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Offline Xleena

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I've started a comic
« on: May 26, 2009, 05:56:49 PM »
Hi there, I'm a new furry to this forum, so this is all new and exciting for me! :-[

I've started designing a new comic I'd like to share with everyone! I'm not the best drawer in the world, its a little secondary to the actual story, (so I'm sorry for dodgy backgrounds or perspectives  :'( )

Its about a young girl who joins a secret information processing company that is also a major military superpower that most of the world is scared of, and what happens to her as she progresses through the ranks, losing her sanity as she climbs.

Its quite a complicated plot, but there is a fantasy/action plot to it, with some 'political' elements in it.
And also for you minors, there will be some moderate sexual and graphic violence elements in it sometimes, but ill make sure to put warnings on pages like that!
I hope you enjoy it as much as I do! :3

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/page0i.jpg

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/page0ii.jpg   (slight sexual nature)

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/page0iii.jpg


Thanks for looking, feedback wanted :3





UPDATE!

Well, i've had quite a few readers on my prologue, so i've decided to upload the next three pages. Again, i'd really love to have some feedback (positive or negative- I like to improve what i'm doing!)
Hopefully, you'll find these pages a bit more interesting! peek

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/page1_chapter1.jpg

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page2_Chapter1.jpg

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page3_chapter1.jpg

Thank you for looking  :)  xxxxxxxxxxxxxx



UPDATE!

I've done my page 4 for you folks to enjoy!

Its getting into it now! xxxxxx

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page4_chapter1.jpg


UPDATE!

Page 5!

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page5_Chapter1.jpg

I'm also going to put the album link, so you can go straight to it if you want to look at narrations :)

http://s619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/

Enjoy! :3

UPDATE!

I've done page 6, but from now on i'll put up pages by posting replies, so that you know its getting updated!

I'll post it now :)
« Last Edit: June 06, 2009, 08:09:47 PM by Xleena »
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 06:03:08 PM »
Looks good so far Xleena ^.^ Keep up the good work :D
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2009, 06:12:57 AM »
Excellent, I love stylized color schemes. :)

Good work on starting up, too. I have had many comic eggs incubating in my head for years now, but I can never bring myself to put them to paper. I'm such a procrastinator. Props! :D
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 05:05:19 PM »
Thank you, :)
I was thinking about updating on my photo bucket if it was good enough, I'd just like people to have more interest in it before i started doing that, I mean there's no point in posting if no one likes it haha! :'(
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Re: I've started a new comic (2)
« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2009, 03:27:34 PM »
If it's all a part of the same comic, it might be better to keep it all in the same thread. I can combine this thread with the previous one you made if you like.
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Re: I've started a new comic (2)
« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2009, 05:33:12 PM »
Sure, thanks :3
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 07:20:52 PM »
There ya go. ^^

What happened to the prologue?
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #7 on: May 28, 2009, 09:38:27 PM »
I fixed the first post for you.

Ok, I'm now meddling now. XD

It's not a bad start, by the way. Kind of hard to tell without more to see, but keep at it. ^^
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 09:40:37 PM »
You're meddlings good!

Yeah, its a little bit of a slow start (but i mean, i've only done three pages haha!) Hopefully it'l be clearer and better in a few pages time! :)
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 02:06:24 PM »
I'm usually slow when it gets to following the story, so don't take it so hard, but I really can't tell whats going on in each of the pictures, maybe adding those yellow 'narration' bars might help....I dunno =3
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« Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 06:22:25 PM »
awesome advice, can you tell me how to do that? :3
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 06:24:14 PM »
Quote from: Xleena on May 29, 2009, 06:22:25 PM
awesome advice, can you tell me how to do that? :3
Like in every picture you draw, leave an empty space to fill with narrative dailogue so that the reader has little to no questions as to who, what, where, and why things are taking place...
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #12 on: May 30, 2009, 06:41:17 PM »
Haha, sorry, i thought you meant that when you scrolled over a page, then a yellow text box would show up narrating, I saw it on a web comic once :3

Post Merge: May 30, 2009, 08:00:28 PM
Right, well I've put some narration up for you guys who are finding it a bit confusing, I didn't really want to spoil my drawings, so on my photo bucket, when you select a 'photo' or page, i've typed the narration into the 'description' section that should be under the page! :th_Pyong-1:

If that still confuses people or you can't find the narration, just say and ill pm you about it :)
« Last Edit: May 31, 2009, 03:28:12 PM by Xleena »
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #13 on: June 01, 2009, 11:11:18 AM »
Well done dear, I am envious =D
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Re: I've started a comic
« Reply #14 on: June 01, 2009, 11:18:43 AM »
Thankyou :) It means a lot that people are liking it!  :-[
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