Byrackas Drawings

[Byracka]

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Hope you fancy    and please critique . This is from my dA account (which is kinda new and empty) http://byracka.deviantart.com/ It's a redrawing of an older sketch, for a contest on that very same site.


Here is the original, two years experience apart.

[Ventus Fall]

I like it a lot, Byracka


It's good that you've uploaded the older version too, I see the diffrences, you've improved, that I can say
Nice pose, the stones lokos nice and old/eerie looking, and same with the trees. I think you've drawn the water very good too.
And i'm not sure what you think about this idea, but maybe some more (and darker) shading can make the picture come more to life, what do you think?

[Byracka]

Thank you! I was so happy with the linework and textures that I completely forgot about setting a light to the scene. I'll drag out my B8 and maybe some watercolours and see what I can do. Most likely I'll destroy it  but even then I'll show the wreck.
The main difference between them, is that I now know how to draw hands, so I don't need to 'hide' them anymore.


Thank you Ven

[Ventus Fall]

Then if you think you would destroy it, why not copy it? Then you can colour in the copy, without worrying about the original


Yes, hands are difficult, so I'm gald you've now shown them ^^


No problem, I hope you didn't think I was 'downgrading' your work or anyhting by the way O.o I was trying to help, so I'm glad you thought so too

[Byracka]

You can be even more honest about every little flaw or tidbit on your mind. I'm pretty rough skinned when it comes to critiques. So I  really appreciate your time


And if it gets destroyed I don't mind the least. Can't be too attached to your drawings, experiment, have fun and learn without any stress.   

[Ventus Fall]

OK, good to know
And no problem ^^


Allright then, experiment all you want to
I'd like to see the end result

[Zeldoran (Former Frozt, FroztFox)]

Awesome     

[Byracka]

Awa, thank you so much Frozt 

[Byracka]

Took some advice from Ventus Fall 

[Ventus Fall]

Looks very nice


Almost looks as if there's also some light coming from the back, very nice ^^

[Byracka]

The eyes are looking towards a totally different diraction because I had unsteady hands, put an ink blob wrong and had to save the whole thing.    But then it ended up good anyways. If there's anything more on your mind regarding the sketch just speak you tounge 

[Lux-Nero]

Very nice, very very nice work.

As you can tell from the forums, I'm an artist as well, and would love to get a critique of my work from a fellow artist.

[Byracka]

Thank you, I just read through your introduction post and I'll happily read your comics and look at anything you've drawn and see if I can be of any help 

[Byracka]

From the days I was unable to shade anything darker than light grey.... 

[Ventus Fall]

Oh, nice ones :O
Awesome... just awesome.