'Casual Flames' request

[flames]

Go for it. Perhaps by letting many others see them and give feedback you can continue to improve and strike chords in those people...(And yes, it's Summer over here. Why do you ask?)

[Dr. Strange]

The only thing is I dislike most of my poems. They all sound so dark... >.<

[flames]

Darkness is good. Real life is usually dark with only a few glimmers of light to comfort you, so dark poetry fits in well with the world...

[Dr. Strange]

Pfft. Life is always dark and little light shows through, but to some of us, that light is darker than the dark; full of false hope and lies.

[flames]

Pfft. Life is always dark and little light shows through, but to some of us, that light is darker than the dark; full of false hope and lies.

(Quoted for truth and poetic awesomeness)
For some the light is nothing but a lure waiting to ensnare them when they are so full of hope...Wherever there is light, there are shadows, hiding, hunting, waiting for their prey to make a false move before they strike, erasing any light and engulfing all in a foul Void that represents the even more negative aspects of both life and existence...

[Dr. Strange]

Very good, Flames. I like how that sounds. *steals for siggy* xD