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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #135 on: April 28, 2015, 04:18:53 PM »
I don't really see how it doesn't fit in personally..

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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #136 on: April 28, 2015, 04:24:18 PM »
What did you guy's think of the RP?
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #137 on: April 28, 2015, 04:28:29 PM »
I really enjoyed it :D
Can't wait for the next chapter in the story!
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #138 on: April 28, 2015, 04:29:19 PM »
Honestly?

I enjoyed it, but I feel like you gave us a problem (escape the arena) but then just as we started to form plans you gave us the solution for free...
Ignoring that though, it was fun, I look forward to the next section.  :)
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #139 on: April 28, 2015, 04:30:31 PM »
I  really enjoyed it, and thats about it.


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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #140 on: April 28, 2015, 04:34:50 PM »
Thank you for the input  :D . The next one will take a bit, but it will happen  XD
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #141 on: April 28, 2015, 04:37:17 PM »
Constructive criticism:
- I felt like you needed to be more active to control the thread a bit more (this was probably out of your power)
- the escape shouldn't have been so soon, we didn't have many battles before leaving (This could be partially our fault for breaking out so soon)
- I like how you are including more characters from other people's pasts, you should pm them first though to find out if they have anyone to introduce
- a bigger variety of battles, such as 2v2 or team boss battles or sumo mode (small arena where if your out, you lose / fall down a pit or something)

These arent "DO THIS OR ELSE!", they are just little pointers that could help ^_^
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #142 on: April 28, 2015, 04:39:26 PM »
Gotta go, brb
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #143 on: April 28, 2015, 04:43:31 PM »
Quote from: Zarconite on April 28, 2015, 04:37:17 PM
- I felt like you needed to be more active to control the thread a bit more (this was probably out of your power)

Quote from: Kyle MaJoi on April 28, 2015, 04:39:26 PM
Gotta go, brb

Am I the only one who finds this kinda funny!  X3

Quite seriously, yea thats probably out of your control, so I would not worry about it that much...
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #144 on: April 28, 2015, 04:48:27 PM »
True :P

I've updated my post a bit :)
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #145 on: April 28, 2015, 05:11:42 PM »
Blame Alka, he Teleported us cos he did not want to wait for some reason...
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #146 on: April 28, 2015, 05:29:12 PM »
Alka went off for the night, so he probably wanted to get his part out of the way before he went off

either way, I'm going to have a think about how to properly balance my characters, I'm not a huge fan of being the overpowered one :P
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #147 on: April 28, 2015, 05:32:24 PM »
Well, feel free to buff yourself for the next arena!
Remember, you haven't really been in combat much yet.. you could modify your fighting style / weapons / strengths before the next episode :P
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #148 on: April 28, 2015, 05:36:36 PM »
Ah alright, but the question is, are you going to be a fighter?
You'll need a place if you are to continue in the thread, and helping the fighters probably means you will no longer be a guard.. probably anyways..
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Re: The Arena OOC
« Reply #149 on: April 28, 2015, 05:37:24 PM »
Why do we assume we are going to a new arena?  o.O
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