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Three New Poems
« on: September 10, 2008, 08:37:04 PM »

September 09, 2008
+Lust+
Theres a lingering layed upon my lips,
a strong urge for us to mesh our hips.

The yearning for your caressing touch,
running my fingers through your hair to clutch.

Fast breathing, hearts beating
the type of pleasure caused by two bodies meeting.

The pace moves faster, our breathe hot in each other's ears
whispering all the things we want to hear.

Grind, pant, thrust;
The need for you is just too much.

I want you now, I'll love you forever
you'll become my greatest endeavor.



September 08, 2008
+Game+
I know a game that requires a knife,
it goes by the name of "Taking ones own life"

Its so simple to play,
infact its quiet a beautiful display.

All you have to do is find a reason to start,
pick something that tears your heart apart.

Because, why live a life full of pity?
Why continue breathing when life doesnt seem so pretty?

When everything you've ever wanted slips through your hands,
taking more then you can ever stand.

To end the game you slit your wrists,
and you just twist twist twist.

Watch the misery in the form of crimson drip down,
keeping watching it, untill you feel like your about to drown.

Your last words written in quotes,
and thats what we would call a Suicide note.

Its almost over, all I have to do is count to ten,
and I thank god that its all going to finally end.


September 04, 2008
+Letter To Dad+
Dear dad,
I'm writing you back today,
and your probably wondering what good I'll have to say,
and for once in my life I can actually tell you that I'm okay.

I can tell you though about this boy I see almost everyday,
rember when I told you all about him before you were sent away?
Well, me and him got back together in the summer, before it went astray.

Other then my horrible romantic dismays,
I wish that it would be 2012 and everyday I do pray,
so the one day you will come back here to stay.

I love you
<3

I'm hoping these poems arent too graphic for anyone, +^_^+"
Gomenosai if they are.
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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2008, 02:24:53 AM »
Good peoms, the first is exceptionally passionate, musta been a good time. The others were good too, you have a talent for this.

However I'd watch it with peoms like the first, might be a bit too explicit for forum rules.
« Last Edit: September 11, 2008, 02:28:10 AM by Tezztor »

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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2008, 06:14:11 AM »
I agree with Tezz. Very good poems, but the first one may just slightly be breaking past this forum's PG-13 setup.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2008, 03:29:23 PM »
Thanks guys :'3

You think I should take the first one off?
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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2008, 08:56:27 PM »
Nah, it's bordering but you should be fine. They're very well written. What happened between your dad and you, if I may ask?
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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #5 on: September 11, 2008, 09:20:15 PM »
You dont need to remove it, just be careful in future poems or literature.

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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #6 on: September 11, 2008, 09:23:59 PM »
All right, I'll be careful next time :3


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my dad is in jail.
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Re: Three New Poems
« Reply #7 on: September 11, 2008, 11:26:34 PM »
Awe... I'm sorry Kero. *hugs sympathetically*
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