Thanks Asia, hopefully its a good sign that there arent any major problems with it
Anyhow, next section coming up as soon as i finish checking it over ----
Okay... next section The end to another long work shift was signalled by two claxon blasts, which resonated throughout the engineer bay. Everywhere, tools where set down, and the vast crowd of Engineers surged towards the bulkhead doors. Jareth sighed, and slipped his data-pad into the large pouch on his belt. He stayed at his post beside a work-bench, watching as weary workers left the Repair bay. Shifts in the city where carefully correlated, so that no assembly or repair line was ever truly shut down. Work continued day in and day out, so sure enough, new teams of engineers where marching in through the bay entrances.
“Evening Chief Jareth...” A wiry man walked past, nodding to Jareth and clapping a passing Engineer on the back. The engineer returned the gesture, nodding to Jareth also.
Jareth nodded in return to both of them and yawned widely, despite his best attempts to hold it in. He addressed the first of the two, with polite familiarity “Another night shift, Chief Terrill?”
The man shrugged half-heartedly, flicking through several memos on his data-pad... “For us, this is practically the daytime!” Jareth laughed wearily in return, an expression mostly of sympathy, as he started to walk away. But instead of following the main stream of Engineers, he turned left towards the express elevators.
Stopping outside the door of elevator #A38, Jareth swiped his wrist across the red panel set into the steel. Every citizen of the colony had an identity-chip placed under their skin from birth, which monitored their rank in the Regime. Some elevators or doors, such as this one, required a higher level of authority to be used or opened. Waiting patiently for the machine to process the information, Jareth noticed Engineer Tanaka, also walking apart from the main crowds. Most Engineers would be making their way to the mess hall, perhaps to play a game of Red-diamond cards, and wind down before heading off for bunk-time. It seemed he was not the only one with other intentions. “Tanaka! Where you headed?”
She stopped momentarily beside him, wiping the oil off her hands with a cloth distractedly. “Oh, I just... Just got some paperwork to finish off, Chief... You?”
Jareth nodded approvingly, motioning a thumb towards the elevator that he was still waiting for “Just going up to deliver some memos, at one of the Merchant-Trade Offices... Routine stuff...”
Tanaka smiled, giving him the conspiratorial wink again “Ah, right you are sir.” And with that she carried on down the corridor, against the flow of other people. Jareth watched her disappear from sight around the corner, as the elevator door opened with a hiss.
The express elevator was much smaller than the maintenance lifts, and the steel surfaces still had their chrome finish. Tapping the touch screen beside the door, Jareth quickly found level -860 in the upper sector. Merchant-Caste workers were mostly higher ranking than engineers; and so many worked much further up, in the vast-tiered city.
The lift set off with a low hum, speeding up as the numbers on the display flashed backwards, running from level -6000 and counting. Jareth himself had only been at the planetary surface once in his lifetime. He had been sent up to repair a vital air conduit, and a brief glimpse was all he saw, through a pane of storm-proof Perspex. All he had seen on that day was howling wind, and constant swirling dust that obscured everything; a bleak landscape and nothing more. Drumming his fingers against his belt, Jareth waited as the elevator rose up out of the city’s depths.
Okies.... thats it for the next section... not particularly exciting, but its leading up to bigger stuff help/comments appreciated as always...