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Offline Xleena

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Darn.
« on: July 03, 2009, 06:37:58 PM »
This is a poem about my feelings, I know i'm a terrible person for feeling like this, but I wish I didn't.

As dark as a moonless night,
The love of a taken heart,
I admire you sadly,
As I am torn apart.

Your green eyes look into mine,
As we stood in that rain,
And when the thunder rumbled,
I held you whilst in pain.

I have no idea why,
You corrupt my other love,
Is it just a phase,
Some feeling I should shove?

I think to myself as I see my love,
That him and I are perfect,
But when I see you,
That love becomes a defect.

Maybe I should tell you,
Because you're unaware,
Just how much I love you,
And how I am ruled by despair.
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Re: Darn.
« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 07:21:13 PM »
Well, this doesn't make you a terrible person for feeling like this, not everyone can stay happy during a relationship, but those moments where the despair goes away while you are with that person are the best ones you can ever get.

PM me if you think I am way off, ok?
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Re: Darn.
« Reply #2 on: July 03, 2009, 08:54:19 PM »
Nono, thats really good ...thanks for caring :)
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