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Author Topic: Shattered Glass: A Broken Heart  (Read 10798 times)

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« Reply #90 on: December 23, 2008, 07:13:41 PM »
And you honestly wonder why your writing reduces me to tears when you write so much like this with such tragic beauty?
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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« Reply #91 on: December 24, 2008, 06:21:32 AM »
More great poems Broken, I particularly like Spoken In a Faint Murmur

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Re: Random Stories/Poems/Etc.
« Reply #92 on: December 24, 2008, 06:38:15 AM »
Awe, thanks.~~


A Treasure
Fire creeps up the cold, hard walls
Searing the stone of a castle strong
Held up by wimpy birch beams
The fire consumes all, it seems.

A Dragon's Treasure
{Compiled by a friend and I,
Enjoy it as our love reaches the sky}
Never deceased you are to me,
your poetic words only serve to set me free
If you'd love do not tarry,
raptors love means only to marry
Through my song I say to you,
ask what you wish and Ill see it through


 I cannot bear the suffering,
so I'll stay my traitorous tongue.
The love I hide for thee,
my life eternally.

If it is my love you wish me to bear,
I'll give my all for we're a pair
Call on me when times look down,
 Call on me when you've got tears to drown
I'm always faithful till the end,
perhaps through my love your heart will mend


Canst thou see my eyes
Full of hidden love, surmise?

Thou seeth not what I love
Nor canst thou look above
Dream I do of us true
Only to have it become naught.

If love is not what you seek,
I'm remiss for I've felt a peek
It is not my nature to jump the gun,
for all my time with you is just too fun
But the quest it doth still stand,
is it for me that you are in demand?


Aye, I wish thee by me,
alone in this endless sea.
Wilst thou follow me to the end,
no one but a better friend?

With you I travel this quest to true,
to walk a mile in the others shoe
By land or sea or foulest mountain,
let the strength of our love prove a fountain
If evil bears its ugly head,
my love for you will be its dread


Be that thy way of accepting, lord dear
 if so, I wilst always hold thee near
« Last Edit: December 24, 2008, 07:16:35 AM by ~Weakest Link: Livor Mortem~ »
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Re: Random Stories/Poems/Etc.
« Reply #93 on: December 26, 2008, 12:05:12 AM »
As a Moderator I removed irrelevant posts. If you have a problem with my moderating duties, please take them up with another moderator and not in a thread. Thank you

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« Reply #94 on: December 29, 2008, 09:42:16 PM »
(You know what I'm going to say, right? :P)
As brilliant as always, you never cease to amaze me.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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« Reply #95 on: December 29, 2008, 11:24:52 PM »
Well done my love you have me in shambles tears in my eyes... You sparked me to write again well done... the writing is about to be about you.
My dear there is no danger
Can't you see they turn blind eyes
To we swift and spotlight strangers?
Oh before the rush is over
We will be revered again
While the victims still recover
Oh,
Are we running toward death?
I have met him times before
He adores us like the rest
Oh even if we're discovered
Just be sure to wear your best
We will surely make the covers


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« Reply #96 on: December 31, 2008, 08:08:21 PM »
As always top notch poetry, very heartfelt and well written

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« Reply #97 on: December 31, 2008, 08:40:17 PM »
As always, very emotional, heart-piercing work. *Sniffs sadly*
(Thanks for reminding me about the language promise. It's partway completed, I just don't have a keyboard with the right symbols...T_T')
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« Reply #98 on: December 31, 2008, 08:58:07 PM »
(I wasn't though :P)
« Last Edit: December 31, 2008, 08:59:43 PM by flames »
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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« Reply #99 on: December 31, 2008, 09:18:18 PM »
More good poetry

(Feelings are best kept to PMs. I read them because I like them and as a moderator its my job. They are top notch poetry)

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« Reply #100 on: December 31, 2008, 11:01:24 PM »
:'( How depressing...and heart-wrenching.
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« Reply #101 on: January 13, 2009, 12:21:27 AM »
Please, merge your posts till somebody replies. No need to triple post when you can put it all in one post

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« Reply #102 on: January 13, 2009, 09:56:46 PM »
Thank you.

Top notch writing as always, very heartfelt and emotional.

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« Reply #103 on: January 13, 2009, 10:02:44 PM »
Figured I might as well use it for something.

Feel free to post all the poetry of yours that you like, just remember it can't break the rules.

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« Reply #104 on: January 14, 2009, 04:59:19 PM »
I seriously am running out of words here to do your poetry justice. Heartfelt, stirring and as masterful as ever.
(I'm still working on that new language I promised ya XD :P)
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

 

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