Defunct

[Somebody]

I like her, shes hawt.


Way to go Milo. You now ya just can't help but love the little guy

[Somebody]

Awesome work as always, keep it up. I like the standoff moment between Leena and the dragoness.

Also good job on cleaning up the previous installment. which I had already commented on but was still really good

[Somebody]

At this point Im gonna have to just create a macro that says "awesome chapter" because really I haven.t read a bad one yet.


The only complaint I have is I have to wait for the next one.

[Somebody]

I cant help but feel sorry for the guy, I could never imagine the pain of loosing your parents in such a way. But then again he seems so stunned I guess shock would pave the way for a bitter awakening.

I know what your thinking and the answer is yes, I cant wait for the next chapter piece

[Somebody]

Another great chapter, they definately add some ground to my hectic days as of late. I feel sorry for Nile, and I gotta respect Rellian for doing the whole friend deal. I cant wait to see how things turn out

[Somebody]

A great way to go out with a bang I say, a nice emotional piece and moment between Rellian and Nile. Though Im saddened that there will be more length between posts though. Who's shoulder will I be able to cry on due to this terribly tragedy! 

[Bueller]

Whoa Devault!
I am glad I read this, because this is one great story!
You really put some great detail in the whole story, not just in certain parts.
You got me hooked!

[PhantomStone]

dude i just read this chapter, way to go (srry for not posting in a while, you write long chapters man, it took me days to read 2 of them) this is great man i'm very impressed  way to go

[PhantomStone]

ok now i've read everything again, wow i feel so bad for nile and milo, man thats harsh, very good writing, man i can't wait for more, really this is like crack

[Somebody]

Sorry about my delay in reading it, life has been hectic. So leena thinks the dragoness is the killer. Interesting turn of events

I cant wait till you get more up hopefully this time I can read it more promptly.

[PhantomStone]

epic.... cool job man. sounds good, makes u wonder about who really is on the outside... lol

[PhantomStone]

dude you have to finish this man we got to know what happens man, nice job

[PhantomStone]

interesting, nice job can't wait for more

[Bueller]

I wonder who is going to be the killer in the end...

[Somebody]

Ah the story is coming along  very nicely, definitely one of my favorite reads in the section. You have a knack for keeping it interesting