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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #60 on: August 02, 2009, 02:14:56 PM »
New page is now online. >.>
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #61 on: August 02, 2009, 02:24:33 PM »
Your pages keep getting better and easier to read, Xleena. ;)

One tiny thing though. >.> I think that bit of text at the end of the latest page should have said "If you don't count..." But it's not a big deal. :3
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #62 on: August 02, 2009, 05:54:19 PM »
hmm, thats a good point actually :D i'll remember that for next time!

Hahah I think it gets better because of all the good points I get :)

Maybe I should get an editor... :P
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #63 on: August 08, 2009, 12:38:55 PM »
UPDATE!!!

Meep. I'VE DONE IT AGAIN!!
I'm so sorry for not updating yesterday, I totally forgot- or more like thought I had actually updated it!
Thats twice in a row, so I've decided to do another page by tomorrow for you all! Yaaay! :D

That one will be the end of chapter-- I think!

Hope you all like it!
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UPDATE!!!

Oy-hoy! I've actually managed to finish page 17! Its up for you guys to have a look at!

Sorry for two one-panel pages, but the reason for it was to demonstrate harsh contrasts in environment and mood.. and I don't think I would have got what id wanted if i'd split them into different panels pages! (I especially find it fun to put massive detail into it! :D)

ITS THE END OF THE CHAPTER TOO! I've been looking forward to doing the next chapter for a while! :)
Thank you for your continued readings! :3
« Last Edit: August 08, 2009, 09:18:05 PM by Xleena »
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #64 on: August 15, 2009, 06:24:09 PM »
Chapter 2 is going to be slightly delayed while we set up the new software to run the comic under, the final touches are being put into place and the next update should be by Sunday 23rd!
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #65 on: August 23, 2009, 07:48:46 PM »
UPDATE!!!

Hey peeps! New page is up! I've even done a chapter cover page too! Check it out! :3

The regular site as always, and Tweak has done a wonderful job updating the website too, so kudos to him muchly! :)

Thanks for reading! xxx

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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #66 on: August 30, 2009, 04:54:42 PM »
UPDATE!!!

Oy-hoy! new page is up!

http://comics.thefurryforum.com/xleena/

STILL would like a sig pic, pm me if interested! :3
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #67 on: August 31, 2009, 04:42:47 AM »
I meant to comment on the previous page (the start of chapter 2), the disjointed panel pieces were a little hard to read and understand, concerning both with order you're supposed to look at them and what exactly was in them. (I could get the basic idea of it, but it probably could have been made a little clearer.)

But aside from that, keep going! I want to keep reading. :P
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #68 on: August 31, 2009, 04:58:30 PM »
I thought the outfits were somewhat...eccentric, but whats that on Amythest's hand, some sleeve flare, or her ability/weapon?
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #69 on: August 31, 2009, 05:23:32 PM »
WZ- it was a little like this: 1-2-3  Its just close ups of parts of their outfits, just as they're walking to each other!                               
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It was just to give the comic a bit more movement, and usually you don't really need an order with things like that, so don't worry too much about it. :D
This may also give me an opportunity to talk about Amethyst's speech. Her speech will be in the black bubbles, and this is to convey her voice to be slightly deep and a bit evil sounding.

Hope that made it a bit clearer :)

Chrono- I know the outfits are rather extravagant, but that was the point - you'll see the point more after they go into a certain club soon. (They're also super fun to draw) I made them really garish too- particularly Amethyst's- to give a sense of irony because you wouldn't catch her dead in something like that normally. And yeah, they are sleeve flares :D I think you might enjoy her power a bit more than that. -wicked grin-

Hope thats better explanation for you folkies- the more you understand the better, and so does everyone else, so cheers :) xx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #70 on: September 11, 2009, 09:56:50 PM »
I'm sorry guys, but i've decided to take a haitus for a while. Lots of bad things have been going down, and has made me very unmotivated and stressed, so I don't want to be creating half-decent work because thats just not me. I'll inform you all when I'll be back :3 Sorry! xxx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #71 on: September 11, 2009, 10:09:47 PM »
Don't worry about it. Hope things settle down soon. *hugs*
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #72 on: September 20, 2009, 08:05:09 PM »
Thanks Wz :3 -hugs back-,
also...

UPDATE!!

Yes, I am back in business, hope you all missed me (probably not hahah)

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Enjoy! xxx
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #73 on: September 20, 2009, 08:07:33 PM »
Um, is that stripper black viper, or one of her workers?   :?
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #74 on: September 20, 2009, 08:09:51 PM »
One of the workers! :D
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