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Author Topic: Heart's Song of Cry  (Read 1871 times)

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Offline Raphial

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Heart's Song of Cry
« on: June 02, 2008, 06:16:00 PM »
I'm done with this dreadful heart
Here I write my stupid art
I'm done with my part

He stood me tall
He stood me proud
He stood me with care
But now he's an enemy.

He told me he'd be my brother
Not to be the same as all the other
But to make sure we stood tall together

He took me in under his Wing
Maybe that's why this always has a sting
It's always more than my heart can sing

I'm done with my heart
With this stupid art
Here I end my part

He told me few
He told me lots
He told me stay through

But now he's done
With my past memories gone
He was the only one

I trusted him more than most
This I do not boast
We thought of brotherhood at the most

I miss my friend
My companion
My brother

I miss my other.




Something I wrote awhile back when my best friend's girlfriend pretty much ruined our friendship....so I wrote this when I got upset about it one day.

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Re: Heart's Song of Cry
« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2008, 10:58:44 PM »
Nice.

Short, Simple yet containing a large range of downtrodden emotions.

Great work.

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Re: Heart's Song of Cry
« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2008, 04:25:10 PM »
Nice.

Short, Simple yet containing a large range of downtrodden emotions.

Great work.
heh heh thanks! I've seen some of your work as well, and I'm impressed to say the least ^^

 

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