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Re: The Commission
« Reply #510 on: April 20, 2010, 06:41:33 PM »
Spike ducked when he heard the gunshot. He felt the car sink down on one side. "Damn it!" He turned back at Shiro. "Some bastard shot my damn car!" He looked at Shiro. "Shiro, take care of him. Kill him, catch him, do something!" He looked between Frankie and Paul. "You two, come with me. The streets are gonna get loud." Spike quickly opened his door and Paul and Frankie followed after. Paul immiedately pulled out the Thompson machine gun while Frankie cocked the shotgun. Spike drew his Colt .45 from inside his jacket and made his way up to the front window of the crashed vehicle on the curb. They were blocked in by Spike's Ford. Spike was ready with his pistol as he approached the driver's window.

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"Denton! Denton!? Get out here!" Callum looked up from the sink with horror. He was covered in ink and his leutenant was calling him for a breifing. How could his day get any worse? He walked up to the door and cracked it open. His boss was searching for him around his office. If he didn't see his boss he'd be fired because of the number of times he disappeared from work. He couldn't be seen covered in ink. He'd be laughed at and be the laughing stock of the precinct. He fixed upon a coat rack outside of Harry's cubicle. "A jacket!" He thought. He remained low and slipped out of the bathroom.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #511 on: April 20, 2010, 06:53:12 PM »
Just as Kitt edged around the corner of the window frame, it was in time to see Callum ducking out of the bathroom and out of sight... Kitt groaned out loud, smacking his forehead into his palm... "Why, why, why me?" What should have been a simple shoot up was turning into a game of cat and mouse... snickering at the irony of that, seeing as Callum was a canine, he slid through the window of the bathroom....

A worker had been repairing one of the sinks in the bathroom, the sink itself was still dripping water and below it the workers half eaten lunch and toolbox lay waiting..... Grabbing the toolbox Kitt dusted off his jacket..... hopefully an excuse for being in this part of the station that would give him time to find Callum, so long as he didnt run into that stupid wolf again.... brushing the last of the coal dust off his jacket he turned to the bathroom door... time to reel in this mouse.....
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #512 on: April 20, 2010, 06:58:49 PM »
Shiro grinned. "You got it boss."
He whipped the car door open and aimed the gun at the person who shot the tire. The Coathook gun boomed and several rounds of buckshot hit the offender, in minor area's, but enought to make him drop. Shiro ran over and aimed the second barrrel at the offender, who had fallen over from the blast.
"Okay, you tell my why you did that or this next slug is gonna send you packing"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #513 on: April 21, 2010, 08:17:22 PM »
Starao yelped in surprise when the shots hit him.
"Ack! Well, excuse me if you soaked me in H2O from head to toe!!!" He growled at Shiro.
He took off into an open storm drain nearby, and thought to himself "Damn. He hit me good..." as he continues toward his hideout.
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I imagined turning into a raccoon, and I suddenly shrank, and got an odd sensation unalike any other. When I looked in the water of a pond, I was in the form of a raccoon!!! "WOW! I found it...!!!" I said. I transformed back, and found TFF.


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Re: The Commission
« Reply #514 on: April 21, 2010, 08:37:55 PM »
"I said, don't MOVE"
He shot the second barrel right into Ghost's back. Hopefully he had a vest on or it would rip through his back.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #515 on: April 22, 2010, 03:46:30 AM »
Falder and his goons realized what was happening long before Spike came to the driver's side window. Knowing that an escape was blocked, all three of them had pistols aimed and at the ready....."Don't worry..." the rabbit said, trying to be somewhat comforting. "As long as I have my daughter, the outcome of this doesn't matter, after all...."

However untimely, before Falder could finish, Sacha burst from the car like a bat from the gates of hell, shoving open the door and flinging herself outside onto the pavement...."See what happens, Falder?" the squirrel cried. "You mess with me- and you get shot." She looked pleadingly at Spike, attempting to get up onto her feet, yet finding herself too large for the task...
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #516 on: April 22, 2010, 05:33:26 AM »
Spike was surprised when the large squirrel litterally dived out of the car and landed at his feet. He stopped in his tracks to look down at her for a brief moment and then heard what she had said. "You mess with me and you get shot." He noticed the plea in her eyes and then looked back up at the stranded town car. He raised his pistol and opened fire. As if on cue, Frankie and Paul also opened fire. A roar of gunfire filled the streets as Spike and his men had become a firing squad. Pedestrians fled. The town car was demolished by the time their clips were empty. There was a moment of silence as they all waited in the street to hear if they had survived the hail of gunfire. But there was noting but the sound of steam leaving the car's shot up engine. Spike reloaded his pistol and stepped over the squirrel, cautiously approaching the car to see for himself. They had obviously been hit. Blood had splattered the glass and interior, some was even dripping out of the car and onto the road. They were hit and that was for sure. Whether they were dead was different.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #517 on: April 26, 2010, 04:28:34 PM »
"Hey, what you doing here?"

