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Author Topic: Writing atm planning on starting to make videos!!!  (Read 1178 times)

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Offline Folic Acid

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Writing atm planning on starting to make videos!!!
« on: July 10, 2016, 06:41:41 AM »
So tgis is where I will post some of my music I ask for anyone not to steal lyrics because I plan on making it for real soon.




Now let me welcome you to my real town
Where All got the big bucks and rappin' folks all around
See this isn't how I was raised
But I shook that box eighty eight
And now the dope boys hotta than hells gate
But I'm still in the shade
With my life all made
So as these rocks fall on us
I'ma be up in my truck
Chillin


Now we back in real time
cause I just pulled you back without tryin'
Get enveloped in the music of these modern rappers
All slow and all for show but I'ma real rapper










Well that is a bit going to change it some smooth it out you know all I ask for is constructive criticism so please help in any way.
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