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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #30 on: March 14, 2017, 11:22:29 PM »
Thank you!
 
Oh wow, you seem to really improve, Ori! Nice job. I like the sketch and the digital version. You have a unique style with both mediums (media?).
It's all in the pencil I'm using for the sketches, It's very weird.  I'm using a variant of these pencils:
https://www.amazon.com/Art-Alternatives-Pocket-Woodless-Graphite/dp/B000JQQTN2
I've still got a ways to go for becoming one of those video game artists, but I really appreciate the support!
The next batch of things I did:
This one is for this furry discord chat that I go to often. It was for the owner there. (The white outlines, I managed to remove but I just don't feel like updating this picture for the fifth time. XD ) Her name is Angelkins. The fursona's name is yet to be decided. I actually streamed a bit of this towards the end.

This is something I was working on for a bit:
I didn't finish it and I don't plan on doing so... I do like the image, it's just a lot of things are wrong with it, and it's kind of a pain to work on.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #31 on: March 25, 2017, 06:37:43 AM »
I love these.  You have real talent, both in your technique as well as the content that you are making with that technique.  My eyeballs are happy.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #32 on: March 25, 2017, 12:12:29 PM »
The headshot is lovely.
I understand the problems with the other one, but with that pose and light sources it is a challenge.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #33 on: June 03, 2017, 05:02:11 AM »
Thanks for the compliments!

I got kinda depressed and tired out... and I pumped out this piece.





I kinda like it. But it's a mess. Really hard to tell what's going on it for some reason (Especially the ear cuff). I call this one, Deep in Thought... ( I need to work on that rain XDD)

Oh yes. And this is my new fursona. His name is Off, for the time being.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #34 on: June 03, 2017, 09:10:09 PM »
Hey again Ori :)
To me the ear cuff isn't the problem, I think it's that the colours of the character and the background are rather similar. That's why it's hard for me to see what is going on, because the character seems to really blur into the scenery.
Maybe make the character stand out a tad bit more from the background or change the colours a bit between the character and the background and it should be fixed, I think.
If that helps any! ^^
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #35 on: June 03, 2017, 09:20:27 PM »
That's awesome, especially the black and white one
(wanted to post to stay updated with this, some of the best art I've seen in a long while >w<)
The glint in their eye is really well done, and the overall detail... it's just awesome x3
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #36 on: June 03, 2017, 10:29:03 PM »
It looks so lonely ant thoughtful.  Great work.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #37 on: June 04, 2017, 11:02:06 PM »
Hey again Ori :)
To me the ear cuff isn't the problem, I think it's that the colours of the character and the background are rather similar. That's why it's hard for me to see what is going on, because the character seems to really blur into the scenery.
Maybe make the character stand out a tad bit more from the background or change the colours a bit between the character and the background and it should be fixed, I think.
If that helps any! ^^

That does help Actually! Thanks!

That's awesome, especially the black and white one
(wanted to post to stay updated with this, some of the best art I've seen in a long while >w<)
The glint in their eye is really well done, and the overall detail... it's just awesome x3

Thank you ^.^ I'm glad you like it!


It looks so lonely ant thoughtful.  Great work.

Thanks! :)

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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #38 on: June 09, 2017, 01:37:12 AM »
Yay a fix. Kinda
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #39 on: June 09, 2017, 04:22:30 AM »
It looks much brighter and easier to see now.  Great work.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #40 on: June 09, 2017, 07:25:10 AM »
Wow, I'm impressed!
In my opinion it looks a whole lot better and I (and I think others too) can see your work much easier now and all the details you have drawn.

See, it still looks a bit droopy/depressing, you've set that tone very well.
I also see you changed the eye colour, very cool.

Also, I just now realised: You said it is your new fursona.
So a bunny-fursona.
So... woo! (I have a bunny-esk fursona too >.>)

Anyways, as before, just like now: I really like this piece and I think you only made it better by rceating more difference between the character and its background.
The shading and overall style of the piece is very unique, and all the tiny details you put in there only adds more to it.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #41 on: June 23, 2017, 03:49:12 AM »



I took a look at this visual novel engine called Renpy. And I really want to attempt a graphic novel, (Considering it looks rather easy to learn and use as half the game is already coded for you.) And I wanted to experiment, and see if I had a style that matched the theme of my game 'loneliness'. I guess I kinda do? And it would be kinda unique in the sense I've never seen a visual novel approached in a way that looks like a painter decided to step into the game. Then I saw this person offering free code to convert Renpy into an RPG and I sat there like, I kinda like RPGs. I certainly wouldn't mind making one. Now. With that in mind I started to experiment, trying to create simple art. Which didn't work out. Instead I gave up and said why don't I be me. And I did this. As cool as this looks (As I was going for a noir look)  I can't imagine how the overworld would look. If I was making a 3D game... Yeah maybe. But since I'm not... I'm not able to figure out what to do.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #42 on: June 23, 2017, 06:49:54 AM »
Wow, that's a great drawing ! The hint on the eyes is beautifully done


Oooh Renpy ! I've used that before ! It was a couple months ago but I still vaguely know it. It's a great software and it would be awesome to see an rpg with your art in :3
If you need help with that or any story writing, I'm here and would be very happy to help ! XD
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #43 on: June 23, 2017, 08:38:10 PM »
Wow, that's a great drawing ! The hint on the eyes is beautifully done


Oooh Renpy ! I've used that before ! It was a couple months ago but I still vaguely know it. It's a great software and it would be awesome to see an rpg with your art in :3
If you need help with that or any story writing, I'm here and would be very happy to help ! XD

Thanks! But with the story I already have something in mind >.> I might come to you for the code though lol.
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Re: Venture to Ori's Gallery.
« Reply #44 on: July 10, 2017, 11:35:17 PM »







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