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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #495 on: September 07, 2015, 06:28:49 AM »
Ray nodded. "Sure, sounds good." He smiled. "Let's eat, and get going."

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #496 on: September 07, 2015, 06:50:17 AM »
Ray nodded. "Sure, sounds good." He smiled. "Let's eat, and get going."


Zanthe nodded. "Is there a safe place to put this shirt before we leave?" she asked, motioning to the button-up shirt she was wearing. "It has sentimental value."
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #497 on: September 07, 2015, 11:54:05 AM »
Angder staggers from a business building, he reaches for his phone and calls the police, behind him he is dragging a fox who matches the guy Geoff had identified.

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #498 on: September 07, 2015, 12:05:08 PM »
Ray nodded. "Under the couch, there's a small lockbox."

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #499 on: September 07, 2015, 03:58:47 PM »
Nodding, Zanthe unbuttoned her shirt again and took it off, leaving her dressed in a cut-off white tank top and a pair of (either pants or men's jean shorts. Whichever would work better.) "Okay... I'll just put it there now," she said, looking over at Ray. Her side was no longer bandaged, and as she had said, she was healed. In fact, there was no trace of any sort of injury there.
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #500 on: September 07, 2015, 04:31:58 PM »
Ray nodded. "Impressive."

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #501 on: September 07, 2015, 05:10:10 PM »
Ray nodded. "Impressive."


Zanthe closed her eyes and nodded once. "Thank you," she said. "Would you like to handle breakfast this morning? I could tell you about what I had in mind either way."
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #502 on: September 09, 2015, 01:56:30 AM »
Ray smiled. "I can cook breakfast."

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #503 on: September 09, 2015, 03:05:02 AM »
The catfox, for what seemed to be the first time, flashed Ray a small, calm smile. "Alright, then," she said, patting his back. "Let's get through it quick... we've got that job to do."
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #504 on: September 09, 2015, 01:05:51 PM »
Ray nodded, and moved quickly into the kitchen. A few minutes later, and he had a decent breakfast set. Scrambled eggs, bacon, two pancakes per person, and two tall glasses of orange juice. Ray smiled, as he pulled Zanthe's chair out, and motioned for her to sit.

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #505 on: September 10, 2015, 02:34:30 AM »
*Seth finally figured out the witness causing him to fall out of his chair...again*
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #506 on: September 10, 2015, 02:39:26 AM »
Zanthe, sans button down shirt and with freshly washed hands, appeared in the kitchen while Ray was making breakfast, and sat down when he motioned. "Impressive," she said, taking a minute to nonchalantly observe Ray's cooking. She let another small smile flash on her face, this one slightly bittersweet as her eyes got a misty quality to them. "I... It's really been quite a while since I've had anything this complex for breakfast..."




(I'm actually writing a story in a class, and I'm considering secretly making Zanthe the narrator/protagonist. It's told in second person, which means that the main character is telling the story.)




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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #507 on: September 10, 2015, 02:55:52 AM »
((You mean first person, where a character in the story is also the narrator and using "I" and whatnot when referring to their roles in the story. Second person is using "you" and is a bit awkward and rare for stories. Third person is describing the events as an outsider looking in, or whatever. Just typical story telling. :3 ))

Geoff sat down on a bench and counted the change he had so far. He probably wasn't going to buy anything today. It was best to save up.


(Apparently, the two are somehow interchangeable...? Well, I do use "you" in the story, but I also use "I". Not sure what to call that.)
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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #508 on: September 10, 2015, 03:09:26 AM »
((That's not what I meant. Here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Second-person_narrative ))

Geoff sighed and lay down on the bench for a while.

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Re: Acension Revival
« Reply #509 on: September 10, 2015, 03:20:45 AM »
((That's not what I meant. Here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Second-person_narrative ))

Geoff sighed and lay down on the bench for a while.


(Well, yes, that is what I thought second-person was... Maybe my teacher messed up. o-o)
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