Michen's drawings V2

[Albie]

lol That made me laugh.

[Michen_S]

It was pretty simple. It took about 30 minutes to come up with it and another hour or so to make the actual .txt document.

Post Merge: April 29, 2017, 06:00:35 PM

I wanted to make something else, but that appeared to be too difficult to actually complete for me. So I decided to make something else instead. This is what came out, and I really like the result. Arms and legs still are a problem, which were the biggest problem. Let me know which 'foot' looks better.

As always, constructive criticism is more than welcome.

[HellEye]

Looks pretty good. Uneven eyes but that comes with experience probably. Rest is okay. The foot/paw on the left looks better in my opinion.

[Albie]

I think the foot on the left looks best.  That is my left and not the character's left, lol.  But I'm happy to see more drawings.

[Michen_S]

I could've known. Thanks for the comments, I'll start with a new drawing soon enough.

[Michen_S]

Sorry for the late update, we had a few problems with the wireless network in the past time.

It's Michen again. This is probably the drawing I'm going to remake forever to be able to see better how my drawing improves over time. There's now a bandage around the right front paw, and the scarf is now light purple instead of blue. The head is way too small now that I look at it (my dad commented on that too), but I think overall they came out nicely. I'm quite happy with it.

As always, constructive critisism is welcome.

[HellEye]

Definitely small head. Also looks a bit more fat than the original one. Rest is improved though. I like it

[Michen_S]

I'm still working on that. I'll improve it again in the future if my plans stay the same.

[Albie]

I like the way that you manage to make it look fuzzy with just pencils.  What a poofball.  ^-^

[Ventus Fall]

Definitely small head. Also looks a bit more fat than the original one. Rest is improved though. I like it

Maybe Michen just gained some weight in the meantime
 
Sorry, had to

But in all seriousness, I remember the first drawing you did and this looks indeed like an improvement.
As HellEye pointed out, the head is indeed small. That's soemthing I've noticed with more of your drawings, so maybe focus on that. Draw out the overall distribution (placement and size of everything) and then finish it off.
You have quite a nice style going on and I'm curious to see how it develops

[Michen_S]

Thanks you two. And yes, I tried to make it look more fuzzy than before. I actually thought I wasn't doing it right, but after uploading the picture I saw it went a lot better than I thought it went. I'll look into using that technique more often in the future.

Thanks for the advice, Ventus. I'll look into that.

[HellEye]

Yeah, it's definitely very fuzzy and I like it. Noticed it after I posted though so didn't say it.

[Michen_S]

Heeey! It's been too long since I uploaded something!

Meet Zila, a female character I wanted to use in RPs and future art work. I tried to do some shading for this art piece, but after a while I just gave up on that. And the colour pencils we have here are uhh... still the ones of bad quality. Needless to say it didn't quite come out the way I wanted it to.

Anyways, after finishing it I still liked the restults so I'll upload it anyways. So let me know what you think. And now that this is finished, I should start on the next one so I can upload more than 1 drawing every 2 months for a change.

[Albie]

I like her expression and want to boop her nose.

[Vay]

good looking art there Michen