Right-o! I havnt managed much writing recently (too much re-painting of doorways and paintballing! ) But, fair is fair, and i shall show all you guys an' gals the next part to the story...
It seems your catching up, soon i'l have to put this thread on pause to give me time to write more! Until then, back to re-editing and writing Weaving between the jostling crowds of workers and Drones, Tanaka Chenova continued to wipe the greasy stains from her hands. Turning into a smaller and much less crowded corridor, she stopped beside an open doorway, above which a grimy sign read
-“Regime Information booth no.48”-As she walked in, the single fluorescent light strip overhead buzzed erratically, before finally bursting into light. The room was only large enough for a single person to stand in, due to one whole wall being taken up by a tall drone. The machine reached from floor to ceiling, and a large touch screen sat at shoulder height in its centre. It too flickered on, and displayed a welcoming message, along with a tinny melodic tone.
---Good Day Citizen, How may I be of service? ---A long list of information subjects scrolled up the screen, which when clicked on, opened up into another inventory of sub-topics. All documents stored in the Drones had to be written by Regime-certified writers, and were updated on a semi-regular basis. Tanaka spent several moments searching, before finding what she had been looking for. The machine hummed, and the suitable text file opened:
---Regime Information Drone, Query: ---
---Military Caste Drones, Colony 2 Defence force---
The Military Caste is a collective group, tasked with ensuring the safety of all Colonial residents. Very few caste members actually participate in surface guard duties, due to the hostile conditions of Colony 2. Instead, vast numbers of co-ordinated Drone systems are used to run automated patrols, across the planet’s surface.
Each individual Mining City is assigned its own defence force of around twenty thousand automatons, comprising a mixture of MarkII Tank Drones and other, less common military variants. The mining cities are all responsible for the maintenance of their individual defence systems. A larger planetary defence force is maintained collectively by all cities, which is used to patrol the off-limits northern hemisphere.
The Drones suffer heavy damage while on active patrol, and thus are rotated back into repair slots regularly. The damage is mainly caused by treacherous dust storms, but also from minor asteroid fragments as well as simulated combat between city defence systems. Without the Military Caste Drones, as well as the men and women who constantly keep them repaired, Colony 2 would not be the secure and powerful authority it is today.
---Link to information file: Colony 2, and Colonial city Ruszáyev ---
---Link to information file: The almighty Regime---
---Link to information file: Colony 1---Although not entirely satisfied with the explanation, Tanaka turned to walk out of the cubicle. She stopped abruptly; the very last link on the screen had caught her attention. A puzzled frown crept across her brow, as she leant close to the flickering letters. “Colony one?” She muttered under her breath, that couldn’t be right. She had been through information Drones before, on various occasions, and never had there been mention of another colony.
In fact, from all her recent years of Regime-certified education, Tanaka couldn’t remember anything about an original planet. Although during her tutoring, she hadn’t really learnt much at all. The engineer in the teaching cubicle beside her, had proven to be ample... distraction.
Tanaka leant out of the cubicle, and glanced briefly down the steel corridor beyond. For once it was silent and empty, beside the hum of cooling vents, and buzz of fluorescent lights. Everyone was at their appointed work shifts by now, and only the occasional clatter of footsteps echoed through the corridors. She ducked quickly back in, and turned to the screen again; the flickering words were still there.
Licking her lips, Tanaka spoke softly under her breath “O-kay... Let’s see what we got here.” She tapped hesitantly on the link, and waited. The machine whirred, and the beginnings of a text file scrolled up the screen.
---Regime Information Drone, Query: ---
---Colony 1---
To this day, the Regime continues to ensure that...The screen flickered suddenly, hazy static blurring the words into disarray. Tanaka took a rapid step back, as the Drone whirred again, this time high-pitched and buzzing. The screen flickered, as a message flashed vividly across it:
---Critical System Error, Unauthorised Data Access---The screen whined even louder, static reaching a soaring crescendo. Suddenly it died entirely, along with the only light in the cubicle ceiling. Outside, the sharp -plink- of fluorescent lights going out, echoed through the swiftly darkening corridor.
Tanaka stood trembling, as suffocating darkness pressed in. Instinctively she did the one thing she could; shout... “Fracking hell... Somebody... Help!” Frozen panic coursed through her mind, as she reached blindly towards the door. Amidst the confusion she stumbled, and the side of her head struck cold steel with a sickening crack.
O-kay... another rather long section... but i think it has to be read as a whole... mistakes and errors still loiter around in my writing, so any help in weeding them out would be great! Well, hope you enjoy...