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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #405 on: May 18, 2014, 12:34:50 AM »
Too late!  The next chapter Truck Trials and The Hitchin' Vixen?  Yeah but nah XD  That's not it's name but here it is:







The fox walks around the truck as the tiger locks up.  Wight the truck is black and for the most part still shiny.  The trailer reminds Trixsie of the waste management trucks she used to share the early morning roads with.  Not square but rounded like a carton of bad milk, with two rigid bands reinforcing it.  There are signs warning of contamination risks.  “So, what is in here?  I’ve felt it shifting all morning” asks the vixen, holding a paw to the cool metal.  “Well” begins Tyga, “did you hear about that landslide, the big one in New Arcadia?”  Trixsie nods, her face solemn.  “That’s right” he continues, “though technically a landside obliterated Old Arcadia and a mudslide took some of that debris plus the old cemetery and buried New Arcadia… anyway there was a lot of public pressure to make a monument to the dead and rehouse the remains from the old cemetery, but money dried up and now there is to be one great mass grave and memorial.  This is the first of about thirty loads for the new memorial”.  Trixsie pulls her paw back from the metal suddenly less comfortable.  “I’m gonna go order something, what d’ya fancy?” asks the vixen, recovering quickly, only to receive a naughty grin in reply.




Entering ‘the diner’ as she was charitably thinking of it, Trixsie queues to order.  Immediately she sees two wolves leaning over a worried cheetah girl.  One senses he is being watched and turns to face the fox recognising her immediately.  The wolves break off from the poor girl who makes a run for it and approach Trixsie “How ‘bout that Halffang, looks like you just can’t dump some trash” jokes the scrawnier wolf, the fox slaps his face leave four deep scratches.  Halffang grins but the bleeding wolf lunges forward and launches a calloused fist at the vixen.  She faces it unflinching, but the fist stops short with a dull smack, caught by a much larger paw.  “You need to learn how to talk to a lady” says Tyga, now applying pressure to the seemingly tiny wolf’s paw, “BAD DOG!”.  Halffang is holding a butterfly-knife and Tyga and Trix are suddenly in motion.  The great cat extends his claws destroying the wolf’s paw and leaps at Halffang, taking him down through the countertop in a storm of splintered wood and wolf blood.  The vixen backflips, landing on her hindpaws behind a third wolf wielding a fire-axe as he heads towards Tyga.  The wolf with the shredded paw bolts for the exit and Tyga stands up from the remains of the counter and the wolf, he stands alone.  The fox attacks the axeman biting deep into his neck with her sharp but small teeth, he merely throws her aside as he raises the axe and swings it hard and low at the tiger.  The fox hits a pole hard and goes down, Tyga already moving to her, steps on the axe in mid-flight, jarring it from the grip of the wolf who only realises his blow will never land even as he himself is toss aside with a broken neck.  Picking up Trixsie, Tyga sees she is conscious while outside a car revs loudly.  “I’ll be fine Tyg” whimpers the fox, then growling deep “go after them, GET THEM FOR ME!”


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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #406 on: May 18, 2014, 01:18:18 AM »
Well that... Escalated. Oh well I still love it!
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #407 on: May 18, 2014, 04:31:13 PM »
The short action sequence. OOH IM FOAMING WITH EXCITEMENT!!!
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #408 on: May 18, 2014, 04:50:41 PM »
Hoo hoo!  I hope it's exciting, I wanted to have more in this installment but ran out of time.  Action continues soon!

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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #409 on: May 18, 2014, 06:21:11 PM »
Great. It is fun to read slowly.
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #410 on: May 18, 2014, 06:34:30 PM »
Thanks Vulpy!  Once I'm done I'll have to cut and paste it all into one entry and read it myself with the objectivity of distance.

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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #411 on: May 19, 2014, 06:40:35 PM »
Moar action?  Yes sir I want moar...



