The Hero Eternal: Warrior

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This something I've been working on for quite a while. It's set during the year 24xx and is part of a trilogy that is currently being written.
Anyway, here's the link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2482661/1/The_Hero_Eternal_Warrior
It is not a furry-only fic, but one that i hope all can enjoy. Anthros are not the main focus, although they appear.
I would say more, but that'll spoil it. Let's just say that the world not's in a very good situation right now and there's a bit of a war going on.
Tell me what you think.

(edit: If you came here from the Fire in Darkness thread please note that this particular version of the story is somewhat outdated and some details may be incorrect.
Further reading includes the unfinished continuation of this story, "The Hero Eternal: Resurrection" and "FireWind Chronicles", which is a collection of various related stories generally set a good few thousand years at the least after Warrior)

[Dr. Strange]

I like it. It's very well-written.

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Thanks. Not bad for a 14-year old, eh? Have you got any critiscm for it?

[Dr. Strange]

Hm....Not really. Except that maybe you could write in third person too and then see how it goes. Or add more detail to it.

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I'm planning on having the sequel contain more 3rd person perspective and I suppose I could add a bit more detail to it at some point. Thanks again for reading.

[Dr. Strange]

You're welcome. I enjoy giving constructive criticism when others ask for it.