Fire in Darkness

[flames]

Yeah, I'd have to say you're the master of writing cliff-hangers bro. Well, it definately met my high expectations and you certainly didn't fail to deliver! Truly exceptional, worth the wait in my opinion for sure, your skill as a writer has come forward in leaps and bounds.
I feel that your portrayal of Blaze and Levi here was incredible. Levi may be a logical, calm person, but in situations of high stress like this she loses it and would indeed act just like that. Blaze's understanding of everything and holding Levi back is also very much in-character.
As for the writing of Flames...well, as always you've done this incarnation of Flames near-perfectly, quite likely better than I could do in this scenario. The refusal to fight and loss of confidence before suddenly building up and doing what must be done fits his character perfectly.
You truly have outdone yourself yet again brother