to your advantage.
Disclaimer: All of the story material within belongs to me, including my characters. Your characters belong to you, however, by joining, you are giving me permission to ask you to use them in any future stories/comics that may come from this RP.
I decided AGAINST allowing players to be Gods. Just forget about it.
Please read the attachments below!
STORY
The world of Rorn is beautiful.
Many times larger than Earth, this magical place is a home to any number of species both monster and animal, plants both alchemic and normal, Kin both evil and good. There are painted deserts glowing blue under the night sky, jungles lost in time, plains that seem to stretch endlessly, and towering cities with neon light and gleaming metal.
The world of Rorn lies in the middle of it all.
Rorn is a stomping ground for the gods, a world that connects all five Realms: Lilac, Deilm, Hecht, Ai, and the real universe that we know. Rorn itself lies in our universe, and it is where gods and creatures come briefly from the other Realms to get a taste of 'reality' every couple thousand years.
The world of Rorn is at war.
The powerful SSNP (or the Sentential Nazi Party), a legion of furs and humans who immigrated to Rorn a few hundred years ago from a destroyed Earth---led by the impossible to miss Heir Carson ---is at war with the Rebel Alliance, a legion of both natives and second generation immigrants who were scorned by the Nazi party or outright vilified and decided to take matters into their own hands to protect those they loved from genocide.
Just who are you?
And where do you stand?
Are you hero, villain, or something in between?
Slave or master?
Discover yourself and your calling as you set out on your own and adventure into the unknown.
SETTING
The setting is rather open, since this is a magical world. Keep in mind any fantasy video games you have played, such as Final Fantasy or the like, when trying to come up with a setting.
These maps are your sandbox. They offer a foundation of terrain and location. Use them to place your own invented towns or homes, or just use them to find an interesting starting place for your character. The major cities are dotted on the maps.
Maps of the other dimensions are available on request only by players using a character(s) from them.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5695507/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5695507/) -----> The Close Up Map
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5695515/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5695515/) -----> The General Map of territories
CHARACTERS
Creativity and imagination is key, but set magic and weapons builders have been laid out for you to pick and choose from. You may use an already established character such as your fursona, but bear in mind that you still will have to build from the ground up in that you have to decide all over again just what traits, looks, and factions your character would flaunt. The character sheet is below. You can be a native, a Nazi, or a Rebel, or you can make up your own much smaller tribe/faction.
Go all out with description, try to let me picture him or her clearly in my head. If something does not apply to your character, just leave that part blank or write N/A.
Passcard
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Species:
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any):
Skin/Coloring:
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors:
Eye Color:
Eye style:
Hair Color:
Hair Style:
Build:
Weight:
Height:
Clothing:
Accessories:
Mode of Transportation:
Weapons
Weapons:
How they are carried:
Limitations/Details:
Magic
Class:
Calling:
List and describe all spells:
Limitations:
Breaks:
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?:
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?:
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?:
How does he/she feel about the border war?
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone?
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories?
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them?
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she?
Where does he/she serve?
State his or her rank or job.
Life Story
Personality:
Bio:
RULES
Listed here are your two main concerns, followed by a shorter listing of general rules.
Realism - Please be as realistic as possible. This is not a game on God Mode. This is a game on Hardcore mode. Pretend your character is you, really doing the things you claim they are doing. For every action there is a reaction, wounds must be noticed and treated, characters need to sleep and eat and drink. They can’t carry too much without hurting themselves. It takes both ammo and effort to use a gun, and you won’t hit your mark every time. If you run out of ammo, you need to find more or toss the weapon and use another one. It doesn’t take five minutes to travel from town to town. On foot, you’ll be looking at a day or two of traveling, if not more. Your characters have a personality, desires, and dreams. Pay attention to them. Pretend this is for real. See through his or her eyes.
Powerplaying - Avoid overly powerful characters. I cancelled your ability to make Gods out of fear of this. Sure, you can be a talented magic scholar, top of your class, a dread monster called from another dimension to wreak havoc, or a barbarian who is master of the broadsword......but all of these characters aren’t just born like this! They trained, usually for years, to get to this point, and had to start from somewhere, find a calling somehow. Not to mention that their abilities have limits and that they can’t win em all. Remember David and Goliath, anyone?
* You must post within two days of the time the person before you posted. If you cannot make a post on time because you are too busy or will be gone, then ask to be skipped along with your reason why. If skipping becomes a problem with you (maybe a month of being skipped), I may ask you to leave as you are not contributing at all. You may not be skipped for any other reason, unless your character positively, absolutely has not changed in state at all. You can always contribute somehow, even if you just write that your character picks his nose and waits for someone to say something XD
* There is a strict three line limit. No padding. Dialogue counts as a line, but a post cannot be all dialogue. There must be a tag or an action with it.
* No godmodding or powerplaying.
* No wings, dragons and avians included. Wings are allowed only for monsters.
* No teleportation magic, invisibility, transformation magic, all powerful magic, or in general magic that I can see as being annoying. An exception might be transformation for a monster, invisibility suits for Neo-Tech military operations, or chameleon magic that makes one partially invisible.
*My character is the only chars allowed to be either invincible or immortal for a reason, either way you look at it, however, I may let you have an otherworldly char with a very long life span or difficult to harm body if that char is otherwise balanced out.
* You must be fully accepted to play.
* I will limit how many people can have an otherworldly character and if you play an otherworld character you MUST also play a second real universe character.
* PM me all complaints and questions or post them here.
We will start and make a posting order after those who voted have joined.
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Will post my character sheet up tomorrow :P
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I left out things for these two on purpose. :3 They is special, and have reasons for being what they are that I want to hold back until later in the story when circumstances may revel them and they may choose to join a faction. XP But doesn’t mean you guys get away with leaving parts out.
Passcard
Name: Moonchild
Gender: Female
Age: Six and a half
Species: Squirrel/Pomeranian Dog mix cub
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any): http://www.furaffinity.net/full/3425118/
Skin/Coloring: Snow white fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: Almost transparent blue marks in fur, top of ears. Blue inside of mouth and paw pads.
Eye Color: Blue
Eye style: Big and round
Hair Color: White
Hair Style: Is a lot longer than in pic, to her calves.
Build: A real lithe fluffball. Light and quick footed, agile.
Weight: Malnourished for a child.
Height: A few inches taller than the average six year old.
Clothing: Green hospital gown, medical identification bracelets.
Accessories: A stuffed pink sheep called Bob.
Mode of Transportation: on foot
Life Story
Personality: Scared constantly like a rabbit but when with her friend Atreyu is calmer and sweeter. Shy and nervous, scared even more around adults, holds a secret hateful venom towards adults that she wishes to exercise. Knows how to beg and lie.
Bio: Moon was raised in a very wealthy family in Dee. Her mother, a pomeranian, was a model for a clothing line, her father, a squirrel, an established Nazi officer. They liked to enter their little daughter in child beauty pageants in hope she would not only become beautiful and well known like her mother, but marry like her mother. But Moon didn’t like the beauty pageants…the other girls were mean to her, and the parents and judges were very strict, forcing poor Moon to sit for hours while they did her hair or makeup and getting very angry with her if she messed up her routine on stage. She didn’t like to fake the model smiles or wear the Lolita dresses. Eventually, Moon’s dislike of the child beauty pageant profession led to outbursts, temper tantrums and even psychological break downs. Her parents couldn’t stand that her daughter was acting like, god forbid, ‘a wild child.’ After one of Moon’s more violent outbursts at age 4 led to her stealing a knife and stabbing her teddy bear into shreds, her parents knew something was wrong with her. Instead of getting her mental help, they sought a way to get rid of her, not wanting a child with a mental illness (brought on by their abuse) to ruin their ‘pure’ reputation in Nazi society.
They found relief in the government itself. They asked Moon’s doctor to come to the house and examine her for mental illness, but after he concurred that she was no longer fit to be in the family, they decided to give their ‘disabled’ child to a better cause. Through her doctor, her parents learned that she was perfect to give up (for money) to a special government project, that not even the scientists themselves knew the name of. Moon was sent away from home to a secret laboratory north of Faye and given a new home in the form of a cell, new clothes in the form of hospital gowns, and new school in the form of daily scientific procedures to produce the ‘Aryan of Legend.’ Along other white and blonde haired, blue eyed children, she endured all these painful tests…unfortunately the other children, her friends, died as an end result.
Only she was left alive and this led the Nazi scientists to believe that she was indeed what they were looking for. In the end, she was all that and more. Newly gifted with the power of invulnerability, proved by many attempts at killing her, the scientists began to question if they had in fact produced the first artificial immortal……such a thing would be invaluable for all kind! Not knowing just what they did that made her what she was, they tried to figure out how to isolate the artificial immortality gene inside her, but continued to fail, not turning up anything.
Meanwhile, Moon grew lonelier and lonelier, to the point if she wasn’t mentally unstable before, she surely was now. With no more sense of love or right or wrong, Moon was confused when another blue eyed, light furred child by the name of Atreyu showed up in the neighboring cell. Turns out he was not a part of the project, but a pick up with no other place to be, a rat of the street newly a lab rat. They put him alongside her as a shared subject, to see if they could do anything with her genes to him that would make a difference. Slowly Moon and Atreyu became friends in the short times they had together.
Together, they made a plan to escape.
Passcard
Name: Atreyu
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Species: Lion cub
Appearance
Ref Pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4782460 (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4782460)
Skin/Coloring: Dun yellow
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: off white
Eye Color: Deep blue
Eye style: serious, kind-looking
Hair Color: light blonde
Hair Style: messy, choppy, unkempt
Build: Light and lithe, very developed leg muscles from running, arm muscles from training
Weight: slightly lighter than average from starvation
Height: a bit shorter than the average 11 year old
Clothing: green hospital scrubs, medical identification bracelets
Accessories: N/A
Mode of Transportation: on foot
Life Story
Personality: Speaks his mind right away, known for pranks, tricks, and general fun to be around. Kind and very devoted to friends, but can get snappy not meaning to.
Bio: Atreyu was also not wanted by his parents, merchants who simply didn’t have the time and gave him up to the nearest Nazi military academy at age 7--- the Farview Academy for Boys. For years he was trained be a Nazi soldier, but secretly the boy resented his tutors for how cruel and unthinking they were….Yet he became one of the top boys in the academy, the track and field champion, and a handgun pro, hailed by teachers and peers alike.
During a training run, one of Atreyu’s best friends was killed by an instructor as an example of weapon failure and buried in an unmarked grave. From that point on, Atreyu made a mission of making his instructors miserable by telling them off on their mistakes, playing pranks and causing disruptions that always got him sent to the principal’s office. By the time he was around ten, Atreyu had had enough of the Nazi teachers. Along with his ‘team’ of friends, he rallied the boys together and overthrew the school, tying up the instructors and setting the buildings on fire while they watched.
Of course, the boys had to surrender when the military itself showed up, and Atreyu was separated and incarcerated as the leader and sent his own way….through a series of mix ups and people to lazy to do anything, the boy prisoner ended up at a laboratory north of Faye, a spare test subject for a project involving an unusual little girl. He wants to help her escape.
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Yay it's here. Question, how many characters are we limited to?
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three i suppose
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And you say no angels? I may use more than one...But I already have someone I want to use. :3
Choices.......
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Passcard
Name: Viola Amour
Gender: female
Age: 19
Species: snow leopard
Appearance: lovely but not stunning
Ref Pictures (if you have any): see profile picture
Skin/Coloring: silver and white fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: triple moon tattoo on her stomach, tribal tattoo's on her shoulders and down her back
Eye Color: jade-emerald green
Eye style: almond
Hair Color: black as onyx
Hair Style: medium length with cute bangs
Build: athletic, slender, flexible, agile
Weight: 125 lb
Height: 5'10
Clothing: black tight leather pants, combat boots, matching corset like top, gauntlets
Accessories: silver studded belt, silver stud earrings
Mode of Transportation: anything she can get her hands on, mainly on foot
Weapons
Weapons: two hand guns, five combat knives
How they are carried: the hand guns at her hips on her belt, two big knives on her hips, one strapped to her thigh, and one in each boot holder
Limitations/Details: Close Quarter Combat....Amazonian Military style
Magic: lightning/energy
Class: Barbarian
Calling: puberty
List and describe all spells: summons lightning, can touch a body to shock them severely or to kill them
Limitations: only during an electrical storm/ or a powerful electrical outlet or machine *which is hard to find without getting caught*
Breaks: several hours to recuperate
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: Alone
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: dislikes them, does not associates with them
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: She agree's with most of their wants and terms
How does he/she feel about the border war? she wants it to stop, she wants peace
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone? by the lost of her sister
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories? many SSNP enemies, a couple of the RA dislike her
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? RA
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she? ]
Where does he/she serve?
State his or her rank or job.
Life Story
Personality: eerily calm, wickedly clever, alert, understanding and secretly compassionate
Bio: born into a good family, Viola lost her family except her baby sister when she was ten then right after was sold into slavery , several years later when Viola was seventeen and her baby sister Grace was sixteen, her sister was taken away to be a slave to one of the powerful leaders of the SSNP, for she was much more appealing than Viola, several months later she found out her baby sister was constantly used and then killed by her master when he got bored. Viola swore that she will kill him, as vengeance not only for her family but her sister. she has trained hard to reach this point to get close to him, so she can assassinate not only that leader but all of them, cold, bloody, and suffering deaths like her sister and family suffered.
her father was a RA spy, for several years was not caught, until he was killed along with most of the family. Viola has a soft spot for young children but is still close to stone hearten when it comes to the followers of the SSNP. she was trained by a 'amazonian' wolf woman named Har'na who taught her the ways of fighting and became a Amazonian herself and is a spiritual warrior of the Triple Goddess
(it doesnt have to be amazonian...make something up)
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Passcard
Name: Doctor Macid Krastinov
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Species: Canadian Lynx
Appearance: ???
