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Killing moon
« on: April 24, 2010, 08:31:13 PM »
Howling loud as your feet pound the ground. Running faster as the prey scurries away. Though it shall not escape for it is weak. The blood soaks the dead leaves as it's running slows down.  It halts to a stop, now's your chance to bite down.
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Re: Killing moon
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 10:01:42 PM »
that was cool, nice little poem. The jumping from perspectives threw me a bit, but now i look at it properly, it works. good job.
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"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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