Lol! Yours was just fine
we need more gluttonous wolfish stowaways in rp
He will get along great with Drakki!
Unless he eats all the food. Then bad things will happen ^^ Space survival 101. Dont eat all the rations on a ship filled with large preditory creatures with sharp pointy teeth. A. It makes you slower and its bad for your diet. B. All the afore mentioned preditory have nothing to eat when they get hungry...
But Drakki wouldn't hurt a fly...honest...
And yes. I do tend to fluff up my posts a bit either intentionally or not. Mostly i was trained to make a story so i kind of just imagine what I would want to read if I were reading the story and I tend to drift towards moderately detailed stories in my spare time.
Not tolkien level of detail where every rock would have a name and detailed back story, but enough to make it live a little. So far I am most please by this rp ^^
Also...it helps when you are job hunting have have an unhealthy ammount of free time