Ref Pictures (if you have any): http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5300387/
Skin/Coloring: see ref picture
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: Triangle on forehead, Scar going across his face from left eye down to the bottom right of his face.
Eye Color: Royal Purple
Eye style:see ref
Hair Color:see ref
Hair Style:see ref
Build: Thin and Lanky to extremely buff.
Weight: 155 lbs to 415 lbs
Height: 5'8" to 7'5"
Clothing: Tattered SSNP Lab coat and glasses.
Accessories: A ring hooked onto a chain he wears around his neck at all times.
Mode of Transportation: by foot, can jump long distances when on Essence
Weapons
Weapons: none/ uses fists
How they are carried: n/a
Limitations/Details: barely able to fight when normal, can rip apart solid steel at strongest. Extremely sensitive to sound.
Magic: Absorption magic.
Class: Barbarian
Calling: Magic symbols on his hands allow absorption of life essence from victim to him.
List and describe all spells: Absorb life essence. Can absorb the life essence of any individual and add their power to his own, causing extreme growth in muscle mass for a short period of time. usually 5 minutes per entire body on average. Can absorb more essence to extend the time.
Limitations: Must have constant physical contact with the target to absorb life
Breaks: Once enough life essence from people has been absorbed, the user can begin absorbing life from the planet as well, leaving a dead patch in their wake.
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: is strongly against, but remains loyal due to the labratorys they give him for his illness.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Admires their courage, but feels they can never win against the SSNP as they aren't strong enough.
How does he/she feel about the border war? is not concerned
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone?
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories?
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them?
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she?
Where does he/she serve?
State his or her rank or job.
Life Story
Personality: cold and calculating, hardly shows emotion even in times of great duress. When on life essence, sadistic and cruel. A sociopath.
Bio: Macid was born into the well known Krastinov family, known for their expertise in absorption magic. At the age of 12 he was admitted into the Nil Institute of Science for his incredible genius and award winning presentation on Life Threatening Diseases. It was there that he met Maria, another Lynx that befriended him instantly. For 3 years they studied to try and find new cures to existing diseases to help the SSNP against the rebels. It wasn't until Macid reached 16 that his life took a turn for the worse. He was diagnosed with a fatal disease that eats away at the victim's body, until they're nothing but a pile of bones. Heir Carson wanted this disease to use against the rebels and promised Macid all the equipment and test subjects for whatever he needed to extract the virus for germ warfare. He was also promised the safety of Maria, as she had been taken by the SSNP for failure to recite the pledge correctly. Macid was aggravated that they would take try and use such a disease against people, but for the safety of his friend, he accepted. During one of the applications, a patient got loose and Macid accidentally absorbed the entire patient, causing him to grow extreme muscles and tear apart the laboratory. He blamed the outbreak on the patients for fear of what they would do if they found out he had such power. 5 years later he is without a functioning disease and has cost Heir Carson an entire lab and much more for nothing. He has 1 more year to extract the virus for warfare, or Maria will be executed.
Hows that? anything I need to change?
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question, if i create a tribe can i have minor controle over the members (non-player only) for short times but mainly controle my main charictor?
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I can reserve spot? And post sheet later?
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Well here's my sheet, for the one I definitely want to use. Kinda debating on using another...Let me know if everything is cool or not.
Passcard
Name: True/Nier
Gender: Male
Age: 15/??
Species: Weasel
Appearance: A typical white, brown and black furred weasel. A brownish black patch of fur over his eyes and black fur on his arms and legs. White furred belly, kinda dirty with brown. Brownish black back.
Ref Pictures (if you have any): Clicky (http://media.photobucket.com/image/weasel/sheenarp/Misties%20pets/Weasel.jpg?o=172)
Skin/Coloring: Like a human white. Kinda peach/manilla. But it’s under his fur, so it’s not seen.
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: None.
Eye Color: Hazel
Eye style: Like a weasel? >>
Hair Color: No hair just fur.
Hair Style: N/A
Build: Thin, scrawny looking. Small. He’s a kid.
Weight: 155
Height: 5’3”
Clothing: White straight jacket
Accessories: Eye patch.
Mode of Transportation: Walking, if not in some for of mobile cage being transported.
Weapons
Weapons: Knives. Lots of them.
How they are carried: Mouth, in his hands under his sleeve of the straight jacket and hidden seemingly everywhere on his body and clothes.
Limitations/Details: Being in a straight jacket can limit Nier drastically when fighting. Though he can fight whether it is fastened, restricting him from using his arms. It would primarily prohibit his ranged attacks, such as throwing his knives. In such a case he would wield the knife in his teeth and attack you using head movements and with a greater focus on his feet. (Which also he can use knives from.) True and Nier share a body, though only one side of him is out at a time. It is controlled via his eye patch. If the patch covers his left eye True is in control, whereas if his right eye were covered Nier would be in control.
Magic
Class: None
Calling: None
List and describe all spells: If anything it would be to spawn knives from virtually nothing, but none.
Limitations: None
Breaks: None
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: Neither, he’s a patient at the psychiatric hospital.
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: True doesn’t like them and Nier could care less.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Nier likes them, Nier again doesn’t care.
How does he/she feel about the border war? True is too young to do much and Nier wishes more people would be killed.
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? Yes, given the right circumstances. True would likely succumb to a more “Peaceful” invitation whereas Nier would go where there is killing involved.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she? N/A
Where does he/she serve? N/A
State his or her rank or job. N/A
Life Story
Personality: True is the nicest person you would ever encounter, he’s sweet, gentlemanly, kind hearted and caring. He would never hurt a fly/Nier has a crude humor and is down right psychotic. He’s manipulative, sadistic and outright evil. But he is also quite the gentleman.
Bio:
One day True came home to his family murdered. He in turn slaughtered the man who did it and lost his mind over the loss of his parents. When the police arrived on the scene they found True brooding over his murdered family covered in blood. Instinctively they accused him of the crime. He was declared mentally unstable and sent to a correctional facility somewhere to “get better”. He further lost his mind, not even being able to even bury his family, or even attend the funeral. His first week into the facility and he was sent to solitary confinement. He remained there for a whole year. Through that year he had developed a new friend, within his mind. It was another him, but a more evil him. He called himself Nier, that’s all he really knew about him. Other than the fact he was insane and very evil.
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@Srgntcuddles 1: You can have a wingless angel, from Ai, if you'd like.
@Emrelda: Nope, not accepted. :$ Mean Katie is mean but please fix your magic section to include the details outline in the downloadable attachment of the first post. Also, she has way too many weapons goin' on. Cut down on some of them cause quite frankly I don't see how she sits down on her 'fast' motorcycle with all of that hanging off of her. Mary Sues fall on exactly the same line as powerplaying and she screams Mary Sue. I like her story, her looks are fine, but calling lightning and tellling when people lie autmoatically and martial arts and lovely and motorcycle and engineer at the same time....absolutely not. Please rebuild your character to be similar, but realistic and not as extreme. Again, not trying to be mean but I have to be strict because realistic character building requires it.
@Macid: He is fine. Glad you put limits on the crazy power or I would have turned into mean Katie again. Huh. This is so weird...the last time I did this RP I had all soldiers...now I have no soldiers XD
@Serpington: You may control a tribe you create, yes. I may take over for the tribe in major situations but for the rest, you may entirely control the tribe and decide what they do, but focus mostly on your main character. If you create a tribe, and serve in that tribe as a soldier then the soldier part of the sheet counts.
@Sain: You may reserve a spot, yes. I have other reserves as well, so might as well add another. The more players the better?
@Srgntcuddles 2: So where is this facility? How many knives? How does he hide all these knives from the hospital staff and where'd he get them? He seems good to go, an interesting character. Just curious.
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im about to get my furry bum over to a movie theater so i cant post today, just saying I will post in the future SOOOOOOO just telilng >,< (and now i have a bookmark to this on my phone so I can do this tomorrow)
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Alright good to hear.
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I wanted my angel to have wings. I think I'll leave him out, I don't have much on him anyway. No offense. >.>
As for where the facility is...I was planning on having it somewhere around Dee, in the Nazi controlled area. But closer to the border...I'm kinda debating. But I know I want it near the border. Maybe with a forest nearby.
As for the knives...In the 25-50 range. Though only when he's on his own, as it would be hard to conceal them all in the facility. As for hiding them from staff, he has a hard time. His keeper "Jerry" often strip searches him, removing the knives he can muster. Mostly scalpels and eating knives, be they plastic or silverware. Nier is very quick with his hands so he can steal knives he finds in the blink of an eye. Which is why his straight jacket is usually fastened. Every once in awhile Jerry will essentially walk him around. Though only with True "In command". But True has a fairly fragile mind and Nier sometimes manages to force True to snatch knives during the time Jerry walks around with him, he sometimes makes him say things he wouldn't as well as other minor things. (On his walks he's unfastened, because True isn't a huge threat)
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>.> Why would offense be taken?...Your descision.
I'm suprised that there are that many knives about, but I suppose with plastic and scalpel knives you could find a lot of those. It works. He sounds like a fine character.
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*grumbles to self* I know the magic part is not really realistic but.... I was kinda hoping to keep that :'(
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Okay...how about you tone down the other things I mentioned...and you can keep your lightning, so long as it's a spell you can only use during a full on storm, like you mentioned, and you adjust the spots on the sheet there that need fixed.
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Should there not be that many knives? I figured they would be common place items, in both city and...Nature(?). Combat knives for soldiers, chef knives for chefs, hunting/skinning knives for hunters, or like the native people. (Don't know if they're technologically advance or not.) Many other knives out there. >>
But yey, it's good. :3
Can't wait for the RP.
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already did it...umm....am I allowed to touch a machine and/or alot computer to generate a weaker form of it ??? btw it can potentially kill my character
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Yep. Knives are pretty commonplace, just have no idea where he puts them besides plainly loose in his striaght jacket and well....0_0....50 knives in a watched facility....It's a very interesting trait of his, don't get me wrong I'm just like 0_0 trying to figure it out. You can keep all your knives and I'll wait and see how they turn out in the RP.
And, everyone, my main concern is that the attachments seem to only be downloaded like 2 or 3 times, subtracting the one time I downloaded them, meaning clearly not everyone has found the time to read them yet or maybe their download just hasn't been counted. The sheet, especially magic part, is a lot easier to fill out if you read the document, a warning to future players.
Post Merge: May 07, 2011, 11:32:42 PM
Edit: You are in Emrelda! Good job.
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I downloaded the sheet on weapons and magic when making my characters, will download the others tomorrow when I got some time after I have posted my char sheets :3
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what do you mean by download..... eh i am not computer savy
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I only plan on him having a large amount when he's out of the facility, free basically. I have my plans but I want to see how the RP is gonna run it's course for a little while.
Also, I had a huge problem trying to copy paste the character sheet to my office program. It crashed unless I did it like...One question/field at a time lol
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Ah sorry about the computer problems. And okay makes a lot more sense to think of the knives coming after an escape.
@Emrelda: Underneath my first post there are some links you can click on. These are the downloads I reffered to. You click on them, say open, then they appear in Microsoft word or another word processor.
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Passcard
Name: Freya/Nala
Gender: Female/Hermaphrodite
Age: 27/??
Species: Arctic Wolf
Appearance:
Ref Picture (Combat armor): (http://i10.mangareader.net/deadman-wonderland/1/deadman-wonderland-795355.jpg)
Skin/Coloring: White fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: The end of her tail fades to black. Scar-like tattoos cover from the wrist to the shoulder of each arm, they are normally blue, but turn red when she fights.
Eye Color: Bright red, almost glowing.
Eye style: Human-like as Freya, Wolf-like as Nala
Hair Color: Same a fur.
Hair Style: foot and a half past her shoulder, with bangs parting in vertical symmetry.
Build: Athletic, a bit busty.
Weight: (un-armored) 80 kg, (armored) 110kg
Height: 5' 11''
Clothing: When out of armor, wears an equally white jumpsuit with combat boots.
Accessories: A swastika earring that doubles as a comm device.
Mode of Transportation: Whatever she can get her hands on (obvious exception for helicopters or planes).
Weapons
Weapons: "Salamander (http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad160/daftwizard/renders/flameswordrender.jpg)": a broadsword that creates a conflagration when cutting something or impacting another weapon or armor.
How they are carried: A sling across her back, the blade only lukewarm when it touches her body.
Limitations/Details: Salamander's true power only shows when Lana is in control, but Freya is more skilled with the blade.
Magic
Class: Monster
Calling: Lana uses Freya's body as a center of magic.
List and describe all spells: - Fire Volley: 15-25 baseball sized fireballs that can travel a distance of about 80 meters.
- Beast Form: Converting magical power into a physical state, giving her physical augmentations at a super-human level.
- Meteor: pulls in an asteroid that collides with the object or person of her focus.
- Chain lightning: sends a bolt of lightning to a max of 15 meters, and has a chance to spread to another target (same distance) if its a direct hit.
Limitations: Only Lana is capable of using magic.
Breaks: The more Lana synchronizes with Freya, the more power Lana can use without harming Freya.
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: Freya is devoted to the party; Lana tolerates the party as long as Freya isn't further exploited by them.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: both see them as targets waiting to be eliminated.
How does he/she feel about the border war?: They both feel that the border war is their chance to bond outside the stuffy atmosphere of the labs.
What Type of soldier is he or she?: Prototype 'Monster' Soldier.
Where does he/she serve?: Wherever she is requested.
State his or her rank or job.: Moonchild's "Guardian"
Life Story
Personality: Both Freya and Lana share the lust for carnage, but Freya is more aware of ambushes or traps. Outside the warzone, Freya will have affectionate tendencies towards children, and Lana will have hunger pangs when in crowded places.
