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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #15 on: May 10, 2008, 07:36:20 PM »
I am? That's new.
Indeed. It's not like I've blushed 1001 times already in an RP because of you or anything... :snicker:

Me? That can't be. Which one??
Umm...Crystals of Slimta repeatedly in both male and female forms, once in Furry Mountain Lodge I believe (Along with Dakota) and I think you may have embarassed Flames once or twice in Campsite...although it's usually his/her fault...
Moving swiftly away from my repeated blushing, what do you think of my latest poems?
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #16 on: May 11, 2008, 07:03:00 PM »
I am? That's new.
Indeed. It's not like I've blushed 1001 times already in an RP because of you or anything... :snicker:

Me? That can't be. Which one??
Umm...Crystals of Slimta repeatedly in both male and female forms, once in Furry Mountain Lodge I believe (Along with Dakota) and I think you may have embarassed Flames once or twice in Campsite...although it's usually his/her fault...
Moving swiftly away from my repeated blushing, what do you think of my latest poems?

Must I repeat myself?
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #17 on: May 11, 2008, 07:05:27 PM »
No, I'm just being a sleep-deprived idiot as always.
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #18 on: May 11, 2008, 10:40:19 PM »
No, I'm just being a sleep-deprived idiot as always.

Good. Then I will repeat once more: Holy $%^@.
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #19 on: May 12, 2008, 07:29:01 PM »
Breaking Out!
I open my eyes,
Look far within,
Deep breath as I set myself free...
I'm Breaking Out!
Destroying your lies,
Throwing away my so-called kin,
As I become want I need to be...
Breaking Out, being loud!
This is what it means to me:
Slice it up, take them down!
Any price to remain free,
Darkness, hear my plea:
Surrender the power that's me!
Demons in, demons all,
We are confined no more...
Breaking out, controlling you!
This is why we came out, such glee:
Infect the heart, rip it up,
Nobody could have worse luck!
Breaking Out!
...We're freeeee!

(Don't even ask. I have no idea about this one either o_O)
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #20 on: May 12, 2008, 10:15:15 PM »
Breaking Out!
I open my eyes,
Look far within,
Deep breath as I set myself free...
I'm Breaking Out!
Destroying your lies,
Throwing away my so-called kin,
As I become want I need to be...
Breaking Out, being loud!
This is what it means to me:
Slice it up, take them down!
Any price to remain free,
Darkness, hear my plea:
Surrender the power that's me!
Demons in, demons all,
We are confined no more...
Breaking out, controlling you!
This is why we came out, such glee:
Infect the heart, rip it up,
Nobody could have worse luck!
Breaking Out!
...We're freeeee!

(Don't even ask. I have no idea about this one either o_O)

I <3 IT!
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #21 on: May 13, 2008, 07:03:58 PM »
Love: Is it worth it?
What is love?
Can I see it?
Do I need it?
Will I ever feel it?
...I don't really know,
I may not care,
About such a thing I cannot bear.
I'm told I cannot truly live,
If I love is something I don't recieve or give...
Is it worth the pain and sorrow?
If we break up, will my heart be intact tommorrow?
If I commit and you don't give back,
Could endure the pain of those things that we lack?

What is love?
Can I feel it?
Will I know it all?
To feel elation,
With such attraction,
What will I do when we fall?
When we all just fall?
There's no denying the truth,
I'm one they love to hate.
Any love that I get I'll ruin for sure,
Don't ask me the question if you value your soul!

