The Animus OOC (Dead)

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I have to join...you knew I had to....anything I need to work on and I'll change it.

Name: Gavin Hepeho

Species: Monkey (Ze-ite)

Height: 5' 9"

Weight: 132

Age: 19

Appearance: Gavin is a very light colored monkey, and in the sun his hair even takes on the color of caramel. He has long brown hair that falls down to his shoulders and frames his face. He is insanely lean. On his tail is a bandage. He prefers to wear good 'ol jeans...with no shirt.

Job Before Apocalypse: Waiter in a small-town diner.

Weapon: >.< For melee, he uses a metal baseball bat. For anything requiring range, a hunter's rifle taken from a forest service station...

Bio: Rasied as an only child, Gavin grew up in a trailer park in a small town. He could be found daydreaming more often than not the older he grew, instead of vice versa. He had fallen in love with a girl named Trisha, but she and her family packed up and left  for another place (not that anyplace was safe) after things started to get crazy. As Gavin grew more and more concerned about what was going on in the world, and as his daydreams grew darker and darker...he decided he needed to get up off his tail and do something.

[Entaru]

I was hoping you'd drop in.  Welcome to the ranks.  If you want help with weapons, might I suggest a metal baseball bat (for melee) and hunting rifle.

Gabag, I just noticed that you have two ranged weapons.  Please change one to melee.

[White Wolf Guardian]

Alright I have some questions for ya Entaru since I'm not overly sure about the story even though I do understand the basis. Are we the players coming as refugees into Anchorage, Alaska and how should we approach coming into this area, like are we allowed to drive/fly there and can we just "get the gun barrels rolling" by posting our intros in any order?

[Entaru]

Negatory.  You are all already there.  You folks are going to be the ones excommunicated.  I'm going to wait until everyone does an introductory post, and then the 'leaders' will choose your characters to leave.  That's how the story begins.  Just try to act surprised.

[White Wolf Guardian]

Ohhhh alright, that would make sense in terms of excitement to be found in the story. So does that mean I can post an introductory now and then simply wait for others to come and then continuation posts can follow along as planned?

[Entaru]

Si senor! (<--meant to be ironic)  Go ahead and post.

[Gabag]

I was hoping you'd drop in.  Welcome to the ranks.  If you want help with weapons, might I suggest a metal baseball bat (for melee) and hunting rifle.

Gabag, I just noticed that you have two ranged weapons.  Please change one to melee.

oh my bad, i'll change dat

[Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy]

Ok, I can no longer sit back and stay silent on this. Sain has to go.

Misspells all over his post. And they make me want to cry.
37mm don't exist. No such ammunition.
Magically transports from his room to the meeting? WTF?

His posts are an RP's nightmare and don't really seem to put any heart or though into it. My vote for his ejection immediately.

[White Wolf Guardian]

My only complaints here are mainly the 37mm ammunition and the javelin, I mean depending on the javelin and Sain's size, that would be a very unusual and difficult weapon to use, I mean it is meant to be thrown at enemies, but the problem is that's one shot and nothing more, it's gone after it's thrown and that leaves him pretty defenseless, also it's generally a "heavy" level of weaponry because of the size of the overall length of the javelin; lastly the 37mm ammunition as Shinzuu said does not exist, unless Sain has invented his own ammo and gun cartridges and barrel or just simply a custom gun, which can be a problem when looking for ammo because there will be none to find

[Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy]

For your average person of 6ft tall and between 190-250lbs and benching AT LEAST body weight, Javelins are still really heavy. I've done Javelin in Track for 4 years, and they are not easy to even handle or store. Most javelins exceed your average and somewhat over-average height people. And for a doctor, a Javelin would be extremely heavy. They're trained for dexterity, not strength. They are precise on a small level, but are unable to handle anything on the macro level of strength. My uncle is the strongest doctor I know (6'2", 220lbs, can bench up to 195lbs) and he always tells me on how troublesome a javelin is.

[Self-sain]

I leave if I'm that unwanted but I did state that he was athletic

[Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy]

Sorry, but your post just made me want to cry. I'm sorry if that hurts your feelings, but I tell it like it is. How can you spell so many things wrong in 3 lines? I don't understand how that's possible. You're 15. Most of those misspells are just baffling to me.

[White Wolf Guardian]

You're definitely not unwanted, I'm just saying facts despite the fictional story are supposed to be up to scale right I mean I'm 600 pounds in the story, I have a couple of submachine guns and a butterfly knife. I cannot run very fast, but I can take a beating for awhile. Everything has to balance out in some way.

[Shinzuu Katame: Her Tolfy]

well, the thing is, though it's fictitious, it is still supposed to run in the same realm as our real world in terms of technology and society. It's in the first post. The reason I blew up on Sain was because of his promise in like the first or second page. It just drives me insane to see his post say otherwise.

[Self-sain]

Everyone has there weakness and spelling is mine I tried to correct them but some of them where changed to diffrent words that I didn't catch I'm sorry that my grammar proficiency isn't good enough for your high standers for role playing so if gabag or entaru whish me to leave then I will gladly if my spelling mishaps are such a blight on this thread then I will be gone.