Bio: Freya started out as a normal recruit, drafted to join a war she only knew one side to. She quickly rose to the rank of Major, but was not allowed to command platoons due to her mental disposition. Eventually, she would get mortally wounded by three bullets to the chest. They missed her heart, but the bullets broke inside her body and caused massive internal damage. Instead of doing surgery and returning her to battle a month later, her CO decided to hand her over to R&D. Normally, he would have allowed her to be off for a month, but the scientists from R&D said they could fix her up and have her ready for battle within a few days.
They put Freya on a stretcher, and pushed her into a room with an air-lock door to an adjacent room. They left her in the room and locked the door before the air-lock opened up to reveal a Behemoth-like monster chained up to several points in the room. Freya could hear a high-pitched hum coming from the other room, and then electricity bounced off the walls as the Behemoth was electrified before her eyes. When the beast fell quiet, it started to glow brightly. Then Freya could hear the same hum in her room, followed by a brilliant flash that preceeded the darkness of unconsiousness.
When she came to, the beast's body was gone and she no longer felt like she was at death's door. It wasn't until the next day that the scientists let her look into a mirror while explaining that she is no longer just another soldier, but a person implanted with a monster's power. An unmentioned and unknown side-effect, is that the beast's identity came with the powers...
That was when she met Lana.
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Another interesting character! You're good. *facepalm* can't believe I even said that when you weren't finished....still good though.
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I would like a wider array of magic, but it might be considered power-play to have fire, ice, lighting, and the ability to pull rocks from space.
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Slightly, yes. DX lol
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Ok I wanted to use this one charter I been playing around with, but it would be some what of a demon/native split, bio explains more, I just want to make sure its ok D:
Passcard
Name: Addonexus
Gender: Male
Age: n/a
Species: House cat/ demon
Appearance: A feline with pitch black fur with bright yellow eyes. The feline has a skull on top of its upper head with its ears coming out of the skulls eye sockets. Instead of a normal tail the feline has a human shaped skull with a spine connecting the two.
Ref Pictures (if you have any): a sketch (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5708547/) of it in feral mode, hasn't been colored or outlined very well yet, just to show how the skull ontop looks and the tail.)
Skin/Coloring: Pitch black
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: n/a
Eye Color: Yellow
Eye style: Feline?
Hair Color: n/a
Hair Style: n/a
Build:small, but toned
Weight: 100
Height: 5'
Clothing: Lose gray pants, no shirt, and a desert style robe covering most of his upper body
Accessories: a necklace made out of bones and a ropeish material
Mode of Transportation: walking
Weapons
Weapons: Charmed- A buster sword as long as the feline, it feeds off the blood of its prey, and can power up by draining the life force of Addonexus (or someone else who offers)
How they are carried: held within the felines tail (see bio)
Limitations/Details: Bio should explain it better but its not always accessible and it can alter his personality, plus can drain his life force which can you know, kill him.
Magic
Class: Demon
Calling: telekinesis
List and describe all spells: (is there a limit?)
- Staggering- Addonexus blast everything within a 8ft area either away or down(heavy targets are harmed if not blown back)
- Mind grip- kind of like confusion in Pokemon, a quick mind strike that inflicts pain, or in simple minded people confusion. In certain cases it may causes paralysis
- Repulsion- A telekinetic force that repels things in a small area. Can be used to attack (like a force push or more concentrated), or block (its sits in an area and repels everything around it (small scale), and also be fused with the buster blade
Limitations: When magic is used it requires some of the blood gathered within the blade, if no blood it present the hunger will take over. Each use of magic (except staggering) reduces Addonexus control (see bio), when he losses control his mind is lost in deilm for X amount period, sometimes even after the hunger lessens.
- Staggering- when blasted down Addonexus feels the force pour down on him, when away he feels it rip at him. Each use (within a certain amount of time) increase the damage felt
- Mind grip- nothing more then the usual cost of magic, except that "certain cases one", sometimes it back fires and freezes him.
- Repulsion- nothing more then the usual cost of magic, when used as a shield (which can only be close range) it harms him as he uses it in prolonged periods for it repulses him tearing at his flesh, when used with the buster blade it drains a lot out of him and weakens his control (also can only be used 2-3 times within a time period)
Breaks: Is two ok?
The hunger- Addonexus losses control of his mind and the tail takes over, the tail surfers not penalty for and magic used for X amount of time, but tries to kill everything around him. (Does not occur often, more of when in heated battles with little death, and will leave him in a greatly weakened state)
Repulsed- when greatly angered or a friend is in trouble (along with Addonexus having a large blood supply), Addonexus gains the ability to repel in multiple places (ex. crushing someone between two repulsions), however he can not hold multiple repulsions for long, and is greatly weakened and is susceptible to the hunger (not the break one).
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: None
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: Hates with a passion (but usually only the military side)
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Does not believe in it, he believes blood shed will only lead to more blood shed.
How does he/she feel about the border war? Pointless, "we are all the same once we die" one of his favorite quotes
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone? (See bio) He never was with anyone else, but he does have a soft side for children, and those who are weaker and can not defend them self.
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories? Only higher levels of SSNP can even begin to know who he is, so generally he is accepted. Though he is often ignored for his demonic looking exterior. He survives by doing odd jobs, but typically he survives by acting as a mercenary (which he hates).
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? As long as the group was kind and able to defend them self against him (due to the hunger)
Life Story
Personality: Distant and awkward with some obvious things (such as small talk). He is very kind, but can be very hard and stern when angered. He dislikes mistreating of anything with a soul, and sometimes will voice himself very vocally.
Bio: Addonexus wasn't sure when his seconded life began, for he was made of an experiment. Through the use of some science, black and white magic (angel and demon), the SSNP tried to revive a murderess demon by sacrificing a homeless feline. The SSNP conducted this out in the desert so word couldn't get out of what they were doing, for if it worked then they could revive any great soldier/scientist that may of died giving them the phoenix effect. Addonexus can't remember anything about the process other then it was pain beyond words. When it finally stopped, Addonexus couldn't remember anything about his life before, his name, who he was, his family, all lost. As he brought him self to his feet, he could feel the present of someone else. A cold, dark, evil being that thirsted for blood, a craving so strong Addonexus felt it him self. Once he stood up some grunts tired to restrain him, that was when the hunger first struck him. It sent him to Deilm, also a first for him. He felt pain and saw horrors that no one should ever feel nor see, each trip leaves him crippled socially and broken inside, becoming more and more distant. Once his mind became one with his body again he saw the buster bladed sever the last of the remaining soldiers, the cries filling his mind...but- he noticed his need for blood had lessened. He buried the men and women he killed out of respect and against the wishes of the other voice, and took the fingers of each one of them, making a necklace out of them. The necklace symbolizes death that has no reason, he vowed that every kill he commits will have a reason. He traveled from then on, searching for something he knows not of. He gets an odd feeling that if he keeps traveling, his life will gain meaning, giving meaning to those who died. Through the travels he learned that the buster sword is from the demon that he is fused with. The demon can spit it out of its mouth at will and will reabsorb it to. Sometime for fun the demon will no give the blade to Addonexus for fun, but through this Addonexus gained a better understanding of his magical capabilities. Though he gained a better understanding of his talents, he also learned of his weaknesses.
Some other things will be revealed in the rp (bio related), and a little note the demon will talk to him
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I'll reserve a spot.
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And so we add another motley cool character to the mix, Sain. Good to go.
@Rigor: Sure can do.
@Everyone: I may start the RP this week. Remember what I said about realism, taking your time and using a lot of thought and description. Our chars may be apart from each other for some time, so you may have to use your own storytelling skills along with the ideas I'll give you until we get together. Unlike a lot of my past RPs where I was fun time anything goes, this time around I WILL yell at you for screwing up really bad. But I don't think anyone will do that if they take it seriously, like, I don't know, a serious RP?...
Not making a final posting order, but am going to list all our reserve and approved members. My mate just is cause he is whether he likes it or not.
Me
Entaru (reserve)
Kitt (reserve)
Hunter_Tier (reserve)
Srgntcuddles
Emrelda Triplemoon
Macid
serpington
Self-Sain
Kodachi Devil (reserve)
Chrono
Mortis Reptus (reserve)
and, finally, your mom.
holy crap where did the nine or ten of you come from, man? *rubs eyes* There's no way I've ever had ten people in an RP before. COOL!!!11! I also am working on a third character for myself. hope to get her up tonight. ....yay party......yayy..........
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I may still add a character myself. But daaaaaang. That's a bunch of people lol
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*looks over sheets again* What's up with all the experiments...huh...I guess we sort of did need something to...draw us together?
We sure do have a lot, must have either had a lot of charisma or a good idea for an RP. It also means I'll have to become even more of a carefully observing rp Nazi (hahaha punn) to make sure everything doesn't fall apart in the fray of a zillion posts! Thank goodness I have a posting order or it'd be chaos.
I'd like to thank all for joining, means a lot that peeps appreciate my works of art....*cough* I mean roleplay ideas.
Passcard
Name: Katie Avani
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Species: some sort of rodent bred beyond recognition
Appearance: With peircing eyes and a high set, strict face, Katie's face instantly belies the greed you know is there. She is lean and drawn out with neverending legs, but has a curvy bust and hips to smooth it out a bit.
Ref Pictures (if you have any): http://www.furaffinity.net/full/3485077/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/full/3485077/) some things are different than this, but gets the intense face, eyes, body, and fur color down.
Skin/Coloring: Sort of a tan off white.
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: Whiter in fluffy part of tail.
Eye Color: Brown
Eye style: Intent, glaring, slightly narrowed
Hair Color and Style: like this, usually falls over her right eye ----------> http://www.whatabeautifullife.com/image/cache/data/Fashion-Wigs/Women-scm-Red-Long-Straight-Cosplay-Wig-13935-1-200x260.jpg (http://www.whatabeautifullife.com/image/cache/data/Fashion-Wigs/Women-scm-Red-Long-Straight-Cosplay-Wig-13935-1-200x260.jpg)
Build: Thin, long-legged, string-beaned yet manages to fill out a dress nicely
Weight: 130 pnds
Height: 5'11"
Clothing: http://www.gorgeousworld.net/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Be-a-professional-and-a-stunner-Wear-womens-suits-3.jpg (http://www.gorgeousworld.net/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Be-a-professional-and-a-stunner-Wear-womens-suits-3.jpg)
Accessories: ID and other essential papers inside briefcase. Reading glasses. Make-up. Water bottle.
Mode of Transportation: Uses the light rail frequently. Feels it is glamourous. Otherwise gets a ride in a vehicle, feels she is too good for walking.
Weapons (http://Weapons)
Weapons: this knife---> http://www.knivesaustralia.com.au/ss963.jpg (http://www.knivesaustralia.com.au/ss963.jpg)..........and a small mm pistol, along with an array of poisonous chemicals kept locked in her breifcase.
How they are carried: the knife is strapped to her hidden inner thigh. the pistol is slung on her hip by a belt. the chemicals are hidden in the breifcase.
Limitations/Details: of course, she must undo and prepare the deadly poisions to do them, and carefully. she is also a terrible aim with the gun. however, her she weilds a mean blade and can cut deep.
Magic
Class: Angel
Calling: Her magical center is her diamond necklace, it is concentrated entirely there.
List and describe all spells:
Minor Heal: Heals her own minor scrapes and bruises.
Allied Heal: Heals allies halfway within a ten foot range.
Drunken Nirvana: Upon drinking too much of a good thing, she begins to drastically heal herself, of course at the cost of being drunk.
Limitations: Two of her spells are directed only at herself, with no damage to the enemy for any of them. The second most powerful heals only half way, and the most powerful comes at a cost of drunkeness.
Breaks: Upon falling asleep...or, rather, drinking herself to sleep, a new spell may form in her dreams.
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: Agrees with most of their policy, since it agrees with her opinions.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Feels they are worthless degenerates.
How does he/she feel about the border war? Wishes it to be over already, yet also wishes for a bit of suffering on the degenerates' part.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she? Head B....I mean, Head Chairman of the Propaganda Association, hired Nazi hand.
Where does he/she serve? Prefers Nil, but is currently stationed in Faye and thinks it is slightly as beautiful.
State his or her rank or job. The Nazi Propaganda Association heads all proceedings as far as education, shelter, home security, robotics is concerned for citizens of the SSNP. As Head Chairman, she acts as the Association's President and is highly influential in the group's decisions. She occasionally works closely with the Fuhrer, Heir Carson, himself, as a regular at his fancy dinner parties.
Life Story
Personality: Katie is cold, cruel and distant, only opens up at parties, bloodbaths, or when a heavy paycheck floats her way.
Bio: Women, despite being able to hold a few positions in the armed or homefront forces, have still never been treated as equals in the eyes of the Nazi Party. To the men of the Nazi Party, women are, at best, useful trophies, and at worst, decorative slaves. Katie from a young age could not stand the idea of being treated as less, of being given less opportunity, or shoved into something she simply did not prefer. While having a glamourous upbringing, she realized glamour could be her salvation, and by the age of seventeen managed to worm her way into speaking with some of her rich parents' friends, political members. By the time she was nineteen, Katie had established a gossipy name for herself, ran several committes, and had been taught how to defend herself literally and mentally in the world of Nazi politics. Age twenty-one was history. The Fuhrer Heir Carson invited Katie to one of his legend dinner parties, and blew her away with the offer of a title as Head Chairman of Propaganda. Never before had there been a woman noticed in politics, let alone to such an enormous extent...she was the only one of her kind! For the next year, no-one in the SSNP or its citizens could stop blabbing about "did you see? There's a woman on the board of our great Nazi Party, go check the news channel for yourself!" Now Katie lives contently with her heavy paychecks and life of luxury, content to do what is asked of her by the Nazi Party...so long as she is never asked to marry.
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sorry i'm late ^_^, is this ok?
