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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #15 on: January 24, 2009, 01:13:57 PM »
I will keep up guys. =)
I had a little problem with the name of this chapter, but in the end it came out =^.^=
Here's...



Chapter Four: A New Home



The silver wolf looked down at Foxx and started petting his head as he cried.
I have to bury her, at least..., he thought, looking at Vera's body.
Foxx looked up, his muzzle wet from the tears.
"W-who are you?", he asked with a sad voice.
"I'm Keith.", the wolf answered.
Foxx looked down.
"Why...", he said.
Keith didn't answer.
Foxx looked at the soldiers and saw his dad's sword.
"My dad too...", he said, then started crying again.
Some minutes later he fell asleep. Keith laid him down and covered him with his cloak then he went to Vera's side. He muttered some words, making a hole on the forest floor. Fifteen or so minutes later the hole was big enough.
"This should do.", Keith said, panting. He grabbed Vera's body carefully and placed her inside the hole.
"I'll take care of Foxx.", he promised. Foxx woke up and looked at Keith then started walking towards him. Keith turned around.
"Oh... Foxx...", he said, getting on his knees.
Foxx looked at his mother and hugged Keith, sobbing.
Keith hugged Foxx back, petting his head. They stood there for some minutes then Keith moved his paw and the hole started to close.
Foxx watched as his mother disappeared under the ground. He started to sob again and buried his muzzle on Keith's chest. Keith hugged him, and then got up.
"Can I live with you?", Foxx asked, looking up at him.
Keith looked at him and smiled.
"Yes. I told your mother I would take care of you.", he explained, "Come on, I'll take you home.", he told Foxx.
"Wait...", Foxx asked. He went near one of the soldiers and grabbed the handle of a silver blue sword.
"Why do you want that sword?", Keith asked, walking towards Foxx and helping him.
"My daddy used this sword.", Foxx replied.
"Oh...", Keith said and grabbed the sword and sheathed it. Ready to home now?", he asked, picking Foxx up.
Foxx nodded, "Uh-huh."
Keith covered Foxx with his cloak. Foxx leaned his head against Keith's chest and some minutes later fell asleep. Keith looked at the sleeping kit, smiled slightly and started making his way home.
« Last Edit: February 02, 2009, 01:14:51 PM by Foxx »
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #16 on: January 24, 2009, 03:03:41 PM »
Another interesting chapter. Keep it up. ^.=.^

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #17 on: January 24, 2009, 06:11:40 PM »
Amazing Foxx Again! XD

Can't Wait till Next 1!  :D

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2009, 07:45:12 PM »
Thanks again =^.^=
Ok, I took an awful lot of time and I had to redo the chapter because of the new character (:3). It actually helped a lot.
Here's...



Chapter Five: A New Beginning



Keith walked through the forest, holding Foxx in his arms. After a while he reached his house. He opened the door and went to a room. There was another young fox there.
"Hi, Wolf.", Keith said.
"Hi, Keith.", the fox replied, and noticed Foxx, "Who is he?", he asked as he got closer.
"I found him and his mother trying to escape the King’s soldiers.", Keith explained.
Wolf looked behind Keith, but there was no one there.
"Did they…?", he started.
Keith nodded, sad and put Foxx on the bed, covering him. Foxx cuddled and continued to sleep.
"But… what happened?", Wolf asked; he was very curious.
"Let’s go to the living room.", Keith suggested and Wolf nodded.
They sat down and Keith looked at Wolf.
"I was heading home when I heard a noise.", Keith started, "I ran as fast as I could, but I was too late…", he said, sad. Wolf looked at Keith.
"And…"
"Well… when I got there… I saw his mother covering him… pierced by a sword…", Keith revealed. Wolf’s eyes widened.
"And apparently…", Keith continued, "… his dad was killed tonight too."
"Oh…", Wolf said, looking at the room where Foxx was.
Keith took the sword that Foxx grabbed earlier and started looking at it.
"And that?", Wolf asked.
"It was his father’s sword.", Keith said, "And this isn’t a normal sword."
==========~~~~~~~~~~==========
Foxx woke up some hours later and looked around.
Wha…?, he thought as he put his paws on the pillow, it was wet… and so was his muzzle. He had been crying in his sleep.
"You’re awake.", a voice said and Foxx looked around.
Wolf sat on the bed, by his side.
"Who are you?", Foxx asked. He didn’t look much older than him.
"I’m Wolfgang. You can call me Wolf. And you?", Wolf said, smiling.
"I’m… I’m Foxx.", Foxx replied.
Keith was passing by, he heard them talking and stopped, looking at them.
"Ok, Foxx.", Wolf said, and looked at him, "Um… How old are you?", he asked, leaning towards him.
Foxx looked at Wolf, tilting his head to one side a bit.
"I’m… five… why?.", he answered.
Wolf giggled.
"But… why do you want to know that?", Foxx asked, rubbing his muzzle.
"You didn’t look older than me.", Wolf explained with a grin.
Keith grinned.
You’re not that older…, he thought.
"You don’t look much older than me…", Foxx said, looking at Wolf.
"Well, I’m not. I’m six.", Wolf revealed, smiling.
Foxx smiled. It was his first smile in a while.
Keith walked into the room.
"You boys getting along well?", he asked.
"Yeah.", Wolf said, turning to Keith.
"Good.", Keith replied, "Anyone hungry?"
"Me!", Wolf said.
Foxx giggled.
"Let’s go then.", Keith said, smiling. Foxx and Wolf followed Keith, talking happily.

