Author Topic: My Love (For Her)  (Read 1216 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline .: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.

  • Pony and Coffee Lover
  • Noble Newt
  • ********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years This user has donated to the forum.
  • Posts: 1256
  • Gender: Female
  • yes yes i would like a coffee pls.
    • Skype
    • Steam
    • Awards
  • Species: Fox
  • Coloring: White fur and blonde hair with very light cyan
  • Height: 5'8"
  • Weight: 110
  • Build: Slight and weak
  • Currently: thingken of goign fast... ;~;
My Love (For Her)
« on: May 17, 2009, 05:49:18 AM »
My Love

My love for you, It's incomprehensible
I would walk to the ends of the earth, just to get you to smile
The things I would do for you, Just because you asked me to
I guess I am a slave to my love for you
I don't mind though, at least I get to spend time with you

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

I can't express how much you mean to me
Even in this poem, I just cant find the right words
Like they escape me, I know that I could write pages and pages
Of what you are to me, but it still wouldn't suffice
I love you, completely and utterly.
I just needed to say that

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

Your so beautiful and pure, I can't bear to see you
Hurt or upset, I want to kill the ****** who
Did it to you, I'd forsake my entire life just to
Spend a minute alone with you, because with you
Minutes can seem like hours, Hours can seem like seconds and

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

I get jealous easily, though I have no right to
I don't even deserve you, what do I have to offer?
I'm over a thousand miles away, we can only communicate through a screen
I don't even know what your voice sounds like
My love for you will never be quenched  but

Even if you don't feel the same way
That's okay
I'll live to fight another day
Sure I'll be hurt, probably even suicidal
But that's just me I've already done that cycle
But that's just me I've already done that cycle

Yeah, that's my feelings for you, put on paper...I hope you like it...I'm no
artist or poet, I just write what I feel and try to arrange it so it makes sense


Xion, Snowblind, Snowy, Riku, Scott and Chris - The many in one.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2009, 08:45:27 PM by Xion: The Lemon Fanatic »


I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

Offline Sareen

  • Satan's pet
  • Zoomorphic Zebra
  • **********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years Top 10 Poster Top 50 Most Online Top 50 Topic Starter
  • Posts: 11342
  • Gender: Female
  • I'm Not Insane, Just Mentally Hilarious.
    • Skype
    • Steam
    • Fur Affinity
    • Your Nightmare >:3
    • Awards
  • Species: Cabbit
  • Coloring: Black, White and Neon Green
  • Height: 5'10''
  • Weight: 121.8 lb
  • Build: Hourglass
  • Reference: [link]
  • Currently: Formally Known as Danta
Re: My Love (For Her)
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2009, 08:42:24 PM »
Aww this is really sweet ^^
and very well written too ^^
i like it hehe
  • Avatar by: Bakakitty
  • Signature art by: Me (Danta)
~ Im The Finger Down Your Spine When The Lights Go Out, Im The Bad Taste You Cant Get Rid Of , Im The Nightmare You'll Never Wake Up from - Me (Danta Bloodrayn) ~
Add Me On Skype: TangoPhynix


Offline Shenzii

  • Zoomorphic Zebra
  • **********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years Top 50 Poster
  • Posts: 6042
  • Gender: Female
  • I've loved you for a thousand years ♥
    • Myspace
    • Awards
  • Species: Doberman
  • Coloring: Black, Rust Brown, Chartreuse
  • Height: 5'8"
  • Weight: 125lbs.
  • Build: Curvy but thin with muscle
  • Currently: Running around in circles
Re: My Love (For Her)
« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2009, 11:06:35 PM »
Very well done. I enjoyed reading it.

You have skill.

its very emotional and very sweet.
  • Avatar by: Kaprika
Animals are my passion and my career!!

Offline .: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.

  • Pony and Coffee Lover
  • Noble Newt
  • ********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years This user has donated to the forum.
  • Posts: 1256
  • Gender: Female
  • yes yes i would like a coffee pls.
    • Skype
    • Steam
    • Awards
  • Species: Fox
  • Coloring: White fur and blonde hair with very light cyan
  • Height: 5'8"
  • Weight: 110
  • Build: Slight and weak
  • Currently: thingken of goign fast... ;~;
Re: My Love (For Her)
« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2009, 11:09:01 PM »
Thank you. Both of you. Your praise is welcomed ^^


I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

Offline Shenzii

  • Zoomorphic Zebra
  • **********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years Top 50 Poster
  • Posts: 6042
  • Gender: Female
  • I've loved you for a thousand years ♥
    • Myspace
    • Awards
  • Species: Doberman
  • Coloring: Black, Rust Brown, Chartreuse
  • Height: 5'8"
  • Weight: 125lbs.
  • Build: Curvy but thin with muscle
  • Currently: Running around in circles
Re: My Love (For Her)
« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2009, 11:18:03 PM »
It almost made me teary eyed  :P

great work!
  • Avatar by: Kaprika
Animals are my passion and my career!!

 

Powered by EzPortal