Passcard
Name: serpington
Gender: male
Age: 18
Species: lizard (native)
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any):
Skin/Coloring: black scales
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors:dark yellow underbelly, blood red tribal markings going from his right shoulder blade up his neck and over the right side of his face, tribal scars in right palm and on right forearm
Eye Color: same as underbelly
Eye style: http://reptileseditor.wordpress.com/2010/02/02/
Hair Color: none
Hair Style: none
Build: lightly musculed, flexable, strong
Weight: 210kg
Height: 6’4”
Clothing: tribal two and a half to three foot loin cloth
Accessories: none
Mode of Transportation: anything he can ride, normally runs
Weapons
Weapons: improvised throwing knives, spear, dagger
How they are carried: improvised holsters on back (knives) in hand (spear), hip holster (dagger)
Limitations/Details: can only carry ten knives, and one spear. Once thrown, they normally are never seen again. Dagger is for ‘the final blow’ and ‘last line of defence’ only.
Magic
Class: demon
Calling: tribal scars in right palm and tribal scars on right forearm
List and describe all spells:
tribal bow: shinteki-neck: the primary hunting tool and the main spell of the tribe. Is stronger the higher your rank in the tribe.
Binding web: dentine soum: temporarily paralyses those who come into contact with the spider web like threads produced. (Used for trapping smarter pray)
Limitations: shinteki-neck: hunter elite level: range= up to 300 yards. damage= x2 or a normal arrow, slight armour piercing.
dentine soum: hunter elite level: size= can be between three and ten feet in diameter (can be oval in shape) time= lasts up to a minute
Breaks: can only be levelled up in ceremony, both are upgraded when the user gains a higher rank within the tribe. (attempting to upgrade outside this ritual will result in the loss of both abilitys)
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: contemna tribe
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: would love to kill them all with his bare hands
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: indifferent (doesn’t care about them) as long as they do not get to close (i.e., within range of his bow)
How does he/she feel about the border war? None of his business, fun to watch though
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she? Black ops equivilant
Where does he/she serve? A native tribe living deep in the forests
State his or her rank or job. Hunter elite
Life Story
Personality: generally calm and focused on the task at hand he is protective of the others in his hunting party and tribe. He tends to work alone and in a group at the same time flawlessly.
Bio: Serpington grew up as an only child, orphaned as a young child by the ssnp he grew up devoted to his adopted father, the tribal leader, he was seen as a spoiled brat by most of the others he grew up with dispite being the hardest done by, the teaching elders pushing him to unlock his true potential. Within years he sat atop the pedestal of rank amongst those he had grown up with. The only members of his tribe with a higher rank than he are the three other hunter elite, the two hunter supreme, the warlord and the tribal leader and his wife. He and his adopted brother are both soon to be hunter supreme and he has already decided to allow his older brother to take the tribe when it is time for a new tribal leader, for he aspires to be the tribes warlord instead.
and i will be comtroling mainly serp but the small six person hunting party is going to be in it a fair bit if thats ok. anf the main bulk of the tribe might only be seen once, or they might be seen more than that. i'll decide when the circumstances are right.
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Works for me. You in.
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this looks like fun, I suppose Ill create a character
Passcard
Name: Astopholes Dradues
Gender: male
Age: 2391
Species: Cat-daemon
Appearance: a tall ash grey cat with long bands of blood red going down his arms and legs, usally wearing his uniform
Skin/Coloring: ash grey with bands of blood red on arms and legs
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: small swastika tatoo on back of neck; closer examination realved it to be a brand
Eye Color: brown/red mix
Eye style: cat-like
Hair Color: black
Hair Style: army buzz-cut
Build: slightly muscular
Weight: 185 lbs.
Height: 6'1
Clothing: SSNP sergent major uniform
Accessories: ID card, various badges
Mode of Transportation: on foot, or by a limited teleportation spell
Weapons
Weapons: claws (unatturally long, serreted), auf widershan (enchanted mp5, fires incinderary rounds)
How they are carried: claws (retracted), gun (on shoulder strap)
Limitations/Details: although a rather powerful deamon in his own realm, his magic is very limited on Roth
Magic
Class: Corruptor
Calling: swastika tatoo
List and describe all spells: minor teleport (within 500 ft, use 3/day), gout of flame (a small fireball, use 1/day)
Limitations: cannot use magic in the prescense of powerful gods
Breaks: when inflicting pain upon others, emotional or pyshical, he regains use of one of his spellls previously prohibited on Roth
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: agrees with their methods, but dislikes their principles
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: that they are weak and fit for eradication
How does he/she feel about the border war?: that it is ridicoulus
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she?: an advisor to the SSNP leader
Where does he/she serve?:SSNP headquarters
State his or her rank or job. : advisor
Life Story: when he was still a small and dull infant fresh from the spawing pits, he ran afoul of a greater god-daemon named F'azuul, the god of deception. forgetting the lowly childs offence, he offered him a job as a corruptor of F'azuul. Astopholes sprang to his job, and has been a leading force behind most of the evil and cruel leaders in the history of the universe. he took particular intrest in Adolf Hitler, who he guided down the path to world war II. after Hitlers defeat, the deamon was sad to see him and his concepts vanish. but now, a new form of the Nazi Party has arision, and he is determined to help
Personality: evil to da core
Bio:
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http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5711523/
Hope that gives a better look at what the charter is suppose to look like (well.. an idea he obviously isn't feral XD)
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The planet is Rorn, not Roth.
There is no corrupter class, I think.
Also the rules state you need a second normal character to have an otherworld character, not to mention he is overstepping bounds far too much by being the one to lead Hitler himself. Perhaps a lot more detailed Bio would make his situation more believeable.
Try again, but I'm not sure that I'll even let anyone else in anyway. We already have way too many players. I appreciate that you liked it enough to try out a char sheet, and I'm not being mean to you because you are a newbie or just to be mean, I'm being mean because a strict serious RP requires a heavy handed GM. Please don't kill me if I say no. DX
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Passcard
Name: Kittrevsky ‘Kitt’ Szarda
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Species: Wildcat
Appearance:
Ref Pictures: None at the moment (am actually in the process of drawing these two characters right now :P )
Skin/Colouring: Grey fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colours: White fur on muzzle, neck and chest as well as tip of tail. Darker stripes all over.
Eye Colour: Green/amber
Eye style: Eagle-eyed but sullen
Hair Colour: Dark
Hair Style: Rather short, very scruffy and unkempt
Build: Lean
Weight: kind of average, not overly light but not heavy
Height: Rather short, around 5’ 5”
Clothing: Grey jacket and fatigues. His jacket has a grey-furred collar which can be folded up to cover most of his neck. Heavy hobnailed boots with leg wrappings up his calves, both normally covered in mud or snow.
Over his left shoulder Kitt wears an armoured pauldron of gunmetal steel. He also carries with him, an ‘Ushanka’ winter hat (the soviet style hat, with the fur front and two ear flaps) and a hooded cloak over everything. The cloak is a thick canvas material, with white and grey camouflage on one side and brown and grey on the other.
Accessories: A wide belt with various clips and pouches, including: fire lighter, rations, ammunition, scaling hook and rope, water canteen and a long hunting knife.
Mode of Transportation: Walking
Weapons
Weapons: A high-powered rifle, handed down to him by his father. It bears a scope with switchable lenses for long distances and medium distances as well as a small folding-bipod to help with stability.
A long steel hunting knife.
How they are carried: Knife in a holster on his belt and the rifle slung across his back or in his hands.
Limitations/Details: The rifle fires very long and heavy bullets, imbued with magic for destruction of armour, swift-flight and accuracy. This gun can take a soldier’s head clean off, helmet and all, but is by no means silent like a modern sniper rifle.
Its major limitation is low accuracy up close, long reload time and lack of silence, which requires the firer to redeploy after firing to keep hidden, or simply fire a single shot before retreating.
The knife is just a knife, long-bladed but serrated and wicked-sharp.
Magic
None
Faction
What faction does he belong to?
The ‘Slavs’
How does he feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?
Hates them with a deep and bitter vengeance.
How does he feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?
All Slavs are mercenary killers and assassins for the Rebels. They fight alongside the RA, simply because they, like the Slavs, want the SSNP destroyed.
How does he feel about the border war?
It is a necessary step in destroying the SSNP. Wherever there is fighting, Kitt will be there to sow confusion among the soldiers of the SSNP with a single well-aimed shot to the commanding officers on the ground.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he?
A sniper, a lone wolf but regimental and militaristic in his actions.
Where does he serve?
Wherever there are SSNP to be killed.
State his rank.
Among the ‘Slavs’ Kitt bears the rank of Štotník. As with most Slavic slang and terms it is a word that is difficult to pronounce without the distinctive accent that all Slavs still bear.
Life Story
Personality: Sullen, liable to bouts of depression and anxiety, but normally calm and contemplative.
Bio: Kitt was the only son of his family, his mother and father both Slav snipers, dedicating their lives to bringing down the SSNP. Such parents have little time for bringing up a young child. Both parents died on Kitt’s thirteenth birthday, the only remains being his father’s trusty rifle. From that day Kitt knew where his life must lead, in the footsteps of his parents, bringing down the SSNP one disgusting officer at a time...
Passcard
Name: Katarina ‘Katka’ Yantova
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Species: Wildcat
Appearance:
Ref Pictures: None at the moment (am actually in the process of drawing these two characters right now :P )
Skin/Colouring: Light grey fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colours: White fur on her chest and stomach. She is unmarked save for a dark tip to her tail and ears.
Eye Colour: Blue
Eye style: Curious, bright but scheming
Hair Colour: Dark
Hair Style: Almost shoulder length, with a shorter fringe. She normally wears her hair drawn into two short pigtails/bunches which are wrapped with cloth from just below her ears to around a quarter of the way down the bunches. They are tied low at each side of her head, ending just touching her shoulders.
Build: Curvy, not thin, but still quite lean due to her combat experience.
Weight: A bit over average for a female of her height
Height: Short, around 5’
Clothing: A grey jacket, cut for a woman rather than a man with the sleeves rolled up. Light tan leggings with straps buckled at her thighs. Thigh-length boots and elbow-length gloves of the same dark material as the boots and straps. She also wears a head-scarf of dark red. Her clothing is generally quite the opposite of Kitt’s, where his is rugged and camouflaged, hers is stylish yet deceptively practical and suited to fighting.
Accessories: A dog tag, the type which is worn by all Slavs from birth. Various pieces of survival equipment in a small bag that she wears strapped to her back by buckles that run around each shoulder (also comprising two scabbards)
Mode of Transportation: Walking
Weapons
Weapons: Two elegant power-blades. These are weapons not often seen, though sometimes carried by bodyguards for SSNP officers. The blades themselves are regular steel, but imbedded with a lattice of rare-earth metals. At the hilt a small generator creates a charge which runs through the lattice, making them crackle and spit lightning as they strike their target.
A long-barrelled revolver pistol, silenced and with recoil dampening.
How they are carried: Her two power-blades are carried in scabbards on her back, using the same straps as her small equipment bag. The pistol is clipped to the straps buckled to her left thigh.
Limitations/Details:
Power-blades are an increasingly rare weapon, though still favoured by many ‘shock-troopers’ or assault teams. The generator in the hilt of each sword is powered by a small gyro which converts movement into stored energy, in this way simply walking, running, and most importantly combat, charges the weapons.
The blades have their electric ‘bite’ activated by the user holding down on a small level built into the grip. When activated the blades emit a low hum, which grows into a sharp sizzling crack when they meet armour or flesh. Sparks run the length of the blades and the target is charred and burnt, armour sliced and sundered.
The largest drawback of the power blades is that they are rather conspicuous when un-sheathed or not hidden. Also, their charge is quickly depleted after only a few strikes, reducing them to normal swords until they are recharged.
Her pistol is low calibre, and used mainly when drawing her power-blades would be too conspicuous or when ranged combat is unavoidable.
Magic
None
Faction
What faction does she belong to?
The ‘Slavs’
How does she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?
Hates them with a deep and bitter vengeance.
How does she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?
All Slavs are mercenary killers and assassins for the Rebels. They fight alongside the RA, simply because they, like the Slavs, want the SSNP destroyed.
How does she feel about the border war?
It is a necessary step in destroying the SSNP. Wherever there is fighting, Katka will be there to sow confusion among the soldiers of the SSNP with a flurry of power-blades and swiftly administered death.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is she?
An assassin and lone wolf, very un-militaristic in her actions, a ‘loose-cannon’.
Where does she serve?
Wherever there are SSNP to be killed.
State her rank.
Among the ‘Slavs’ Katka bears the rank of Poročík (lower than Kitt, due to her recklessness). As with most Slavic slang and terms it is a word that is difficult to pronounce without the distinctive accent that all Slavs still bear.
Life Story
Personality: Reckless, happy-go-lucky and quick-witted. Always has a smart reply and enjoys poking fun at authority. She can sometimes be hot headed, and has quite a short fuse before she will snap at someone.
Bio: Katka is also the child of two Slavs, for marriages and mating only ever occurs between members of the Slav tribe. Most Slavs lose one or more of their parents during their lifetime, simply because of the dangerous nature of their occupation, and as such Katka also lost both parents only a year after birth. They were killed at different times, though this is the most she knows of their deaths, or in fact her parents in general.
Throughout her life Katka remained with a small number of Slavs, growing to hate the SSNP and learning to fight, just as every member of the tribe must. While her recklessness and short temper has gotten her into more trouble than necessary, her quick thinking and unorthodox fighting manners have saved both hers, and other lives.
Faction – ‘The Slavs’
Slavs are a collective group, discriminated and despised by the SSNP; the Slavic tribe maintains a grudge as old as their history. During WW2 the Nazi party always impressed upon its people how the Slavs where considered a racially inferior group, worthy only of en-slavery or extermination...
