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Offline Tidus

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The Dark Abyss
« on: August 11, 2008, 01:33:39 AM »
He sits in his camp looking deep into the fire, trying to find the answers to his existance, his purpose. The snowflakes floated lazily around his head some melting away before they have a chance to coat the ground. It was the eve of battle, nothing that was new to him, but every night like this he sat staring into the firelight, trying to contemplate if he was destined to be something better than a mere soldier, a better end than laying bloodied on a battlefield...something beyond the dark abyss of his existance...

I dunno if I want to write a story of this or make it into an RP on the forums so I posted it here. Let me know what you think and if you want help me with some ideas, much appreciated;
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Re: The Dark Abyss
« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2008, 03:26:26 AM »
this is like my story series, "Dark Times and Deep in War"

really cool :)
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Re: The Dark Abyss
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2008, 09:29:18 PM »
That's very cool Tidus. It'd make a good RP, though it might need a little more backbone if you know what I mean.
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Re: The Dark Abyss
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2008, 12:01:06 AM »
Thanks for the complement guys, i'll be posting a prolouge/Rp premise on the RP board under a new name (A New Dawn) in a bit and it should have a bit more backbone and storyline rather than a look at one character advice and criticism is welcome and if I get some interested people i'll start up the RP.
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Re: The Dark Abyss
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2008, 10:16:58 PM »
< interested though she might now be on often

I can post when I get on, but I can't garuntee I'll be on everyday. I'll try to be.
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