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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148530 on: May 02, 2017, 07:32:05 PM »
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You're talking about backstories, huh?

*Kracks knuckles*

Simon Comrie, Son of Dennis Comrie, and Elise Steel.

From since he was born, Simon's parents have worked as simple miners in the Jonai 4A ring, in their trusty type-7.
And as long as he can remember, they have been constantly bombarded by the local gang's pirate ships.
From time to time they'd get away. But on others they had to submit, and drop their hard-earned cargo to escape on the brink of death.

This was how life went in the business.

That was untill Comrie was old enough to buy himself a type-6 transporter, and fly alongside his father and his convoi, on their mining ventures.

Little did they know that Comrie, being fed up with the constant mining attacks, had fitted a small rail-gun on his ship. And once the pirates attacked once more, the convoi won. And thus, the tide had started turning.

But not for long...

The faction started sending bigger ships in bigger numbers. And life was starting to get hard. But together with the other mining vessels they fought back, And didn't loose ships or cargo again. Untill the miner's convoi's struggle turned into a vette...

The faction overran the miners with the single-minded goal of murdering everyone in the convoi. Noone stood a chance of winning.

Comrie was forced to watch how his parents, and the rest of the convoi was killed. And thinking he was nothing but a hopeless soul, the faction let him go.

But the pain of his lost parents, and the rest of the convoi, quickly turned into hatred. And Comrie sold his type-6, and used the money he made from his job to buy a Viper Mk. IV.

His skills behind the canopy quickly became apparant as he picked off the faction's ships one by one, destroying them by relentlessly attacking, with unprecedented fierceness. Not backing from severe damage, or even injury.

He helped push the system's security force over the brink of victory with his attacks. Eventually murdering the faction's leader in his crashed ship in hand-to-hand combat, by punching trough his helmet's faceplate.

Unfortunately, it turned out that faction's leader wasn't the biggest fish in the game. And not long after, the faction's supervisors send in their main fleet to restore their dominance in the system.


But even trough this, Simon Comrie became a synonym with death, in the faction's ears.

And he, and his black Viper, became known as "the shadow of jonai".

And even the faction's mysterious supervisor, hidden behind his fleet of captured warships know, that he will strike.

And that his demise...

Is only a matter of time.
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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148531 on: May 02, 2017, 07:40:42 PM »
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I have no idea about that one. But it seems pretty cool. Again, the killing avenger type isn't my favourite though
Everyone seems to have it, so here's mine


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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148532 on: May 02, 2017, 07:46:25 PM »
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I'd say Ezra needs to watch out it doesn't become an OP character.

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Thanks for the advice Michen! I'll make sure to put quite a few flaws into Ezra.

Challenger, that is an awesome backstory. Simon seems like the person who I can feel strong sympathy for, and the story has really strong emotions. I love it.
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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148533 on: May 02, 2017, 07:47:50 PM »
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Just remember to not just make flaws that never matter because you avoid them
Everyone seems to have it, so here's mine


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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148534 on: May 02, 2017, 07:48:03 PM »
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Well, on further hindsight, If you haven't ever played Elite Dangerous I can fully understand that this collaboration of words, especially in this "Overly americanistic" formatting, sounds really, really, silly...

But thanks!

And yeah, I have been planning on turning this idea into a full "logbook series" on Inara.

It'll be more serious having gotten rid of that stumpy formatting and into a full story!
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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148535 on: May 02, 2017, 07:49:24 PM »
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Hm. I could tell you the story of Fayam.
But my other mains don't have one. Currently not bothering getting them one either.

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148536 on: May 02, 2017, 07:54:32 PM »
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The basic idea of my backstory is that I transform into Michen. I'm still working on... everything, basically.

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148537 on: May 02, 2017, 07:57:25 PM »
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Didn't see that idea anywhere yet I think
It's not about the formatting, just completely different behaviour than what I'd do. But that's how it works, we're different
Everyone seems to have it, so here's mine


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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148538 on: May 02, 2017, 07:58:43 PM »
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Or I could summarize other stories, but those make you punish me, because some characters I invented don't have flaws.
Oh wait... you already can using just this message.

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148539 on: May 02, 2017, 08:09:49 PM »
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I wonder what'll happen if two OP characters start fighting with each other.

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148540 on: May 02, 2017, 08:11:39 PM »
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I bet that battle is gonna take FOREVER.

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148541 on: May 02, 2017, 08:11:55 PM »
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They both annihilate and are gone.
Everyone seems to have it, so here's mine


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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148542 on: May 02, 2017, 08:13:05 PM »
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But don't you think they have extreme healing power as well?
So they can just infinitely recover?

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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148543 on: May 02, 2017, 08:15:41 PM »
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They can not, the very particles they're made from get turned into pure energy.
Everyone seems to have it, so here's mine


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Re: Counting to 1,000,000
« Reply #148544 on: May 02, 2017, 08:18:00 PM »
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How does that work?

 

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