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sorry for the edit guys, noticed that chapter 4 and 5 had the same name..
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #19 on: February 03, 2009, 08:18:36 PM »
Very nice chapter Foxx. I liked it. ^.=.^

Giruuuuuu!

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #20 on: February 03, 2009, 08:26:21 PM »
AWESOME CHAPTER FOXX! * Noms Foxx *

Wolfie's in it Now !!! XD Awesome Stuff, can't wait till Next!

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #21 on: February 12, 2009, 09:56:23 PM »
Thanks guys =^.^=
Just finished...

Chapter Six: A Slight Suspicion


Ten years passed. Foxx was now 15 years old and Wolf was 16. Foxx let his hair grow, it was past the middle of his back and his tail was bigger than normal. The parts of his body that had white fur, which were a bit orange when he was younger, were now of a pure white and he was always happy. Wolf let his hair grow a bit too; he had some of it covering one eye and his fur color got brighter with the years.
Keith had trained them and their bodies were a bit toned and they were more agile than most foxes.
Foxx used his father’s sword. Its color was of a silver blue, the blade was 30 inches long and 2 inches wide.
Wolf used a scimitar. It had a gold handle and the blade was silver, almost 2 feet long, 20 inches wide and the tip of it ended in a small hook.
The two foxes and Keith were returning home, after another day of training.
“Wolf, seriously, I don’t know how you manage that…”, Foxx said, looking at Wolf’s weapon.
“You get used to it after a while.”, Wolf replied, smiling, “I just don’t understand how you can defend yourself so well with such a tiny sword.”, he continued.
Keith chuckled.
“What’s so funny?”, Foxx and Wolf asked at the same time.
“Nothing, nothing…”, he said, looking around and smiling.
“Yeah, right…”, they replied at the same time.
They walked for some minutes through the forest, listening to the birds and the wind moving the tree leaves.
“Hey, Foxx.”, Wolf said, suddenly.
“Yeah?”, Foxx asked, looking at him.
“You wanna train before diner?”, he asked, smiling.
“Sure. Maybe I’ll beat you.”, Foxx teased.
“Yeah, right, maybe I’ll beat you.”, Wolf teased back.
“Or maybe you’ll end up tied, as always.”, Keith said, smiling.
“No way! I’m gonna beat him!”, Foxx and Wolf declared at the same time.
“You’re going down and you know that, Wolfy.”, Foxx teased.
“Dream on, Foxxy.”, Wolf said, grinning.
They kept walking home, teasing each other. When they reached their house Keith turned to them.
“Ok, you guys train here, I’ll be inside. I’ll call you guys before I start making the diner so you can take a shower.”, he told them.
Foxx and Wolf nodded and ran to a place near the house and prepared for the fight.
“Ready?”, Wolf asked.
“Come on.”, Foxx replied.
They looked at each other for some seconds, then ran towards each other, their swords clashed, some sparkles flying from them.
Foxx and Wolf looked into each others eyes, their swords rubbing on each other as they pushed against each other.
“You’re going down, Wolf.”, Foxx said.
“Don’t get your hopes so high.”, Wolf replied.
They backed away with a quick movement then started delivering blows to each other. Keith watched from a window.
“Hmm… I wonder if they…”, he said to himself. After about twenty minutes, he called them.
Foxx and Wolf were panting, their swords pointing down.
“I’ll… beat you… someday…”, Wolf panted.
“Only… after I… beat you…”, Foxx replied, panting.
“Hahaha… very funny…”, Wolf said, smiling and started walking home with Foxx.
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #22 on: February 12, 2009, 10:04:46 PM »
Nice chapter Foxx. The lighter mood in this chapter is really nice after all the seriousness of the earlier chapters. Well done. ^.=.^

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #23 on: February 12, 2009, 10:27:56 PM »
AWESOME as usual Foxx, Hehe I like the way the story flows VERY NICE JOB!

Keep up the Good Work~!

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #24 on: February 23, 2009, 07:55:33 PM »
Again Thanks, I really appreciate it =^.^=
Now...


