I've started a comic

[.: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.]

I like how it's coming along ^^

[Xleena]

Thanks! I've been away for a few days, but page 6 will be up soon! xxxxxxxxxx

Post Merge: June 06, 2009, 08:10:43 PMPage 6!
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page6_Chapter1-1.jpg

[Dr. Strange]

nice job, Xleena.

[WingedZephyr]

Keep going! ^^

One word of advice: I think it's a little hard to tell which way your panels read. You might want to think about that more when you're setting up the layout of each page. The placement and borders of each panel should in some way let your eye flow directly from one to the next without having to stop and think "Oh, wait, am I supposed to go here next? or here?"

[Chrono Blackwyng]

This is just me, but is most of your characters supposted to have only one eye showing and the rest covered by hair, or are there going to be some variations in hair-style?
anyway, nice introduction for the 'inhuman' charcter

[Xleena]

I so know what you mean about the panel structure, i'm really sorry for that, and i thought about that problem myself! So when I do page 7, i think ill make the panel structure left to right (obviously) and itl be like (for example)

Panel 1, --> Panel 2, --->Panel 3
Panel 4, --> panel 5

If I change the structure of a particular page, i'll make sure to post about it! (Thankyou for pointing that out)

Hahaha, I know what you eman about the hair covering thing, and its basically intentional for my inhuman looking woman, and you'll find out why

Ao's actually got a bit of an emo fashion sense, (his blue hair is dyed haha), it'll be more obvious as the story goes on, and i'll try to draw less emo people hahah (and i want to draw loads of extravagant hairstyles, so keep posted  :-*)

Thank you so much WZ and CD for your constructive ideas xxx

[Xleena]

UPDATE!!!
Page 7 for you lovely people!
Just to say that now i'm back at college, I may have to start doing a weekly update because i'll be quite busy! If I CAN update more, i will

Thanks for looking!

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/page7_chapter1.jpg

Ps: do you prefer my rough style panels, or would you prefer i neatened up?

[Dr. Strange]

wow... really good. Wonder if they'll kill each other.

[WingedZephyr]

Ps: do you prefer my rough style panels, or would you prefer i neatened up?

I say neaten up. Makes it look all nice and clean.

[Chrono Blackwyng]

I agree, but if it takes too long for you, I can read it like that, btw, does this comic include anything beyond the ordinary? (powers, fur-people, etc.?)

[Xleena]

It includes powers, but its not a furry comic i'm afraid, I hope thats not a problem =/
Twokinds is a good furry webcomic if you want one (I actually read that before i was even a furry hahaha)!

And yeah i think i will make it neater (the panels) I've just been so unsure, but hey, this is all about developing my ability and myself right?

Thanks so much for all your feedback ^-^! Its good because I can make it better, and therefore people will like it more! haha

P.s to queeney (hope you don't mind me calling you that), you'll have to wait and see about if they want to start killing each other, hehe
xxx

[Xleena]

UPDATE!!!

Page 8 for you all (I've decided to update on fridays, so please check back then! )

Its certainly getting interesting...

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt278/Xleena/comic/Page8_chapter1.jpg

xxx

[WingedZephyr]

The neater panels look much better.

[Xleena]

Thanks, and you're right, that little more effort is a lot more rewarding

[Chrono Blackwyng]

Whats that armband around the mystery girl's shoulder for?

btw, it looks much cleaner