Author Topic: I drew this in like 30 mins (constant erasing) (Read 1376 times)

Conchobhar · « **on:** March 28, 2009, 11:32:32 PM »

I need someones opinion on this... I got the art technique thanks to Wingedzephyr!

Anyways i had to constantly erase, and correct. So I'm open for improvement suggestions

YumÃ© · « **Reply #1 on:** March 29, 2009, 01:10:09 AM »

Sorry if I'm just blabbing my personal OCD drawing opinions out but.. I think.. try bringing the snout a tiny bit up and make the nose slightly more level and bigger... and the same thing Alice said

but I think the head is vary good

YumÃ© · « **Reply #2 on:** March 29, 2009, 01:20:16 AM »

Actually the first one might look pretty good without those muzzle line things.. If only I could draw on a computer and figure what would look best

Conchobhar · « **Reply #3 on:** March 29, 2009, 01:28:58 AM »

I also redid the first picture, I did what u said. :lovestruck4:
here it is!

WingedZephyr · « **Reply #4 on:** March 29, 2009, 01:46:46 AM »

Not bad. I think it's quite an improvement from the drawings you posted in the other thread. The muzzle on the 3/4 view looks a little crooked though. The space where the eyes meet the top two corners of the muzzle should be equal - as it is, the corner that meets the left eye is way too far down. It should meet near the inside corner of the eye (like the right one does).