What is love?
Is it worth it?
Will I die inside,
Or will it turn the tide:
Of my sorrow, my selfishness...
Can I feel it?
Can I ever know what it is?
If I die and you loved me,
Would your heart live on?
I ask Eternity this,
Question Life about that,
Just what is love?
Is it worth the loss?
If or when, why or how?
Will the final result just be...
Broken hearts all around...?
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #22 on: May 13, 2008, 08:57:06 PM »
....*wide eyes*... How did you know??! Nearly no one recognizes the feeling as it is. And you captured it in its entirety. Awesome job, Flames dearest. I give it a 10 out of 10.
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #23 on: May 15, 2008, 09:59:50 PM »
Storm of Sorrow
It is raining inside,
Inside where my heart hides.
Tears of memories best forgotten,
Unless it is Sorrow that you follow...
No point in handing you my heart,
I'll just cause a Storm tommorrow,
Fueled on by the pains of yesterday.
If I had done this or that,
Would it have a changed a thing?
Or would the anguish still be king?
I feel such gravity,
So much inside of me...
I wish...and wish that,
I had never, not ever,
Let you go.
It is raining hurtful tears,
I should have been your umbrella,
But I was caught away by the Storm of Sorrow...


(Not exactly my best work here, but I suppose it could have been worse)

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Affection from a troubled Soul
Everytime I see you,
Everytime I feel somethin' new...
Whenever the sun shines down,
Whenever I lose my massive frown...
Everywhere joy flows free,
Everywhere we can live happily,
These are what keep on reminding me,
What you and me could be.

I don't know why,
I can't keep my mind off you.
Even when I should break down and cry,
Your affection shines through!
I may just live afted all,
Pick ourselves up from our fall,
Is this love?
Of eternal doves?
Or is it our fate,
To eternally hate?
I don't know...
Does it matter anyway?

I'm just a troubled soul,
Clutching on to a lump of coal,
That was my heart before you came...
And re-kindled my dying flame!
I ask again why:
You do this even though I'll just make you cry...
Cry with my twisted, corrupt lies,
Why can't you just "bye?"
Leave me be and protect yourself,
Before my madness endangers your health!
Tell me how...
You're always there!
Tell me why...
You're never afraid!
Tell my when...
You first started to care!
Tell my who...
You really are!
Tell me where...
You'll finally let go!

...I'm not alone anymore...

(The above was meant to be sung rather than read out loud and that's why it may seem a little different...)
« Last Edit: May 19, 2008, 07:02:24 PM by flames »
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #24 on: May 19, 2008, 08:47:36 PM »
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #25 on: May 19, 2008, 10:54:41 PM »
I love all of them. It's hardto pick (a) favorite(s). They're all so good!
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #26 on: May 21, 2008, 06:00:07 PM »
Friends or something more?
I gaze into your shining eyes,
Wondering what secrets they hide.
Twiddling my fingers, unable to speak,
Red spreading across my cheek.
I can't bring myself to ask for anything more,
Then the friendship you give, despite my heart so sore...
We can never be more then just friends,
Supporting each other through life's twisting bends.
We could never risk that with a relationship,
I'm afraid that if I ask you might just flip...
It's selfish of me to ask you like this,
If our friendship gives you such bliss.
But could we ever be anything more?
Or would we wake up on the floor?
Is it worth the risk of losing you?
I really don't know what to do...
How can I say: "I love you..."?
Should we be friends or something more...?

Love: How did it find me?
I had never believed that love was true.
It was just something for others to do...
I would never know it,
Not a single bit.
But that all changed one day,
When I heard you say...
That you enjoyed being with me,
That my presence filled you with glee.

It was then that colour returned to my world,
I realised the truth and began to unfurl...
Not truly believing a word,
Until your kiss set me as free as a bird,
I asked the world if I deserved,
To be so dearly loved?
I still don't know,
Just follow the flow...
Being all I ever wish to be;
Love: How did you find me?
« Last Edit: May 21, 2008, 06:43:26 PM by flames »
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #27 on: May 22, 2008, 12:20:19 AM »
xD You are an amazing artist, Flames my friend.
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #28 on: May 22, 2008, 12:24:29 AM »
Thanks. What can I say? I had good inspiriation and I wouldn't be writing any if it weren't for you Sam...
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Re: I've started writing some poems...
« Reply #29 on: May 22, 2008, 12:46:28 AM »
Thanks. What can I say? I had good inspiriation and I wouldn't be writing any if it weren't for you Sam...

You're pulling my leg. I don't influence anybody this much. I believe its because of other people/events/things. Don't pin it all on me, I don't deserve it. Honestly.
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