Also, Slavs are known for dark hair, fair skin (unlike the Aryan blonde hair blue eyes) and this translates over to fur breed too (namely grey-furred Wildcats being predominant among the slavs). That, along with the fact that the group actively fights back and stubbornly continues even after all this time, is why the SSNP strive to kill every last one of them.
While a rare sight in the fight against the SSNP, a Slav is a welcome addition to any Resistance forces. The mere knowledge that one of these zealous fighters is on the battlefield can give the resistance a much needed morale boost. Most of the time however Slavs participate in actions behind enemy lines, assassinations, disruption, and terror tactics are all used to kill and maim SSNP officials and supporters.
Okay, finally found time to finish writing all that/post it :3 Anything that may need changing just say and I will... (Also, I am drawing a quick pic of these two characters, almost finished it, should have that posted by tomorrow :P
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As far as I see now, you're fine. :3
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The planet is Rorn, not Roth.
There is no corrupter class, I think.
Also the rules state you need a second normal character to have an otherworld character, not to mention he is overstepping bounds far too much by being the one to lead Hitler himself. Perhaps a lot more detailed Bio would make his situation more believeable.
Try again, but I'm not sure that I'll even let anyone else in anyway. We already have way too many players. I appreciate that you liked it enough to try out a char sheet, and I'm not being mean to you because you are a newbie or just to be mean, I'm being mean because a strict serious RP requires a heavy handed GM. Please don't kill me if I say no. DX
ok then. the corruptor was a class I made up off the top of my head to suit my charecters needs. thanks for telling me. its not that im new to roleplaying, just that im new to this style of roleplaying. ill try out another charecter, even if im not going to be let in, because I like your concept.
Post Merge: May 08, 2011, 08:26:11 PM
Passcard
Name: Grat-u'ul, chosen of Heimdall
Gender: male
Age: 35
Species: wolf
Appearance: [in a if-you-were-looking-at-him format] before you stands a tall grey wolf, somber faced yet still pervaded with the energy of a young man. his eyes are a deep yellow, playing counterpart to his dark grey fur. an iron chestplate is strapped onto his torso bears the seal of eye placed atop a horn, as well as other small peices of armor on various parts of his body. a helmet rests with its visor open on his head, but the visor itself appears to be an eye such as the one engraved on his armor, with a view slit too small to conventially look out of
Skin/Coloring: grey and dark grey
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: black streaks down back, sheild tatoo on palm of right hand
Eye Color: deep yellow, like dirty gold
Eye style: canine
Hair Color: black
Hair Style:shoulder length straight cut
Build: tall and lightly musculed
Weight: 187 lbs.
Height: 6'2
Clothing: a partial suit of plate armor, and an under-armor suit of dark green cloth
Accessories: a small pendant of and eye, and a plain looking sounding horn
Mode of Transportation: walks everywhere; Grat-u'ul thinks trains, planes, cars, and all other forms of mechanized transportation as unatural beasts fit to be be destroyed, and if that is not possible, avoided
Weapons
Weapons: a large steel warhammer, a long knife for skinning game
How they are carried: [knife] on belt sheath, [warhammer] on back holster
Limitations/Details: the warhammer is enchanted to deal blows of epic amounts of crushing force, but is raather useless at close ranges due to the length of its haft. the knife is also enchanted to find holes in its targets armor, but is equally useless against unarmored foes, as it has no armor to seek out weakness in
Magic: none
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: none
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: that they are mighty warriors, not evil, just strong
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: that they are the same as the SSNP, not good, just strong
How does he/she feel about the border war?: that it is a cowards way of showing defience
How did this character come to work alone?: after his homeworld collapsed in the fires of Ragnarok, he found himself cut off from his former comrades, as well as his entire pantheon. he wandered the shattered wastes of his world untill he found the dying god Heimdall, keeper of the rainbow bridge. there, Heimdall promptley conjured him a set of items that would allow Grat-u'ul to take his place as the guardian of a now-dead Asgard. with no friends or family left, he is alone in the universe
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories? : he is gennarly ignored by most factions, seeing that he stays out of the war.
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? np
Life story: born in the middle earth on the great tree of Yggdrasil, Grat-u'ul was the son of a powerful jarl of one of the larger clans. he lived his life in realitive comfort, untill the cycle of Ragnarok consumed his world. alongside his fellow clansmen, he charged off to battle alongside his gods to stave off the end of the world. in the battle that followed, he was the sole survivor. after being gifted by Heimdall with his magical items, he went off to find the rainbow bridge before landing on Rorn.
notes:
-Grat-u'ul dosnt know that Yggdrasil reformed and that Ragnarok is a repeating cycle, so his homeworld still exists
-his helmet, with its visor lowered, gives him the power to see into the future. not a complete vision, but instead bits and pieces. it litterally gives him a view of what he sees will be in the future. after walking through rebel camps with the visor, he has seen walking corpses, showing the grim future of the men he sees.
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Passcard
Name: Syd Rivet Arthurs
Gender: Female
Age: Seems to be a young adult.
Species: Canine hybrid
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any): http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5709544 (left top and bottom with colors like http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5546358/ ) I’ll finish coloring the sketches and get it on this sheet soon. She has no breasts.
Skin/Coloring: Yellow orange underbelly that goes to under her muzzle with red orange fur, red back fur. Yellow fur around her neck and on her paws.
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: Red coloring under her eyes in a spattered / freckled shape, peach color eye marks above her eyes. Her claws are yellow green. The front of her muzzle fades from yellow orange to that peach color.
Eye Color: Emerald green.
Eye style: Emerald green with a darker ring around the pupil. Pupil is a darker green than the iris, not black. Her eyes always seem to have a crazed look in them.
Hair Color: Red, yellow, peach, orange, yellow orange, red orange.
Hair Style: Dreadlocks.
Build: Has a bigger frame and a little chub on her, but she’s not fat.
Weight: 200lbs.
Height: 5’11”
Clothing: Cloth wraps around her arms along with a small tactical corset / loincloth combo.
Accessories: A molar dangles from one of her horns by a red string, she tends to have various bone jewelry sometimes.
Mode of Transportation: Usually by foot, she’s somewhat like a free runner in the environment, but she won’t turn down a ride or anything that can quicken her pace.
Weapons
Weapons: Primarily she uses her magic and claws, but she also uses various crude daggers or blades with poisoned tips.
How they are carried: Syd generally carries her blades anywhere she can hide.
Limitations/Details: Obviously they are only useful in close quarter combat.
Magic
Class: Witch.
Calling: She tends to lean toward spells that are deceptive, and serve with helping her hide or poisoning others.
List and describe all spells: - Distraction - Causes an illusion to distract the enemy temporarily. Does not cause damage.
- Cloak of Shadows - Shadows in the area intensify, even night vision cannot pierce them. Only the spell caster is able to see. Does not cause damage.
- Sense Motive - The user can detect the motive of another person. Does not cause damage.
- Blood summon - The spell caster sacrifices blood to summon a creature to fight. The more blood, the more powerful the creature.
- Envenom - A contact spell that causes the enemy to be poisoned on touch.
Limitations: Well, again, most are for close quarters combat and are not heavy spells.
Breaks: Can only increase power with certain rituals or relics.
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?
N/A
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?
She’s not necessarily loyal to them, but they often provide her with job opportunities.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?
Again, she isn’t very concerned with them unless they offer a job. They hire her occasionally to steal things from the SSNP or to divulge information about the SSNP.
How does he/she feel about the border war?
More opportunities to be useful. She’ll have a place for herself no matter how it ends up, so she doesn’t particularly care.
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone?
See her bio.
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories?
She has a few enemies, but generally, she is tolerated as a necessary evil. She seems to have connections in most areas that she is in. Her tribe considers her a disgrace and will not associate with her. She has no set home, so she relies on her connections to house her or she stays out in the wilderness.
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them?
Of course, she already does this frequently.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only. (I figure I need to do this to describe when she works with the SSNP)
What Type of soldier is he or she?
Deemed a “Bloodhound.” It’s not anything official, but a title reserved for highly skilled trackers.
Where does he/she serve?
Generally wherever the SSNP sends her. She’s a free spirit. :B
State his or her rank or job.
Seems to be something similar to an officer. Her job is to track and lead small parties of soldiers to targets to dispose of.
Life Story
Personality: Manipulative, sometimes sadistic. Tends to play people against one another for her own benefit. Loves being “in action” and useful. Like most characters in this RP, has a somewhat soft spot for most children (as in, children with manners that aren’t brats, ect. Ect. Good kids. Think Gene Wylder in Willy Wonka.). She seems to have turned to her lifestyle due to not having any other ways to use her talents. Also has an obsession with teeth and dentistry.
Bio: Syd was one of the few natives who became interested with the new residence on Rorn. There was something about what was forbidden that peaked her interest about them. Her tribe was considered to be one of the more modern tribes, however, they didn’t hesitate to cast out Syd when her curiosity got the best of her and she began to associate herself with these new people. Syd’s reputation in her tribe was prided on her uncanny ability to track targets and her high intelligence in comparison to the others in her tribe.
More of a rogue-type warrior and a theif, the SSNP took interest in Syd when she was able to outdo some of their very own officers in terms of tracking and leading. Unofficially, she was able to work her way up into the SSNP’s ranks, hired to find cells of Rebel Alliance soldiers, and other various enemies including other natives. While she isn’t a real officer in the SSNP, she is treated with the same respect as one when she gets involved with them.
Syd is more or less like a hired mercenary, going where she can flourish rather than allowing loyalty to decide who she associates with. It is not uncommon for her to also take jobs from others (including stealing things from the SSNP for the RA); however, her top employer tends to be the SSNP for obvious reasons. She hasn’t ventured too much into the RA area aside from when the SSNP directs her to that area and all areas generally accept her as a necessary evil with the exception of her own tribe.
I hope this is okay. Let me know if I need to change something.
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Seems slightly overpowered, but not too much, so she could make for an interesting fight, like a boss. Please define 'seems to be a young adult' for me, also curious because if she is she could not have become interested right when the others came to her world as it is hundreds of years ago.
But pretty good. You're in, just satisfy my curiosities pwease.
Post Merge: May 08, 2011, 10:50:04 PM
@LordFeline: I will think about it and see what I can do with you. I may not let you in for the simple fact the others were on reserve, you came at last minute, and I have way too many people, but I might decide to give you a chance. Give me time. I have homework to finish. :3
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@LordFeline: I will think about it and see what I can do with you. I may not let you in for the simple fact the others were on reserve, you came at last minute, and I have way too many people, but I might decide to give you a chance. Give me time. I have homework to finish. :3
thanks for even considering it
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Okay, here be another one. Tell me if anything seems overpowered....I kept feeling like there were things that are... :S
Passcard
Name: Dante
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Species: Border Collie
Appearance: Generally sports a cloak that covers his clothes and face.
Ref Pictures (if you have any): Clicky. (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/829/art004g.jpg/)
Skin/Coloring: White. Fur covers it though.
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: None
Eye Color: Left: Blue, Right: Green.
Eye style: Canine.
Hair Color: No hair
Hair Style: No hair
Build: Skinny.
Weight: 180
Height: 6’9”
Clothing: Clicky (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/829/art004g.jpg/) (Minus the hat.)
Accessories: Silver necklace with a cross pendant
Mode of Transportation: Motorcycle if allowed? Most likely walking if not.
Weapons
Weapons: Two magnums and a mixed Martial arts. He’s a good shot and good in hand to hand combat.
Limitations/Details: His two magnums only hold six rounds a piece so he can’t pump out rounds at a rapid rate. And his hand to hand skills are well…Hand to hand. He can strike pressure points to render targets immobile, or their limbs numb.
His guns: Two of these big things. (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/263/trigunn.jpg/)
Magic
Class: Angel
Calling: Chants and concentration.
List and describe all spells: - Healing hands: Dante envelopes his hands in an aura of healing energy. It can heal most wounds. Though the greater the wound the more the healing hurts the patient and the longer it takes.
- Seal: Dante charges a holy energy in his hand, channeling it to his finger tips. Upon hitting someone in the chest with it, it will temporarily prevent them from using any source of magic. Those with a weaker strength and physique will sometimes be knocked out, along with those with a large amount of sin.
- Divine protection: Using the power of the above Dante can create a dome of energy that can cast away those with a large amount of sin(Like if there are within the field of protection they will be launched away) and deflect most any projectile.
- Banish: Dante concentrates holy energy in his palm to banish those with massive amounts of sin.
Limitations: Dante’s magic is all, for the exception of his shield, a contact spell. So they can be pretty easy to dodge.
Breaks: Most of his spells take a toll on his stamina, which will drastically fatigue him. One such ability would be Banish. This one would take fatigue him to near exhaustion, the best he would be able to do after using it would be to walk.
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: None, he’s somewhat a vagabond.
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: He has a great disposition for the SSNP, as he regards them as evil. Most of them anyway.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: He is fine with them for the most part.
How does he/she feel about the border war? He remains in favor of the natives and rebels fighting for peace and their land. He doesn’t sympathize with the SSNP.
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? Possibly.
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only.
What Type of soldier is he or she? N/A
Where does he/she serve? N/A
State his or her rank or job. N/A
Life Story
Personality: Dante is a righteous man, he is kind to a point but will do what it takes to get the job done.
Bio: Dante grew up in an orphanage in a Nazi city. His father was very, very abusive to both him and his mother. At a young age he discovered he couldn’t feel pain, or anything relating to touch. He found this out when he first defended his mother from his father. His father eventually killed his mother and as a result he was taken into an orphanage. He left the orphanage when he was sixteen to travel the world. He trained with a variety of monks and gunslingers in his travels. He picked up several skills and abilities over the years and continues to wander the world seemingly without a goal to better fulfill himself in wisdom and experience.
