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DarkWolf
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writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
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March 30, 2012, 04:36:16 AM »
I'm writing a novel called The Unknown and would like some feedback about the first chapter so i know if i should keep writing or just give up.
here's the first chapter
http://205.196.123.164/kow93twn4hfg/ubbd7u0c68w16mq/the+unknown+chapter+1.pdf
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Re: writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
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I am an author myself and more than willing to edit a chapter or two if asked... though can I ask you to PM or post it here? I'm having difficulties getting it from that site.
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DarkWolf
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Species: Tundra Wolf
Coloring: Black fur
Height: 209cm tall in anthro form. 145cm long in feral form (not including tail) tail is 58cm long in feral form and 64cm long in anthro form
Weight: 50kg in feral form and 65kg in anthro form
Build: im rather thin for my size but not to the point of it being a problem.
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Re: writing a novel and am in need of harsh criticism X3
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try this link.
http://www.mediafire.com/?ubbd7u0c68w16mq
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