Kitt turned to face the officer who had tapped him on the shoulder... he sighed, rumbled.... he was about to make a run for it when the officer pointed off down the corridor, taking a sip of his coffee...

"I thought you where supposed to be doing maintenance down in the bathrooms..."

Kitt shrugged, the 'borrowed' toolbox clanking and rattling... "I just got told someone gotta problem with their 'lectricity in an office... just gonna go check it out... they dont pay me enough for this crap..."

The police officer nodded sympathetically... "yeah, we all got that problem... well hope ya get that bathroom fixed soon, that sinks been overflowing just about every day fer ages!"  As the officer walked off Kitt looked around hurriedly, he needed to find Callum, and fast... the maintenance worker wouldn't be in a hurry to get back to work when it was his lunch break but still, time was running out...
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #518 on: April 28, 2010, 04:22:49 AM »
Falder breathed heavily as he held his hand to his side, where a bullet had impaled him whilst it came barrelling through the side of the car.....blood streamed a dark crimson from between the rabbit's cream colored fingers....the other two....dead as doornails. What would a smart man with a smart plan do in this situation? What would someone who wasn't a complete imbecile do in this situation....that was the far better question.

Why, why...A smart man would play dead. If he tried to leave now, he'd surely get shot to ribbons. But if he acted dead, and waited for the right moment and feeling to strike...he might actually live through this.

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Sacha grinned almost madly at the sight of blood strewn across the car windows. A primitive fetish, at best, to see tormentors suffer, to witness revenge. She stood up carefully (a large woman's version of carefully) and hobbled over weakly to be closer to Spike's side. She gave him a warm...if not intense....pat on the back and smiled, eyes sparkling mischeviously. The woman hadn't had fun like this in a long while. She then proceeded to dig between her immense cleveage and produce a pack of cigars, from which she quickly took and lit one for herself, wondering if Spike would be bothersome or whether he would be a grand thing. "Honey, that was epic if not note-worthy," she said to Spike, batting her eyelashes at him....it was a meh-worthy situation. If he wanted her, great. If not, she had things to do anyway. Namely find her daughter, who was currently gagged and tied in the back of a random trunk somewhere. "That man came out of nowhere. Said he knew my daughter. Dirty scum of the worst sort."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #519 on: April 28, 2010, 05:13:57 AM »
Spike only turned his head to look at the heavy set squirrel. He could see what was going on and he pulled away, ignoring her offer. He looked at Paul then at Frankie. "Get her in the car." He ordered the wolf and Tiger standing off to the side with smoking guns. The two large goons walked up and put massive paws on her each of her shoulders before tugging her off and stuffing her back into the back of Spike's Ford. Yes, Spike was kidnapping the squirrel but his work wasn't done yet. He walked up to the shot up car on the curb and looked into the back window. The man lay on his side in the seat very still. Spike raised his pistol and fired another four shots for good measure, blood spraying the windows on the opposite side. He did the same with the other fur in the passenger seat. He could swear he saw the rabbit flinch. When he focused the barrel of gun to the head of the rabbit, he pulled the trigger. CLICK! He was out of ammo. Spike looked at his gun then at the driver. Instead of reloading, Spike walked back to his own car and got into the driver's seat. He started the engine and sped down the road, fleeing the scene with the squirrel in the back seat between Paul and Frankie. He felt bad for leaving Shiro behind. But Shiro knew where they were headed and hopefully would meet them back at his place.
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Callum could be seen through the blinds in the leutenant's officehe was getting yelled at and his tail was hanging low to the ground while his ears hung too. He dodged a coffee mug that smashed against the wall behind him. Every Agent in the office looked on as they listened to the muffles screaming coming out from behind the closed doors. Callum couldn't see how the day could get any worse.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #520 on: April 28, 2010, 05:35:50 PM »
Kitt whistled to himself as he hung around the doors to the lieutenants office... he listened as Callum got a real ear full from the lieutenant, under the guise of replacing a light bulb in one of the wall fixtures... unscrewing the bulb he knelt down to the toolbox, rummaging around inside, he checked the thompson had the safety off.... with his back to everyone he continued work on the light fixture, whistling along like an average Joe worker...