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Seems slightly overpowered, but not too much, so she could make for an interesting fight, like a boss. Please define 'seems to be a young adult' for me, also curious because if she is she could not have become interested right when the others came to her world as it is hundreds of years ago.
But pretty good. You're in, just satisfy my curiosities pwease.
Post Merge: May 08, 2011, 10:50:04 PM
@LordFeline: I will think about it and see what I can do with you. I may not let you in for the simple fact the others were on reserve, you came at last minute, and I have way too many people, but I might decide to give you a chance. Give me time. I have homework to finish. :3
Well, when I say seems young adult, she looks to be a young adult, I'd say she's around 19 at the youngest and 24 at the oldest, but I can change it to where she generally she took an interest in something her tribe didn't like. I didn't realize it was that long ago. What else do I need to change about her? I had assumed that her only being effective in close quarters could be a very big weakness for her, especially given most people she works with use guns (SSNP). Other than that, she has to use climbing and other things to stay out of sight. The only thing that does surefire heavy damage is her claws, she's more of a sneak up and slit your throat kind of person rather than direct confrontation. Or is it just her influence and role?
I may not have made it clear, but like, she doesn't command a whole army, it's like, the SSNP would send her out with maybe 5-10 soldiers in a band when she does a job. She only has the respect of an officer, not the actual commanding power, if that makes sense. Like, she couldn't make decisions concerning the war or anything like that unless it concerned action on her target, ect. unless you wanted her to have that much power, then I'm willing to play the part that way. It's up to you.
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You don't have to change anything about her magic or abilities or influence, was only curious and wanted to clear up the age matter. And her influence is fine as it is, but she could become more powerful and influental to the war later. She's good as is.
@Cuddles: Seems good to me, only thing I see is that his class would be Angel if he was into cleric and healing.
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Okie doke, I wasn't sure if I was doing something wrong or not is all. >_>
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An angel? o.O
Hmm...Maybe I could have trained with them? I didn't think that healing abilities would be exclusively to angels. Iunno...Classifying it as angelic might not be too bad. I'll change it.
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Well no cleric and healing is not only to angels, Angel is just the name of the class! XD doesn't literally mean angel, it's just a class title lolllz
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Alrighty then >_<
So I can has motorcycle? :3
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This is looking real good :D can't wait for it to start, are we allowed to bring in characters after the rp starts?
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@Sain: I'm not too sure about new players, but if you meant characters you can have up to three as well as controlling your personal tribe if you have one.
@Cuddles: Yes you may have it just you people with motorcycles better not get all annoying vroom vroom jump over the light rail bridge off a ramp vroom vroom epic circle while shooting weapon.....lol. At least not randomly don't do that. XD
As for a note on ground vechicles and motorcycles, they are not like modern ones. They look a lot more like a light cycle from Tron (though of course they don't operate like one), and hover about two feet off the ground. futuristic hovercraft vechicles, basically.
As for the light rail, it is suspended nine hundred fifty feet of the ground on it's rail the whole way....picture the light rail traveling along something a bit taller than this bridge (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mike_O'Callaghan_%E2%80%93_Pat_Tillman_Memorial_Bridge (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mike_O'Callaghan_%E2%80%93_Pat_Tillman_Memorial_Bridge)), except always that high, never going downhill or meeting land except when stopping at a town or special exceptions like brushing along cliffs taller than it. It is so high above the land to protect it from Rebel attacks, and the rail supports are so thick and fortified (with magic) it is almost impossible to bust them.
Sorry if I'm spouting way too much information to keep track of. Just have a very clear comic book world in my mind, feel like sharing all the time >.>
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You make me think of the bridge off Shadow of the Colossus.
http://lh6.ggpht.com/_J1Y2Gif69BA/SMssRJNe7JI/AAAAAAAAFrY/1wOJ-U3hGo0/SotC.jpg
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Aww...No Harleys then? :(
Iunno...The idea of your vehicles are cool, but I was kinda picturing Dante with less futurey things. >>
Also, Dante has a pet ferret if that's cool. I forgot to mention that. <<
Sorry for my crazyness. x_x
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Yes! :O what a pretty bridge
Post Merge: May 09, 2011, 12:48:54 AM
the ferret is fine.
and well, even if you had a harley (idk from where so far into the future and away from Earth)...it wouldn't work so well on these roads >.> they aren't exactly paved or well-tread even. would be hard to ride a bike from today on them
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I was wondering how abundant the demons are, and if there would be a hunting board (think of monster hunter if you ever played that) basically there is a board with a list if demons people want killed. I was just wondering because this would help determine how my character acts in the role play.
Also how are the relations with the demons, like are some good and amount people or are there good tribes, or are they all hated/feared
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Demons, unless they are of high rank and can think for themselves enough to function in a society or be contracted by that society, are considered monsters. Your character would not be considered a monster. But for those who are, they ARE put on a kill board after someone in a town has spotted them, like in Final Fantasy, people can be sent on quests to kill certain monsters or demons. There are not many demons, but enough to be a scary threat for travelers.
High ranking demons who can think for themselves are basically their own person. They can choose to represent the realm they came from (Hecht or Deilm), they can be evil, they can be good or can do something different. They have a lot more free will than other types from the other worlds.
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Alright I think I get it >_> not to many just enough to be cautious
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Yes sir! *salutes*
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If it helps, Freya/Lana can be put in the soldier group, since she is ment for active combat duty :3
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That would make sense...go ahead and do that. And I love how we have 5 pages of OOC in like two days but haven't even started...
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That would make sense...go ahead and do that. And I love how we have 5 pages of OOC in like two days but haven't even started...
well, you could make 2 Atreju RP topics that have condensending events, with a second GM to manage the second topic. this could allow for more people who signed up here to play. all the reserve/pending charecters could go into the second topic.
he reason this is so popular is because EVERYONE LOVES SPACE NAZIS
im serious.
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Well, yeah, space Nazis are smexy. While I can make two roleplays I don't think I can make a second OOC or second set. And everyone on that list can play if they want to. They were original voters in the voting topic and friends. While I am open to new players, I take priority to those who I started out with. XD I've been roleplaying here forever it's like pretty amazing to be able to do such a major RP, feels great. I'm sure everything will work out fine.
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Well, yeah, space Nazis are smexy. While I can make two roleplays I don't think I can make a second OOC or second set. And everyone on that list can play if they want to. They were original voters in the voting topic and friends. While I am open to new players, I take priority to those who I started out with. XD I've been roleplaying here forever it's like pretty amazing to be able to do such a major RP, feels great. I'm sure everything will work out fine.
I know how you feel. back on the BL forums, I ran a hyper-sucessful RP called DELVE, but it was so popular I could only manage 5 charecters at a time. im serious, look it up if you dont belive me.
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@LordFeline: Successful RPs for the win! It's because we are amazing GMs.
I decided to give your second character only a test drive. The first one has still not been fixed. That is, you may play. But like anyone else here if I start seeing annoying coming from you I will yell and boot like the mean RP Nazi I am. Trust me, I've seen plenty of annoying in roleplayers before, and the only reason I never yelled at them was because I was trying to be a super nice friendly GM. ... no more missus nice chinchilla. XD
Post Merge: May 09, 2011, 06:12:21 PM
Time for the posting order. This is our current posting order, totally random. It will of course change when the reserved spots show up. If I forgot you, please raise your hand.
Done! The RP is up! GET TO POSTING YOU SCUM! XD jkjk
Me
Srgntcuddles
Kitt
Emrelda Triplemoon
Macid
Mortis Reptus
LordFeline
Entaru
Self-Sain
Serpington
Chrono
Gabag
Reserve: Koda, Hunter Tier
Post Merge: May 09, 2011, 08:58:30 PM
It's recommended that you work on a post while waiting for your turn, as our posts are going to take more writing than for past RPs of mine, then edit accordingly as you see posts, as you go along. Then you'll be prepared right when your turn comes and won't have to spen a lot of time on it. Since we have TEN (holy CROWS) members and two day max waiting already that means plenty of time for you to prepare.
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Yay it's up. Also posting so it will show up as a new message for peeps so they know to get started! 0:)
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Lordfeline, its not your turn buddy. its Kitt's.
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It isn't your turn, like he said. So you don't loose what you wrote you can copy paste and save it in Word, but this RP has a posting order, where you follow turns, going after the person above you like I showed in the list. Please delete the post.
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turns? what madness is this?
k .ill delete it. so the turns go in the order of the above player list?
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Yes, so you are after Mortis. :3
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excellent. is my style of writing to the standerds of this roleplay?
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Yes you write fine. Not going to get to into writing wars. XD lol
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Katie you may want to skip Kitt this once because he is busy with his school, so if you want to get this moving you may want to consider it
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What kind of animals are there? are they similar to animals we know like squirrels or rats?
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He did say he was okay with his spot, but just this one I can skip. Sorry Kitt :C
---> skip Kitt
Post Merge: May 10, 2011, 06:24:55 AM
There are native beasts that are formidable like monsters, and animal types that we know too, like cats and dogs and birds. all kinds of shapes and sizes of beast
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You think I would pass THIS up...I think not!
Passcard
Name: Entaru "Needles" Korin
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Species: Artic Fox
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any):
Skin/Coloring: Silver fur
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors:Black stripe down his nose and a white furred belly
Eye Color: Emerald Green
Eye style: Predatory
Hair Color:None...just fur
Hair Style:N/A
Build: Gangly
Weight: 179 lbs
Height: 6'3"
Clothing: Nazi Officer's Trenchcoat with Officer's Uniform
Accessories: Black ring with a ruby, a diamond, and a sapphire embedded into it.
Mode of Transportation: Often chauffeured by a military escort in an armored vehicle. Otherwise on foot. Rare occasions will see him in a lightly armored mechanical walker.
Weapons
Weapons: Laser Pistol, custom "Freddy Kruger" style gloves with syringes on fingers, vials of posionous liquids and gasses.
How they are carried:The pistol is carried in a holster on his side,underneath his trenchcoat. The gloves are attatched to his belt in such a way that he can simply slide them on. The vials are either carried in the gloves or in the small pouches that line his belt.
Limitations/Details: Pistol is medium range, medium-low accuracy but high damage. Requires highly radioactive energy cells, one cell is equivalent to 50 shots. Will last a LONG time if maintained properly. Ill maintenece may cause dangerous malfunctions, destroying them gun as well as severely damaging the wielder. Gloves are closequarters only and syringes break if hit too hard. Vials break on impact with ground or when damaged.
Magic
Class: Witch
Calling: Only employs posions. These are created inside Entaru's body which he extracts with his syringes and places them in vials to be used at later times. He is immune to his own poisons because of this..other poisons however, he is only slightly resistant to.
List and describe all spells: Dart Skin (always active)-Excesses of magical posions and acid build up in Entaru's skin and organs which can be removed and used as weapons.
Limitations: Can be a severe handicap if poisons are not removed for a period of time. Can cause hallucinations, vomiting, debilitating cramps, dangerously high fevers, dehydration, and the air around him becomes toxic to passersby.
Breaks: N/A
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: SSNP
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: Sworn allegiance
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: Sheer contempt for the rebels and their leaders.
How does he/she feel about the border war?: Has no real opinion as he is more focused on the Rebels.
What Type of soldier is he or she?: Officer
Where does he/she serve?: Spends most of his time serving in Nil, but occasionally is sent to Chancey to deal with paticularly large problems.
State his or her rank or job.: Major
Life Story
Personality: Incredibly cold and spiteful, incredibly quick to condemn those who he feels are cowards or sympathizers. Rarely seen smiling unless speaking with a superior, torturing a POW, or in the presence of small children.
Bio: Born into a military family, Entaru was surprisingly unwilling to join the SSNP. Instead he spent his time farming grapes for wine and building a family. He was a happy man with a loving family who worked on SSNP soil. His land however was close to the borders of the forests. The natives, in an attempt to take back stolen land, pushed through the borders and attacked the small province in which Entaru worked. His farm was destroyed and his family of a wife and 3 children murdered. That very night, after slaugthering the natives who attacked his home, he made a pact with a demon of Deilm. The demon made him a walking nightmare, an aura of fear surrounding him at all times and terrible poisons dripping from every pore. His nickname, "Needles," is spoken in a hushed tone as those who have crossed him have met terrible ends. He shortly joined the military and progressed through the ranks due to both skill and fear from his higher ups that behind his smile lay a forked tongue laiden with innumerable tortures.
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Pffft finally.
Sure whatever you are good and I'll put you in the posting order. X3 Being my mate, I hope mister powerful pact Entaru won't incredibly annoy me right? Right. Okay. Enough said.
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Its no worries... I was asleep at the time XP Darn you time zones...
And like I told Katie, I'm now on a study leave, which means I dont have to go in to school :3 (though I do need to revise for exams coming up soon) but that should give me some more freedom with when I post...
Oh, that and I just finished my coursework and handed it in! ^_^ finally...
Anyway, Imha post now as it seems Katie just switched me and cuddles round.
edit: Yo Entaru! :P long time no see!
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Kitt and Entaru ftw
Post Merge: May 10, 2011, 07:07:53 PM
Emrelda posts after Kitt naow, and so on...:3 We will get the hang of it. Because I can understand and can predict how frustrating it will be to wait for nine people before you get to say one thing, this posting order is not permanent. Once we have gotten established that we are ready to commit and do this thing, I will close the RP save for special reserves and get rid of the posting order.
It's just that for now I think it helps, while we slowly get into it...
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when are we going to get rid of the posting order? its kind of bugging me how I cant post my bits of story right after I write them.. oh. ok, well im ready to commit to playing this right now.
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Pffft finally.
Sure whatever you are good and I'll put you in the posting order. X3 Being my mate, I hope mister powerful pact Entaru won't incredibly annoy me right? Right. Okay. Enough said.
