A Wonderful Nobody

[Somebody]

Thank you, it was a pleasure to write. I had to stretch my artistic ability with writing a bit to do it but it was fun. Its even more fun when people read it and enjoy it enough to comment and ect.


It is hard to write a emotional piece because you feel it all, but your reader might not. Do I care what happens to this guy? Is the question you gotta keep in mind when writing, and you gotta think of it from a third person kind of view. Im overjoyed everybody likes it so much.

[Scyler]

I enjoyed reading it. I'd read it again too. It was a bit of a surprise when he offed himself, though...

[Somebody]

Good, I was hoping it wasn't gonna be too obvious

[Scyler]

Oh, I didn't mean it in a bad way, it just caught me off guard is all. I'm just glad the guy found peace.

[Devault]

Wow, talk about an ending...

[PhantomStone]

thats very sad how it ended, very nice and well written, and the fact that they endend up togeather forever was grat, it was just sorta sad thet they both had to die... i reall have a european way of looking at death

[Golge]

that truly is a masterpiece, im actually blinking back tears because of the emotions i felt from it. congratulations, you have done what few have been able to do, and that is write a piece that moved me to tears...thanks, i guess it feels nice to cry sometimes. :th_PyongLlora:

[Somebody]

Thank you for the comments, Im glad you liked the story. The whole first chapter was true story, and as bad as I can sometimes feel its easy to forget you can have it much worse. I was trying to portray some of that in all that mess

Even if you cant get the one you love, its important to be a good friend. Sometimes a good friend is just as important as one your with


EDIT : And for Gizor, thank you. Im moved that you felt such emotion from reading it. It must be a good piece after all (Thought Ill be lying to say I  didnt have this paranoia where I think everybody is just being nice )

[Scyler]

We're not being nice. We're being honest. This truly is a masterpiece...

[Somebody]

Such overwhelming response, I truly do appreciate it. It inspires me to write more in the future. Though dont count on them all being sappy love stories like this
 

 O:)

[Devault]

Devault is being nice and truthful, since they are one and the same right now

[Somebody]

Given your third person nature, Devault might be telling the truth but how about the guy speaking of him? j/k

[flames]

Words...words completely fail me Tezz. I cried at the beauty of the ending, of the brilliant description of his torture, of his despair and eventually, his peace.
This truly is a masterpiece, my friend. I was suspecting that ending (I tend to be good at spotting build-up to suicide), but that didn't spoil it...The ending reduced me to tears anyway,

[Somebody]

Thanks, I really appreciate it. I cleaned up the story a bit and made a official document out of it, in case I wanted to post it to my site or other