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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #75 on: September 20, 2009, 10:38:29 PM »
Yay, good to have you back. :)
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #76 on: September 22, 2009, 03:07:35 PM »
^.^ Thanks WZ, I'm also really pleased to say that i've have over 9000 views- so i'm really happy! Must be doing something right eh? :D
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #77 on: September 27, 2009, 11:05:46 AM »
UPDATE!!!

Fun times! Another page for you all! Sorry about so much writing! But it is a novel as much as a comic-- and I like to explain things :D xxxx

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(I really need to start being more friendly and putting a little blog at the bottom hahaha-- I just never have anything to say! ;-;)
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #78 on: September 27, 2009, 01:16:16 PM »
i had only read one or two pages before... so i just went and ready the whole thing through  :3

and your style has got a lot better as youve gone through... ^_^

great stuff ^^
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #79 on: September 27, 2009, 05:51:11 PM »
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'll try my best!
Yay to new readers! :3

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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #80 on: October 06, 2009, 03:30:58 PM »
Sorry I haven't been on here in a few days, but if you didn't already check, I posted an UPDATE!!!
on Sunday! (Thats my post day for those who didn't know :3)

:3 Gosh collage has been such a drainer, but I hope I can get the next page up on Sunday, If I can't I apologise; its all these 50 mark essays they've suddenly expected me to write for ''practice'' (!!!!) for homework, so its a bit annoying really!
I JUST WANT TO DRAW OKAY?! :P (I should shout that at my teachers hahah)

Thanks for reading!!! :3 xxx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #81 on: October 06, 2009, 10:11:57 PM »
I had seen the update before you posted it. :3

I can totally understand the whole "I JUST WANT TO DRAW" thing. I wish I could yell at my teachers too sometimes. XD


I feel I should make one suggestion though, that I've noticed as I've been following the comic. I would recommend trying to work on drawing backgrounds more in your pages. There are backgrounds every once in a while, but it seems like most of the pages just have abstract backgrounds that don't have much purpose. I know backgrounds can be a huge pain to deal with, and abstract backgrounds can be used sometimes, but I feel like it might really help in immersing the reader in your story since they'll have a better idea of "where they are", you know? Unless you're purposely trying to be abstract, which some people do that in order to make a point. I'm just trying to help. :)
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #82 on: October 07, 2009, 06:38:58 PM »
Oooh you're totally right- its just my confidence in background drawing is just so bad.. I needs to work on it! :D
I do however enjoy doing abstract backgrounds because I think it emphasises the mood (but I think I only do it because I am in desperate need to draw other things!!! :D)
hahhaahha, i'll work on it, however, so that as you pointed out; my fans need to be more immersed!
Good idea, I didn't even realise I was doing it! :D:D

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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #83 on: October 18, 2009, 01:57:33 AM »
Latest comic is now online, I had some connectivity issues.
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #84 on: October 26, 2009, 08:00:47 PM »
   Auuugh, sorry for the no update this week-- I have a bit of a hangover and I think its due to the amount of parties i've been to this week! I'm sorry! 18th birthdays and all that! :D If you want the full reason i explained it under my last page in the bloggy bit on the site.
If I have time I might put a nice drawing up this week on my comic to compensate, as well as a page for next sunday (I haven't even started so its an ambitious goal indeed!!!)

Thanks for the support and continued readings people! :3 xxxx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #85 on: October 26, 2009, 09:12:43 PM »
My only issue with your latest comic was with the dailogue bubbles, I really couldn't tell if it was Ms. Viper talking since some of the speech sounded like it came from Sapphire or Amythyst. But I like how the background dancers look like oversized chibis  :P
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #86 on: October 27, 2009, 05:21:29 PM »
Hehehe-- I was hoping people would notice them!

Pretty much anything in white text or a black speech bubble is ammy's.
The sharper looking circles are sapphires and the other's belong to viper.
Hopefully when you know the characters more you'll understand the way they speak-- but i'll try to make it more clearedr next time :)
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« Reply #87 on: October 27, 2009, 10:10:34 PM »
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but i'll try to make it more clearedr next time
Yeah it definitely needs to be clearedr... much more clearedr
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #88 on: October 27, 2009, 10:50:26 PM »
Hahaha I understand how ironic that grammar fail is! Leave me be!! :P xxx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #89 on: October 30, 2009, 07:39:33 PM »
Just so you all know-- i'm updating saturday with a filler sketch and sunday with a page!!
I'm telling you this now because i'm staying over at my boyfriends tomorrow- so probably won't be on here this weekend!

Thanks for reading! Have a nice weekend! xxxx
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