Entaru be good....or bad...or good at bad....whatever. XP
edit: Yo Entaru! :P long time no see!
Yo! Been busy lately.
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one of the 'owners' of my characters sister was a famous, insane scientist because I knew you probably wanted to keep the Military leaders for a bit longer.
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Honestly, I know it's hard, but I don't think we should get rid of the order. I don't like being left behind.
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We would have a limit on posts per person per day to prevent that, as I know people, especially me, could get sucked in and just keep playing and leave all behind. It's just that I can already predict how a posting order with this many people would be unfair. If our characters are close together, especially fighting or something, you can't react right away to something someone said or did, you'd have to wait your turn and by the time that rolled around you could no longer say what you wanted to say, in fact the battle might be over entirely or completely changed by the time it's your turn. I only want to give people the opportunity to post right away, but not to a point others are left behind in the dust.
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I would die without a posting order......Not to mention probably leave. I seriously do not enjoy free post...
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one of the 'owners' of my characters sister was a famous, insane scientist because I knew you probably wanted to keep the Military leaders for a bit longer.
Going good so far. Just remember to take your time. Slow writing in posts is good. :D
Post Merge: May 11, 2011, 12:46:08 AM
I would die without a posting order......Not to mention probably leave. I seriously do not enjoy free post...
How come? I understand in smaller groups but it is simply very difficult for me to consider with this many people. Please, tell me your reasoning so I understand.
Post Merge: May 11, 2011, 12:59:31 AM
Honestly, I know it's hard, but I don't think we should get rid of the order. I don't like being left behind.
I'm not saying we shouldn't keep the posting order, I'm open to it if players like it enough, I just really need an explanation of how a posting order doesn't leave one even further behind...And, of course, our players will have to follow the example of paying attention to everyone involved with their character in their posts instead of just ignoring a character because someone else whose turn was next wanted to say something too....and 0_o maybe I'm over thinking it but a posting order worries me. Then again, free post worries me too. T.T
Thoughts, people, please.
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Wave posting?
I'm not to sure it will be hard, only if we are all in the same area. But I'm thinking if we are in diffrent places, it should be fine some what at least. I would like wave insted of an order, but maybe I'm saying that because I'm at the end and getting a bit bored :/, but I think it would do better for people with the time zone and schedule problems.
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That was going to be my other suggestion. Wave posting. Katie posts first, then it's first come first serve until Katie posts again, assuming she waits for everyone to post. Though, it's not been too successful in my own RPs so far.
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oh okay...I could always make a vote about it if nessacary.....I'm hesitant about all three of them T.T
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Basically, the GM posts, and everyone scrambles to make their first post, else they would have to alter their entry to fit what the previous person put in.
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It's understandable.
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I dont care either way
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The only bad thing about it is when two people are both waiting on each other to post.
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*curls up in a ball and rocks* what to pick...what to pick.......
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self-sain has a good point. I used to play this roleplay called reds at the border, and I had my charecter in a group with another guys, and that would have been immpossible in this posting order thing.
and what if the person somewhere ahead of you takes WAY to long to post. I would ideally like to get through the cycle once a day.
I know I already stated my opinion, I was just putting additional information to back.
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Hmn, we do have a lot of people... and that makes a fixed post order difficult like many people have said...
Then again, free posting would lead to people very quickly becoming left behind...
Personally, I might be for the wave posting. That way nobody gets left behind (everyone only posts once inbetween each of Katie's posts) and the RP keeps going and has more momentum (people can post whenever they are online and have time)...
Thats just my opinion though :P
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Rigor pulled off a wave posting type thing. Where everyone posts with no particular order but they can't post more than once until a certain person posts again. I wasn't bothered with that.
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Getting a lot of good feedback. So, no objections with eventually switching to a wave post, right? With me being the lead of course.
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I will live. 0:)
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Wait, so does it mean I have to wait until everyone posts before posting again? Or is everyone supposed to scramble between a set time that I'll usually post at?
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Usually, you'll wait for everyone to post to post again.
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Like...Rigor would post. Then everyone else in the RP will post, in whatever order, once. Then Rigor will post again and start the other players posting again.
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*it finally crawls into my slow mind* okay...thanks.
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Yay for first posts!
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Poor rabbit... :(
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Heheheh....yeah >:3
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*it finally crawls into my slow mind* okay...thanks.
So does this mean I can post right now, or do I still wait on my turn?
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The first two times we'll do a posting order to see that we are all here and functioning. After that, i will close the rp and replace the posting order with the other wave method.
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sounds cool Katie
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I see. what is this "other wave" method of which you speak?
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What type of religious groups are their.
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I will post, wait for everyone else to post once in whatever order they want, then post again, then wait again, etc.
Post Merge: May 12, 2011, 01:18:06 PM
What type of religious groups are their.
There is a Catholic-like group amoung the Nazis, the native tribes have a religion based off of the stars or else the land, there is a cult of magic worshippers and scholars, there is a church (both in rebel and Nazi territory) for each of the other worlds, and some of the Nazis follow a sort of cult that looks back in time and worships the old ways of beauty, order and 'purity.'
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So should we post again after you post this round? Because I'm quite lost on the posting order as of now. It changed. :S
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>.> The first two rounds we go by the posting order, then I close the rp and we begin the wave thing after my third post. So yes, we go by the order the first two times, and the third time I post you guys can begin the wave posting, which gets rid of the order.
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So yeah, I went and did a quick pic of my two characters :P As good an excuse for drawing as any :3
Link of it in my art thread: http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=9543.msg737540#new (http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=9543.msg737540#new)
... Or if you cant be bothered to go over there, I'l go ahead and put it here for ya ;)
(http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/132/4/6/the_resistance_by_slovakcat-d3g6e9a.jpg)
About an hour or two work inbetween revision for exams XP
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That's super cool :D As I said, beautiful and captures the mood of this RP perfectly.
You should seriously do some guest art for me once I get the final webcomic version of this going. :3 And speaking of which I should start drawing some of my favorite characters here, as some of your chars may get a role in the webcomic. Just a quick question though: My webcomic version is mostly human, none of you are going to kill me if I draw a human ('neko' except not necessarily cat) version of your character, right?
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Nah I'd be cool with it. Though...True would be weird. >>
Considering he harbors a psychotic split personality. <<
But yeah. Nice drawing, Kitt!
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Passcard
Name: Charles Delacroix
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Species: Human
Appearance: Small frame, but tahts what gives him his speed
Ref Pictures (if you have any): http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g85/302385/302385_1283360273_large.jpg
Skin/Coloring: White
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: see picture for his arm tatoos
Eye Color: Green
Eye style: Normal i guess?
Hair Color:No hair
Hair Style: no hair
Build: Light build, built for SPEED!
Weight: 150 lbs.
Height: 6'0
Clothing: Flak jacket without sleeves for full use of his arms, the mask he's wearing, and some sweatpants with shoes with good grips
Accessories:
Mode of Transportation: Foot for the most part, unless the destination is REALLY FAR AWAY!
Weapons: Stormcaller, magic sniper rifle. He carries a 10 round clip sniper rifle using some pretty heavy ammunition, .223 rounds with a well sighted scope. The rifle itself isn't 'magical' persay but it tips the bullets with a special magic essence, that when before the target, if Charles chooses, will explode into a cloud of shrapnel.
Twin digital cameoskinned (green) Tokmak high magazine pistols.
One Kukri
Weapons:
How they are carried: Stormcaller is slung across his back, the Tokmaks are placed in holsters on Charle's midsection (so in a hurry he can draw them quickly) and the kukri is in a sheath that's tied flat to his back (so he pulls the hilt and whips it out of the sheath)
Limitations/Details: He has no magical ability whatsoever. This is due to him belonging to a rare breed of humans known as 'Pariahs'. They can't use magic either due to genetics or their families escaping from the Nazi's during their original settlement in the world, as such they would never have been 'blessed' with magic. He's a deadeye with most weaponry, but there's a catch. If he stands still, he can shoot the wings off a fly with a pistol round at maximum range, however when on the move, his accuracy is not as impressive, and shots go wide or miss their mark.
Faction: Loner
What faction does he/she belong to?:
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: They see him as a target to be killed on sight and he would like to return the favor with their people.
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: He doesn't really follow their ideals, but he does work with them on occasion as a freelance merc.
How does he/she feel about the border war?: If he can profit from it, let them kill each other.
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone?: He was once apart of the failed 'Skirmisher' program that was held by the Rebels. An idea to train snipers who were highly mobile, that mobility being in the form of parkour. Before the program lifted off, the base was attacked by Nazis during a border skirmish and most of the troops were killed. Charles is one of the survivors.
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories? He gets merc contracts for third parties and the odd Rebel alliance job. He's generally accepted in the seedier areas in the Nazi empire and rebel bases, but if he ever went to the capital the military would be all over him.
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them?: He works with the rebels on occasion
This following part is for chars who are members of a military or armed force only. (can i put some characteristics in this, because he has a military background. and he works with Rebels)
What Type of soldier is he or she?: A Skirmisher. A highly mobile sniper unit capable of picking off targets then quickly relocating.
Where does he/she serve?: Wherever the contract demands.
State his or her rank or job.: Marksman.
Life Story
Personality: Charles, as a result to seeing his entire unit wiped out, grew to have a cynical world view and is incredibly sarcastic. He lost a lot of faith in the world, especially with the Nazis. However for the few things and people he likes, he is a devoted friend, albeit complaining a lot.
Bio: Charle's ancestors were apart of the original settlement wave, however they hated the Nazis and what they stood for, and as soon as they got to ground, they fled with other refugees. At first they were shunned by the Natives, but after seeing the Nazis, soon came to accept these refugee humans. They offered these humans magic if they helped oppose the Nazis, many accepted, but Charle's ancestors did not, after seeing what magic did to people. This mindset has remained a tradition among the Delacroix family for countless generations. They still fought the Nazis, however in the traditional guns only sense.
Fast forward a couple hundred years.
Charles always hated the Nazis, like the rest in the Delacroix family. He originally signed on for the Alliance, and his athleticism was noted for operators of the Skirmisher program and he was sent to train. The training was brutal. Disregarding the fact that parkour itself is a tough strain on the body, it also included marksmen tests against LIVE Nazi Targets. He was sent on training missions to help his other trainees to ambush convoys or patrols sent to the border, and it seemed to be successful. The blundering troops could not keep up with the highly mobile snipers. That all changed with the Raid. It happened quickly, in the dead of night, Nazi troops rolled in and started shooting the place up and burning down the camp. Because the sniper's strength lies in surprise, they were cut down, except for the few who either got up quickly, or were already out of camp on an assignment.
Seeing his associates and friends all killed chilled him to the core, he decided he would not be a full member of the alliance, and to his anger, knew only skills of war. He eventually found a use for them as a gun for hire, and today remains one of the deadliest shots the Alliance knows of.
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Looks really good, Gabag. I like it. I'll put you on the end of the list for these first two rounds, so you'll be after Chrono. After these first two rounds, the posting order will be gone, to repeat myself.
Post Merge: May 12, 2011, 11:03:18 PM
I informed Hunter to post here first and delete his post in the game...>.>
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I like it, Kitt. Makes me think my character's a bit too bright for all of this. Been working on her reference, but for some reason I don't feel motivated. This is what I have so far, though, she's more.. Chibi? I guess you could say here.
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j82/molinamaniac/WIPS/NewSyd.png (without her clothing)
I'm not entirely sure how I'd feel about her as a neko. >>
I might sketch and see if I can come up with a neko version I'd like.
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She does not have to be a neko...I just meant more along the lines of human skin and hair with animal tails or ears or whatnot when I said 'neko.' But if you want to sketch out your ideal version that's okay too :D I kind of like her as a furry too, so maybe she could be an exception to the all human/neko rule since she could be a native species that is fur-like.
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I'll see what I can come up with. :P
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Can't wait to see it :D Mortis art ftw
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So should I post now...? I'm after Hunter, but...Did he like reserve that spot or something? >>
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Passcard
Name: Tier
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Species: Vulpa a race of anthro. fox creatures who have a split lower jaw that acts like mandables. They possess a secondary extendable mouth that has a reach up to two feet from thier snout.
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any): (http://www.furrytofurry.com/furry/picture.php?albumid=1664&pictureid=11660) Try not to laugh too hard. I am not an artist.
Skin/Coloring:Grey
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors: Tattoo marking rank of Vulpine Hunter Knight on both upper arms (image comming soon... as soon as I can figure out how to load pictures into the computer by myself....) Tattoos of three triangles on each side of muzzle. Tattoo of numbers Five Four Five (545) on right pex. Knife slash on forehead going diagionally up from left eyebrow to right side of brow of head. (.... Yes like Squall from FF8... I think I have a picture.) Gunshot wound in left side upper chest (shoulder), upper back, left thigh, and right side above hip. Various cuts and slash marks from knives on arms. Diagional slash from right shoulder to left hip. Two stab wounds on toreso, one under right pex, one near center of chest. Vairous small knife slashes on both legs. Stab wound above right knee.
Eye Color: Brown
Eye style: ecliptical
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: High and tight
Build: Athletically muscled
Weight: 155
Height: 5.9'
Clothing: One (1) black Waffen SS Uniform.
Accessories: One (1) Ruck pack and equip (see U.S.M.C. standards for scout version of the ruck pack and equip).
Mode of Transportation: Train, foot, or tank.
Weapons
Weapons: One (1) STG assualt rifle. One (1) Walter P.38 pistol. One (1) combat knife. Five (5) grenades.
How they are carried: Assualt rifle; on shoulder sling. Pistol; in holster on right hip. Knife; in holster on left hip. Grenades; in bandoleer circleing richt shoulder looping down to left hip.
Limitations/Details: Travels relitevely light for combat and manuvering purposes.
Magic
Class: N/A
Calling: N/A
List and describe all spells: N/A
Limitations: N/A
Breaks: N/A
Faction Nazi Military; sergeant.
