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Offline Ricco92

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My cure
« on: July 02, 2009, 10:17:06 PM »
So yer, this is like the 3rd or 4th song i've written and this time it a love song ,awwwww i hear u cry, and i thought tht i'll put it on here to see what everyone thinks.  and BTW i only spent a couple of hours on it. The title is jus like a prototype tho.

Title: My cure

To hold it in,
watching everything spin,
Can't hold on to what I want,
because im stretched so thin.
I'm stuck on the outside,
Pushing my feelings aside.

This is all too much to take,
I feel all by myself,
its hazerdous to my health,
Your love is my only cure.

(guitar solo (1 min 30))

We've been black and blue,
But still i cant help but feel like this for u,
I swear,
I'd rather be bare,
To see you suffer out there.

This is all too much to take,
I feel all by myself,
its hazerdous to my health,
Your love is my only cure.
I was hopeing i was wrong,
but i know im right.


You've cracked me,
You're my allergy,
Your the one i seek,
You make me feel so weak.
your in my dreams whilst i sleep

(guitar solo(20 seconds))

This is all too much to take,
I feel all by myself,
its hazerdous to my health,
Your love is my only cure.
I was hopeing i was wrong,
but i know im right

I long for your touch,
your scent,
your love
You're the one (X4).




 

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