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Title: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 07:52:41 PM

Okay this is a really cool idea I just thought of. Okay so basically each person makes a line and that gets entered into the verse. 5 lines for each verse. After the verse the chorus.  4 lines for each chorus. After 4 verses I'll get all the lyrics together and post the song. If it gets enough response I may start it again with some different rules. All song lyrics must be put under 'these' Okay? I'll start.

'Some people call love infinite'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 07:58:44 PM

'While some others are not into it'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 08:52:14 PM

'Youve probably heard this story before'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 08:55:46 PM

'But this time, I'll tell a little more'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:08:24 PM

'After all, I've done this for you'

Okay I like this so far. Chorus now right?

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:16:25 PM

Yeah, it's pretty good. Hey, maybe we could do one of those things, where we end every vers on 'After all, I've done this for you'.
Just a thought.


'From the day I saw you'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:17:56 PM

Oh I really like that idea.

'I knew I had to protect you'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:20:01 PM

Thanks! ^_^


'Like a lightning, it struck me'


(I actually have an idea for the next line as well, if that's ok)

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:21:50 PM

'You're the only one for me'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:25:09 PM

Well, that's good too. Now we go to verse again, right?

'You were standing all alone'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:28:10 PM

Yep back to the verse. Note that we don't need to go write another chorus unless we're gonna change it.
'Out in the cold, damp rain'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:30:56 PM

Ok, nice.


'With no friends, and no phone'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:33:43 PM

'I wanted to take you in my heart and home'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:36:56 PM

(Shouldn't it rhyme? >.>
Sorry)


'After all, I've done this for you'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:40:45 PM

It should but I feel like it fits. If you want to change it that's fine
It's another verse right?

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:42:42 PM

Well, it's your song. But that was end of verse 2. Now is the chorus, and then verse 3.

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 09:45:46 PM

Okay cool. Do you have any ideas for changing the chorus or just go straight to verse 3 (also if you wanna give me that idea for the last line as well as I only just saw that part)

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Ræfóa Aldrnari on February 03, 2016, 09:55:25 PM

Ok, so this is how I imagined the chorus:


'From the day I saw you'
'I knew I had to protect you'
'Like a lightning, it struck me'
'That without you, I couldn't be'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Crest Is Dead ((For Now)) on February 03, 2016, 10:01:49 PM

Okay we got a new chours then.  ;)
Anyway back to the verse.
'After so long you opened up'

Title: Re: Making some song lyrics.
Post by: Winnona on February 12, 2016, 02:50:58 AM

'And I partook of the love from your cup'

Mind if I join in? :3