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New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« on: September 16, 2008, 11:12:16 AM »
Killing Me    August 26, 2008, 12:44:pm

Raise The Blade
Breathe in the chill of the shade
Let it fall
Take its sheath in my heart
the warmth of blood mixing with cloth
Tears in your eyes
A smile upon my face
You had enough
I had only just begun
This was a test
One I had failed
With my last breathe she stared
The words
I love you, dribbled through my blood
She moves on
Forgets me
The earth takes me
Goodbye
Thank you,
For Killing me.

Luca




My Story


Before My Story Begins
Things Must End
My Heart Torn and Shattered
There is your entrance
Life Goes On
Its a story shared by all
Every Page a Plot Twist
Will You Read My Story?
Or Simply Burn The Pages?
Your Choice
My Life
Our Life.

-Luca


((Btw I am going to get Fur Calibur Open again but have patience with me please <3))

 

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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #1 on: September 16, 2008, 01:01:43 PM »
Lovely poems Koara. Their great.
Sad but great.

(Take your time with Fur Calibur, we'll wait until you have time to open it again)
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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2008, 01:02:35 PM »
nice :D i like it
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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #3 on: September 16, 2008, 08:57:15 PM »
Nice poems, seem to be emotion in there possibly extending fromRl circumstances?
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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #4 on: September 17, 2008, 11:21:33 AM »
I'm sorry honey. *hugs* They're really good though! Nice structure, background, and emotion. I hope they didn't come from life experience. That's just too much..
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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #5 on: September 17, 2008, 03:05:39 PM »
Sadly they did come from life experiences -_-
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My dear there is no danger
Can't you see they turn blind eyes
To we swift and spotlight strangers?
Oh before the rush is over
We will be revered again
While the victims still recover
Oh,
Are we running toward death?
I have met him times before
He adores us like the rest
Oh even if we're discovered
Just be sure to wear your best
We will surely make the covers


I am a Hermaphrodite and proud of it!

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Re: New Poetry and A Hidden Message =D
« Reply #6 on: September 17, 2008, 10:42:12 PM »
Don't tell me one of them was your dad. I'll kill him personally.
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