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Offline kayle

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This time
« on: April 23, 2009, 09:24:54 PM »
Today has just been one of those days when, no matter how much I tell myself I don't need anyone else in my life, I feel lonely.  I see people walking down the halls at school holding hands, and it hurts.  It really does.  I ask myself, "Why can't I have that?" and my immediate response is always "You could have, but you blew it."  I just wrote this a few minutes ago.  I don't know how good it is, but whatever.


This Time


I would say it this time. 
It wouldn't be like last time,
When stubborn pride
Conquered emotion and true feelings.
Not like last time,
When my own silence
Left me brokenhearted.
I could do better,
I could learn,
If someone,
Anyone,
Would give me a chance.
I would scream it out loud, every second
Of every minute.
I would yell it, every minute
Of every hour.
I would sing it, every hour
Of every day.
I would whisper it, every day
Until the world collapsed.
If someone,
Anyone,
Would give me another chance
I would say those words
That mean so much;
"I Love You."




Comments and such are welcome, I guess...
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Re: This time
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 03:51:28 PM »
awww  :-[ you find someone *hugs*...its a VERY good poem kayle
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Re: This time
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 04:10:55 PM »
Thanks, Kida.
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Tell your children not to walk my way
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Tell your children not to hear my words
What they mean, what they say....
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Re: This time
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 08:14:18 PM »
Great poem, Kayle!
Don't worry, you'll find somebody.
I had been thinking a lot about giving up on love at one point...but now I'm with someone who I know I will be with forever.
It'll happen for you too.

It's kind of funny how Furries are usually good poets...
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Re: This time
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 09:01:47 PM »
thats an amazing poem kayle!

i know you'll find someone, just be patient,
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Re: This time
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 09:41:11 PM »
Patience isn't my strong suit, but maybe I can grow some...   :)
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Tell your children not to walk my way
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Tell your children not to hear my words
What they mean, what they say....
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