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Re: Making some song lyrics.
« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2016, 09:42:42 PM »
Well, it's your song. But that was end of verse 2. Now is the chorus, and then verse 3.
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Re: Making some song lyrics.
« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2016, 09:45:46 PM »
Okay cool. Do you have any ideas for changing the chorus or just go straight to verse 3 (also if you wanna give me that idea for the last line as well as I only just saw that part)
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Re: Making some song lyrics.
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2016, 09:55:25 PM »
Ok, so this is how I imagined the chorus:


'From the day I saw you'
'I knew I had to protect you'
'Like a lightning, it struck me'
'That without you, I couldn't be'
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« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2016, 10:01:49 PM »
Okay we got a new chours then.  ;)
Anyway back to the verse.
'After so long you opened up'
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Re: Making some song lyrics.
« Reply #19 on: February 12, 2016, 02:50:58 AM »
'And I partook of the love from your cup'

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