He had to wait just a little while longer, if he went in now, he'd risk there being too many witnesses... or he'd get stopped before he even made it through the office doors.... a bead of sweat ran down his forehead as he fiddled with the wiring of the light fixture, pretending the fuse had blown so he could stay a little longer....

But then again... if he waited too long, Callum could slip off again, or someone could realise he wasnt really part of the maintenance workers.... another bead of sweat joined the first, this was gonna be close....

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Re: The Commission
« Reply #521 on: April 29, 2010, 03:29:37 AM »
Shiro fitted his shotgun back into the folds of his trench coat in one fluid motion, went over and picked up the offender's body, and threw it into a dumpster in the back. Luckily, it seemed everyone was more preoccupied with the car crash than the fox shooting the offender. He slipped into a back alley and navigated back towards where Kitt was. He hoped his boss would understand, he knew the Kid wouldn't last two minutes. Shiro liked Kitt, and he wouldn't want Justine to lose a mate for life the second day off of work. He moved back to where a cop was walking by, and went the other direction, where he saw a maintenance worker, badly dressed, fiddling with a light fixture.
*Lucky cops are so dumb* he thought to himself. He wandered up down the steps, and saw one of the cops walking by.  Shiro grabbed the garrote from his pocket, waited till there were no witnesses, and choked the life out of the cop. It was unethical, but the cops 'round here didn't run with the Gambino's anymore. One missing... Shiro looked down and saw... dachshund cop was the least of their worries. With the whole Nazi threat, one more missing might be a good thing. Plus, rifling through his jacket pockets while putting them on, he found a Nazi Swastika.
*Heh, i should be a hero in stead of a crook...* he thought, grinning.
He put on the jacket, took the man's badge... a normal cop, it so happened, and put on his hat. He looked in the mirror, and he looked like any other cop. No name on the badge, so he didn't have to worry about identification. He came down the hallway, and knocked on the door. Opening it, he saw Kitt, still fiddling.
"You got some business here?" He said in a low voice, winking at Kitt when he looked up.
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #522 on: April 29, 2010, 03:54:11 PM »
Kitt looked up, a screwdriver in his mouth as he attempted to re-wire a wall fitting fuse for the first time in his life... needless to say he'd made a mess of it....
"Mffmmmshrrmm...."
He took the screwdriver from his mouth and dropped it back in the toolbox... "Just fixin' up the light here officer.... should be finished soon, s'blown a fuse again, this job shouldnt take too long..."
He winked surreptitiously back, picking up the screwdriver again he fiddled with the wiring... "Ere', you couldnt hold this here for a sec could ya? Wont be a sec..."
When Shiro came closer to hold a piece of thick black wiring Kitt whispered to him... anyone watching would simply see a helpfull officer helping out a beleaguered maintenance worker...
"What the hell you doing here Shiro?"
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #523 on: April 29, 2010, 04:00:40 PM »
"Kid, i like you, and your too nice of a kid to get messed up in stuff like this. I am just here as reassurance for you and for Justine. Now stop stalling and get the job done. I'll give you a little help." he said quietly. He held the tape and stood up.
"Well, get your job done here, okay?" he nodded and walked out of the door down the hallways towards where Callum was. He found his office and knocked on the door. He knew Callum wouldn't recognize him because he had never met him. Plus, if he was busy he wouldn't realize he wasn't supposed to be there. Anyway, he had an ID he could use anytime and he would be safe. For the moment.
"Sir? Are you in there? I need to ask you something, sir."
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Re: The Commission
« Reply #524 on: April 29, 2010, 04:18:38 PM »
Kitt frowned "Stalling? I've spent the last hour trying to get this guy... i sear, he's in and out of rooms like a bloody jack rabbit!" He started to screw the panel covering back over the wiring as Shiro walked off... swearing under his breath he got up and left the toolbox.... he turned the corner of the corridor just in time to see Shiro's bushy tail whip out of sight.... swearing again he picked up the pace... Spike had told him to do it... he had to be the one to pull the trigger.... whether he, or anyone else, liked it or not....
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