Fight Against Darkness OOC

[ToucanSammi]

Is this roleplay still open for members? If so, how many characters are allowed (unless it's strictly for your main fursona)?

[Aldrea945]

It's open, but you have to post regularly.
 
Two to three total, including your fursona.

[Cifero Windtail]

I'm all for you joining, Sammi. We're always happy to have more RPers....

[ToucanSammi]

It's open, but you have to post regularly.
 
Two to three total, including your fursona.

Okay, thank you! Expect forms soon... -ish. It may be a while; fellow roleplayer friends that I know have razzed me about taking too long to develop my characters, haha.

[Cifero Windtail]

It's cool, take your time.

[Kaya]

remember please keep one line chatter to a minimum, if you want, rp a little of it out in chat then have one of you post it as a joint operation instead of
so and so : blah blah
 
the having this post
 
other person: blah.
 
please do this
 
Main person: talking person1
talking person 2
talkking person1
 
or something to that effect it will cut down on the small lined chatter.. please, if that is not available to be done..... PLEASE PLEASE be  a Little more descriptive..... again to cut back on the one lined posts. love you all just try to keep that in mind no ones perfect but lets try to keep this running smoothly. maws.
 
(and i myself am NOT exempt from this rule I'm learning to do this as well. I'm getting better though )

[Aldrea945]

Cif, White-Heart, I shouldn't have to say this.  IF YOU'RE IN A SCENE, THERE BETTER BE A REASON.  Guys, I don't mind you there.  I don't mind if you show up.  BUT MAKE IT PLAUSIBLE.  If you happen on the scene, have a reason for going there.  And "Sixth sense" doesn't count.  For anyone.
 
You also have to LENGTHEN YOUR POSTS.  Kaya said she already warned you about this Cif, and I don't know about you White-Heart.  Kaya is second in command, and if she emails you, there's a problem.  Listen to her.  Roleplays need to be fun, engaging, and not tedious to read through.  One and two sentence posts don't fly, and detract from it as a whole.  Lengthen your posts.
 
White-Heart, this is your first warning.  Two left before you're booted.
 
Cif, this is your second warning.  One left before you're booted.
 
HEED THE WARNINGS YOU GET.  THEY COME BACK TO BITE.

[Cifero Windtail]

Aww.... that sucks....
Hmm... maybe I should look and wait before I post...
 

[Luke White-Heart]

....sorry....I'll be more careful....

[Aldrea945]

It's okay WH.  I just don't want this to keep happening.  Try to go back and lengthen your posts.  You aren't adding enough to them to tell me what you're doing.  Are you hiding?  In the open?  In the building?  Watching through the window?  Standing?  Crouching?  Comfortable?  Uncomfortable?  Are you nervous?  Confident?  Wary?  Downright scared?  You both need to include these details, and then some.  Reading through a roleplay should be akin to reading a book.  You want to know the characters, the setting, the story.  You can't do that if there's nothing to go on.  It'd be like a comic with only light grey stick figures and speech bubbles.  There's nothing to pull you in.  Add to your posts guys.  It helps everyone.

[Kaya]

cif.. the club apearing isnt pratical. its like saying that i pulled a seven foot sowrd out of a miny skirt and it was 'magically' conciled. you cant keep trying to stop all the conflict. a GOOD STORY NEEDS CONFLICT. without it the story will fall flat and begin to become cumbersome and will DIE. so please, dont end fights that quickly. it is a serious roleplay killer. -_-

[Cifero Windtail]

Um... what club?
 
Well... I see your point. If you want I could change my post so that the fight continues.

[Aldrea945]

You pulled a club out of your sleeve Cif.  You changed it already, but You're still grating my nerves in this scene.  You've made it so no one can touch you.  Cif, you either need to include that you're wearing something EARLY, or ignore the urge to put it in period.  You're becoming a Boring Invincible Hero, the definition of godmodding.  That Mithril shirt?  It makes you virtually invincible.  This isn't hard.  Don't drop things on the players like this.  Let us know before you say you have something (The breastplate) so it doesn't come off as "ZOMG Haha, I had my invincible (Enter name of object) all along!  You didn't notice?  Haha, NOOBS."  That is often what it comes off as.
 
At this point, I have no idea where you are, What happened, or where I am in relation, so I'm unable to post. 
 
Serpington, This goes for your sword too.  If you have something that you can't sheath in your sleeve (4-6") or smaller (4" or less), it needs a description before hand.  Otherwise, it tends to come off as the reast of the players being completely blind to their surroundings.
 
This won't count on strikes.  It will if I have to reiterate this.  It applies to everyone, so if I do it as well, point it out.

[serpington]

sorry, it didn't occure to me to mention whats in  the bag i carrys all the time,  well all thats in it is that blade and four smaller ones no larger than a  foot long each. the only other weapon i carry is the small dagger that i've already mentioned.

[Kaya]

thanks guys. it helps. a lot.