Life Story
Persionality: Tier works for a paycheck. He doesn't care about what's "good" or "evil" as long as he is getting paied he doesn't care. Killing people is just part of the job to him as it's what he does best. If he can get by saving ammunition be stomping in the head of a youth or a prisoner he will. He comes off as cold and remorceless though some claim that he does have moments of humanity in offering mercy killings and the fact that he is a devout follower of the "One Life for Many" cause. Simply put, he will not negotiate a hostage, and he will not hesitate to kill someone who is causing a problem. Tier kills for three reasons; 1. If someone is posing a direct threat to him or the people he is with. 2. If someone is past the point of saving. And 3. If he is paied to.
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Personality: Incredibly cold and spiteful, incredibly quick to condemn those who he feels are cowards or sympathizers. Rarely seen smiling unless speaking with a superior, torturing a POW, or IN THE PRESENCE OF SMALL CHILDREN.
nightmare fuel if i've seen it.
Excuse me but i need my night light
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<rp Nazi>
Tier, you did not follow the sheet provided on the first page of this OOC. You are not accepted until you edit appropriately. Your post must be fully deleted as well. Try again though. :)
</rp Nazi>
@Cuddles: I saved him a spot meaning I would let him join later on even if I closed the RP. He is not a part of the posting order and is not accepted yet. if he was accepted he would go to the bottom of the list after gabag:
Me
Srgntcuddles
Kitt
Emrelda Triplemoon
Macid
Mortis Reptus
LordFeline
Entaru
Self-Sain
Serpington
Chrono
Gabag
Hunter_Tier
Now you see it anew. Once he joins correctly, he will be after Gabag. So nope no posting for you till next round. :3
Post Merge: May 13, 2011, 01:36:40 AM
@Gabag: Don't you always need your night light? :3
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@Gabag: What's the matter Gab...afraid of the Boogeytaru XP
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There is going to be 13 people in this rp >_>…
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Aren't I awesome like that? 13 people *nods proudly*
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@Gabag: What's the matter Gab...afraid of the Boogeytaru XP
its not boogie taru im scared of, more like pedotaru, and no Sasha, no i do not.
how was my post?
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Really, Gabag? I thought your mother told me she has to come in your room and turn the night light on every night?
And yo post ish kewl :3
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lolkthanx bro
and no im usually making people use nightlites
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uh huh sure
Guess what? Twas my turn *proud :3* totally just posted you guyyys
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Sorry, I'll erase it. I fixed my character sheet, I hope it's ok.
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New Character
Passcard
Name: Liliana
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Species: Rabbit
Appearance:
Ref Pictures (if you have any):
Skin/Coloring: dirty white
Markings/Tattoos/Secondary Colors:
Eye Color: grey
Eye style: normal?
Hair Color:black
Hair Style: short and untamed
Build: small and petite
Weight: 5'8
Height: 100 ib
Clothing: http://fighterpedia.net/gallery/FF/FF_tifa/tifa.jpg
Accessories: gloves with metal plating on the inside, and on the back of the palm
Mode of Transportation: walking
Weapons
Weapons: hands
How they are carried: normal?
Limitations/Details: close range
Magic
Class: Angel
Calling: Soul
List and describe all spells:
- heals general wounds
- heals life threatening wounds
- body naturally fights off anything foreign
Limitations: - has to be touching
- must be touching, and takes a great deal of energy
- can't take in foreign supplements like pills and stuff
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Breaks: Rage- Liliana's muscles tense up in great time of stress, creating a hard outer shell and greater mobility
Faction
What faction does he/she belong to?: a religious group
How does he/she feel about the SSNP, or Sentential Nazi Party?: She thinks they tread on god's land to often
How does he/she feel about the RA, or Rebel Alliance?: While a noble cause, she doesn't approve of some of their tactics
How does he/she feel about the border war?: Death only leads to more death
The following section is only for independents....chars that do not belong to a particular group and are primarily on their own.
How did this character come to work alone? See bio
How do they operate on their own? That is, do they have enemies? Or are they generally tolerated in all territories? Generally accepted
Given the opportunity, would this character join a group that suited them? yes
Life Story
Personality: Kind, some what a martyr
Bio: Raised in a secluded area of the desert by a religious faction. Liliana grew up with only positive and religious ideas in her, which leads to her often being oblivious when it comes to the out side world. While the religious group didn't believe in violence, they weren't fools they knew they couldn't survive with out having some kind of defense. The group practiced an age old art of soul taming.
By becoming in touch with their soul, they gain the makers approval and unlock their full potential, giving them what would be considered 'in human strength and reflexes'. At a young age Liliana mastered this ancient art gaining notice from the elders. She was summoned on her eighteenth birthday to go on a spiritual quest, to find one's true calling and to better the world around one's self. She was the youngest to ever go on a spiritual quest so she left with great pride and joy, and vowed when she returned after three years that the world would be in a better place along with her self. She has been in her journey for a year and it that time she has yet to find something that she finds worthy of making her a better person in the makers eyes.
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I just went ahead and posted. I was told to do it after Katie, so there it is. >.>
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me too. i realized how angry and vengeful my character is
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and I posted completly at random!
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From what I could remember, there is a posting order this round. But yeah...I could be wrong...We'll just have to wait for Katie.
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2 rounds of posting order, then its wave posting, if I remember she wanted to do. my turn now!
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wait I think we skipped Kitt. :?
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Yup :P Posting order thrown out the window it seems! XP
I'l just post now, then posting can continue after Emrelda (which means it is now Macid's turn :3 )
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woot my turn!
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@Tier: Only because I know you are good and reliable in an RP, you are accepted. You post after Gabag.
@Sain: Accepted.
The posting order's close enough as it is now. XP It works so I'm not going to bother to ask for correction XD And yes indeed, after this round posting order is forgoed, we close and wave post.
Post Merge: May 14, 2011, 06:57:59 PM
voila, Tier. :D
Me
Srgntcuddles
Kitt
Emrelda Triplemoon
Macid
Mortis Reptus
LordFeline
Entaru
Self-Sain
Serpington
Chrono
Gabag
Hunter_Tier
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Err... I'm sorry? I thought I apologized earlier. I fixed the character sheet and removed my post from the RP. If there is something else I screwed up please tell me.
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You didn't screw up lol I was complimenting you cause I know you are good at Roleplaying :3 I put 'only because' before it not because you messed up but because adding a new member with so many already is a tough descision.
Post Merge: May 15, 2011, 05:19:26 AM
I suppose this makes it Enta's turn. :#
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Sorry...was banned from computer yesterday. *salutes* Awaiting orders mein frauline!
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Tis Chrono turn :3
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By chance will there be a time period we must post within once we finally switch over?
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Yes, will still have the two day rule *pokes Chrono*
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No need to wait, I'm posting my part, and hopefully didn't go overboard with the pace of distance-shortening.
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Yay has posted...Gabag, then Hunter Tier, and we are done with the order.
Post Merge: May 18, 2011, 01:55:03 PM
Hey Bronie!
Your turn today *pokes the Gabag*
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just skip me, no creative juices were flowing due to the worst day at school ever.
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That makes it Tier's turn.
No making a habit of skipping, bad Gabag, bad. This once is okay I suppose.
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oh i'm 'bad' for requiring a skip
forshame.
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*waggles finger* don't make me give you a time out, young chap XP (jkjk)
Post Merge: May 19, 2011, 12:02:35 PM
Next it's my turn. :D Posting order is gone, wave posting, begin!
Post Merge: May 19, 2011, 02:58:49 PM
LordFeline has been ejected. He came too late without being that familiar of a player to me and I just couldn't trust since we already have a lot of people. He did a good job in the time he was here however, so I hold no grudges with him.
Post Merge: May 19, 2011, 06:20:13 PM
@Chrono: I realized I practically leaped into powerplaying, but as you can guess it does have something to do with the story, please forgive my powerplaying.
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I can't write anymore. T>T *headdesk* where have my writing skills gone? at least I'm fast
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Yay! Wave posting! :P
Yay! Introduction of Katka! :P
Uhm... Yay! awesomeness X3
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But I CAN'T WRITE D: I suck
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>.> Nonsense... Pull yourself together and run this RP like you know you can! :3
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LordFeline has been ejected. He came too late without being that familiar of a player to me and I just couldn't trust since we already have a lot of people. He did a good job in the time he was here however, so I hold no grudges with him.
LordFeline dissapates into a could of smoke, never to return.
POOF[\i]
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Is it still nightime, morning? Keeping up with the time is going to be a problem ><
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Still nighttime I believe, but getting close to morning. Of course you guys can individually decide what time it is for your characters, so long as you don't get too far ahead or behind the others' time.
Post Merge: May 21, 2011, 04:40:01 PM
twould be waiting on chrono and tier I believe unless I skipping someone
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Posting so people see. >.>
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I gotta wait on chrono before I can post up though.
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Well because of the wave posting you can post in whatever order you like after me (cause I got rid of the posting order) so unless you need to see his reaction to something no need to wait for him.
*pokes Chrono* it is the second day yo
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Sorry if it's getting boring...I've mainly just been having my characters react very straightforwardly. :/ I will seriously consider taking more time with my next post, adding more story to it, maybe some events for your guys' chars. It's a bit different for me...writing a script or story versus an RP. Very different.
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I wonder if Moon would stop struggling because of the shock of Nala saying 'my child'.
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I've got an exam tomorrow and Friday, so I decided to post quickly today.
Bleh... I feel like I could be doing more with my story, but I just dont have the time right now :/
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cuddles if you dont want charles to land in Dante's car i can remove that part.
just thought it would be an issue because i didnt know if you wanted Dante to have contact with another player.
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I don't mind. But I'm only two cars ahead of Katie. So...A rough diagram KT=Katie and Tier, DS=Dante and Serpington, NS= Nazi soldiers
[ KT ], [ NS ], [ DS ]
Get it? >>
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oh ok then i need to correct my inpost math
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Not to be knit picking, but there is one dead Nazi and one paralyzed. The attack I used was my Seal spell which won't kill, just paralyze or knock out. And not to mention prevent the use of magic... >.>
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Hey guys and gals i like what we're doing
but can we actually continue this rp please?
thanks
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I know it's my turn -_-
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soooooooooo can we keep it going?
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(http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm275/ih8dadallascowboys/obama-yes-we-can.jpg)
just gimme tonight to put something up...having problems at home and really distracted with stuff sorry
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Yeah...that obviously didn't happen.
I'm sorry but I cannot deal with this RP right now. I will come back in about a week, but until I get some time to myself I'll have to put in a raincheck. Please understand and keep a lookout for the RP to update.
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Not a problem. A good RP is worth waiting for.
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Yay I posted!
I decided to do a long one with lots of intense stuff to try and make up for the long abscence. And don't worry Chrono, I'm not gonna kill you. >.< Cause then I'd loose a valuable player mwahahaha ..... *headdesk*
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Rawr...To think I wasn't going to be able to use that post...Shame on me. ;)
Post Merge: June 17, 2011, 07:00:52 PM
Teir, uhm...The way I'm picturing this, you and Katie are in the last car of the train. One car ahead of you are your security forces, where about roughly 20 soldiers are hanging out. In the next car would be me, serpington's marry bunch and Gabag. Katie stepped into the next car from hers, so she's in the car with the other soldiers. I figured you set up your trap at the door between the last car and the security car. So unless you're throwing that grenade a whole car length, through a tiny window, to blow us all up...You're going to have to write to all those soldier's families explaining to them their son, father or cousin has just become another friendly fire statistic. :S
But yeah...Not my RP...That's just how I was having it go down. No one objected so far. >.>
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@Everyone who has not posted yet: BUMP? There's too many non-posters to start dealing out strikes, but that is what concerns me. I'll give it awhile I suppose.
Hmm...it is true that I stepped into the next car, so I agree that it is impossible to really throw a grenade that far--- through a window??? So yes, it would be friendly fire. Cuddles is right.
But I was not set up in the last car, maybe I should have made that clearer or mentioned it, but I am in the middle of the train surrounded on both sides by cars of twenty soldiers. Setting up in the last car would not be a smart move at all considering the many ways she could be assassinated if she were in the back car.
Though being in the middle isn't much better, nowhere is really safe, is it?
Edit: I would like to know----what time are you guys in? I know that Katie, Moon/Atreyu and those in their vicinity are still in nighttime in the same few hour period. But I remember Rigor's char had awoken the next day. Is everyone pretty much on the same page time and location wise? If not, give me a shout so I know where and when you are.
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I'm kinda leaving it open time of day-wise...Rigor could have stated her later actions. I've done it. Generally when I'm taking a vacation or something...Speaking of which. Rigor has mentioned being online a lot less so she may either drop from the RP or post slower. But I think we all thought the RP was dead...So you should probably give it a little time.
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Oh crap. That was my bad you all, I'll fix it. I am sorry I thought you all were already in the car before Kate's and mine. Give me a few and I'll patch it up.
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Yeah, sorry about making you guys think that. I could not help it though. I really had to leave. I would have been here if I could and the moment I was reminded to update I rushed over here to write something to keep it going.
And sorry to hear of an online-less Rigor :<
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I fixed my post.
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Im sorry, but I must pull my doctor from the rp. I cant get into the character anymore and cannot play as him. Im sorry
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Sorry Sasha... Been kinda busy with starting the second part of my school courses and missed the updates here :(
I will be posting as soon as I have some free time! ^_^
Oh, also I'm still in nighttime too. Makes it more cinematic that way XP
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I'll post as soon as I can. And yes, you're correct, it's morning for Syd. You can skip her until people catch up if you want since I'll be slow.
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I'll post asap but I been at metrocon this weekened and I'm dead tired
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Please read and understand...
http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=16723.new#new (http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=16723.new#new)