The vixen stands and walks slowly to the exit as the tiger runs outside after the injured wolf.  The wolf is not in sight but Tyga sees more of the pack.  One, having tagged the engine grill with ‘Trash’ is smashing in the windscreen with a hatchet, a second is writing ‘Victim’ on the trailer then throws his spray can as a ’68 Mustang convertible pulls up.  The car is red with chrome and the driver is jet black.  The car revs as Trash and Victim jump in, Tyga reaches Wight as the three wolves accelerate away.  In the sleeper cab is a compartment; Tyga takes out a double-barrelled shotgun engraved with the name ‘The Kindest Thing’.  Now the truck is in motion and the loaded shotgun and spare shells sit amidst shattered glass beside the tiger.


Behind Trixsie, the injured wolf sneaks up on her with a knife in his good paw and stabs viciously at her back!  She turns around just as he falls from a frying pan to the head; a young she-wolf is holding the pan and wears a staff name badge saying ‘Juliet’.  She kicks the fallen wolf for good measure and an old score, and grins at the fox.  Trixsie looks her up and down, her big bright eyes, denim cut-offs and t-shirt that declares ‘The Customer is Always Right Stupid’ but they are interrupted by the sound of the rest of the wolf pack in a tow-truck speeding after Tyga and sending a cloud of dust into the air from the gravel carpark.  “Uh oh… I’ve got to help Tyga!” cries the fox.  Juliet, a quick judge of character throws Trixsie her keys “Sky-blue Triumph Tiger 800XC, and not a scratch on her” she says and kicks the wolf at her feet as he starts to move.


The Mustang rockets down the straight, flat highway, the Volvo not far behind, looming tall and menacing.  With the windscreen smashed out the truck’s cab looks like some giant robot locust fresh from being bottled in a bar fight.  The face of the driver is grim but obscured.  Jet drives and Trash howls and hoots at the truck while Victim drinks from a stubby then hurls it at Wight.  The bottle shatters on the air dam and Victim grabs another.  Trash loads a crossbow as Victim throws another half-drunk bottle, smashing the driver’s side mirror.  Far behind a dented old tow-truck is following but not gaining any ground.  Meanwhile further back, Trixsie’s hair and tail blaze behind her like an angry red comet as she rides, head down.


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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #412 on: May 19, 2014, 07:02:54 PM »
Gotta love how red she is ^°^
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #413 on: May 19, 2014, 07:11:35 PM »
Hey time for a joke?


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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #414 on: May 20, 2014, 10:02:29 PM »
Oh, a new type of writing i absolutely loathe.
Stick to storywriting?
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #415 on: May 24, 2014, 10:29:23 AM »
He tucks me in and kisses my hair
Says "I'll be here, whenever you're there"
Reads my nonsense, laughs at my jokes
Nuzzles my neck and surprise snugglegropes

Lets me find out just who I am
Cheers  me on when I don't think I can
Knows my dark moments and loves me in spite
Wakes at the same time as me in the night

Surprises me each and every day
Make me feel like the song 'She's Got a Way'
Makes me feel like I actually matter
Is amused instead of annoyed by my chatter

I want him to know that we are absurd
Some crazy tale I wouldn't believe if I heard
My love with all of my heart and my mind do I send
So much more than a mate: my dearest, sweet friend

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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #416 on: May 27, 2014, 02:23:20 PM »
Oh excelent. I find it cute.
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #417 on: May 27, 2014, 02:36:16 PM »
Glad you like it!


Keen to do the final installment of story, but have been so busy.  Maybe tonight...

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« Reply #418 on: May 27, 2014, 02:41:42 PM »
Yay! *Hugs* I love it!
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Re: Trixsie's odds and ends
« Reply #419 on: June 03, 2014, 05:11:06 PM »
Well to start off the writing from beginning to end really improves, though several small grammer and punctuation errors are made the stories are well written. (who doesnt make mistake i have no clue if you do let me know!) i enjoyed the stories most because i have written a few short stories and am currently working on one now. poems i enjoy but yours i loved i read from beginning to end and felt like i sorta related to them. the one on page 9 i believe was really dark and i loved it the most. hope you keep going ill continue to read.
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