Chapter Seven: A Strange Dream



Foxx and Wolf kept training for two more weeks. Keith was now teaching them how to use their powers. Wolf controlled Fire and Thunder elements extremely well while Foxx excelled in the use of the Water element and cured almost every type of wound.
The two foxes were having a battle and still couldn’t defeat each other. Wolf cornered Foxx, his sword surrounded by small flames. Foxx's sword had water flowing around it.
"Good, Wolf, keep that up and you'll beat Foxx.", Keith said, smiling. He knew that Foxx would get teased by that and would do everything he could to defeat Wolf.
"WHY did you have to talk!?", Wolf yelled to Keith, deflecting Foxx's blows.
Foxx swung his sword as hard as he could against Wolf’s, trying to knock it off his paw.
"You wish!", Wolf said with a grin on his face. He turned around, swinging his sword against Foxx's. As soon as their swords touched each other, there was an explosion. Keith looked at them as they were surrounded by steam, getting up and running to where they were.
"Boys, are you ok?", he asked worried. Some seconds later the steam started to disappear. Keith's jaw fell open in surprise. Foxx was lying on the floor, his sword by his side.
Wolf's eyes opened wide when he saw Foxx.
"Foxx!", he called, letting his sword go and kneeling by Foxx's side, "Wake up!", he then looked at Keith, "I… didn't mean to…", he said.
Keith rushed near them and looked for some seconds at Foxx then let out a sigh of relief.
"He's just unconscious. He'll be ok.", he declared with a small smile, "Come on, help me take him to his bed."
Wolf nodded. He picked up his sword and put it on his back, like always. He then picked up Foxx's sword and placed it by his sword's side and helped Keith.
They got to Wolf and Foxx's room and lay Foxx on his bed. Wolf looked at Foxx worriedly, putting the swords down.
"He's going to be ok.", Keith said in a calming voice.
"But still…", he said.
"Come on, I'll get you something to eat.", Keith said, trying to cheer Wolf.
"Ok.", Wolf said, smiling a little and following Keith.
==========~~~~~~~~~~==========
Foxx was having a strange dream. He was in the middle of a battle, not fighting, just watching it, not believing his eyes.
"An Angel… and a Demon…", he said. He couldn't see their faces. Suddenly, everything started dissolving and Foxx found himself lying on his bed.
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #25 on: February 23, 2009, 08:07:16 PM »
Very interesting Foxx. :D Can't wait to read what happens next.

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #26 on: February 23, 2009, 08:25:14 PM »
Very Mysterious Foxx!

Loved It! As Usual  :D

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #27 on: February 26, 2009, 07:54:22 PM »
*giggles* I'm glad you like it.
Now, let's see...


Chapter Eight: Trouble Arises



Foxx got up and slowly waked to the room. Wolf was almost asleep and Keith was reading.
"Hey…", Foxx said, smiling a bit and looking at them.
"Foxx.", Keith replied, looking at him.
Wolf turned to Foxx.
"Foxx? Are you ok?", he asked, slightly nervous.
Foxx snickered and smiled.
"I’m ok.", he reassured.
"But you did get hit hard.", Keith commented, looking at Foxx.
"I’m ok. At least, I feel that way.", Foxx said again, "But…"
"But what?", Wolf asked, looking at him.
"I… had a strange dream.", Foxx explained.
"Really…?", Keith said, looking at Foxx with curiosity.
Foxx nodded.
"Yeah. I saw a Demon and an Angel. Fighting ", he told them.
Wolf smiled.
"It was just a dream.", he said, giggling.
Foxx blushed slightly.
"But... it looked so real…", he defended himself.
"It looked real, silly.", Wolf said, petting Foxx, "Angels and demons don’t exist.", he continued, giggling.
"Actually…", Keith said slowly.
"What?", Wolf and Foxx said, looking at him.
A small smile spread across Keith’s muzzle.
"Angels and Demons do exist. They are very rare and most of them don’t know they are demons or angels. They look like normal furs, like you or me.", he explained.
Foxx smiled and turned to Wolf.
"Seeee?", he asked, grinning at Wolf.
Wolf looked at the window.
"Yeah, well… you got lucky…", he replied.
Foxx and Keith started laughing.
Suddenly they heard a loud explosion, not far away.
"I’ll go check.", Keith said immediately, turning to Foxx, "You stay here, you have to rest.", he then turned to Wolf, "You stay here too. If something happens, you can help Foxx.", he explained.
"And what about you?", Foxx asked.
"I’ll be ok.", he reassured then he ran out of the house before Foxx or Wolf could say or do anything.
"I hope he doesn’t get hurt.", Foxx said in a low voice as they heard another explosion.
Wolf nodded.
Half an hour passed… one hour… an hour and a half…
"Wolf, I’m worried…", Foxx said, looking through the window.
"Yeah, me too.", Wolf replied, by Foxx’s side.
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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #28 on: February 26, 2009, 08:02:06 PM »
And that's called teasing the reader for all of what it's worth. Seriously, leaving it like that should be made criminal or something. It's just evil. :P
Good chapter. ^.=.^

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Re: The Young Hero
« Reply #29 on: February 26, 2009, 08:40:42 PM »
OMG What Happened to Keith!!

I Am amazed once again Foxx  :D

 

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