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My Poetry
« on: June 10, 2009, 07:55:46 PM »
Here is a little taste of it....

Glass Bird

What is love but
A glass bird
Ever wishing
Ever wanting to leave
But unable to move
Unable to breathe wtihout shattering
So it sits on the windowsill
To be admired by others
And cry

Coffee Shop

Sit
- I think you need to
breathe and open your
ears
Drink
- That cup of coffee
isn't getting any
warmer

It's not easy for me
It's not easy for you
I hate admitting it
You hate saying it
It's the truth

Take
- These photographs
are fading reminders of
me
See
- This is what I mean
by the end of it
all

I see it in my reflection
You see it in my eyes
It scares me
It bothers you
It's the truth

And I'm sorry

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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 08:00:27 PM »
The coffee shop poem threw me off, but it was probably because I was expecting the first part to repeat. Awsome poems honey! :D
"From suffering I was born, From misery I was conceived. From the plight of Mortals I thrive, From the pits of Hell I rise, beware...... For I live.........."

"Wait, you're here for my shiny loot? I thought you were here to avenge the cattle and people I've slaughtered..."

"I may not always be a caring person, but even when I am furious, it is mostly at myself for becoming this way"
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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 08:04:48 PM »
Thanks so much!  :D I have some other ones that I can dig up...

Connection

Your eyes

A forest floor
Scattered with autumn's leaves
My eyes
A vast ocean
High tide, low tide
Our hands
A focal point
Feel our pulses racing
Us
Complete connection
Drifting in our own world

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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2009, 05:33:02 PM »
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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2009, 11:21:14 AM »
Thanks bro. :D

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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #5 on: June 23, 2009, 05:02:53 AM »
that was good and i have no clue about poetry but still even i think it was good........


oh yeah and i think i cuaght some romance in it as well....
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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #6 on: June 23, 2009, 05:04:30 AM »
Connection is the one with the most romance. The other two are more sad.

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Re: My Poetry
« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2009, 05:05:59 AM »
but there all still beautiful...
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