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Offline Anklor, The Philosipher

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« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2007, 05:02:44 AM »
Bravo Bravo
the first 2 sound like they were written about me irl you have a great talent keep it up  :)
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« Reply #16 on: August 24, 2007, 05:14:00 AM »
i think you will like this one anklor or els i wouldent be posting it

“Cold”

Dilutions of hope
Images I see
No matter what I do
There is no hope for me

Slowly dieing
Of my own dust
Wish I could get out
And wander around dusk

Nothing can keep me
Nothing to hold
I just keep falling
ALONE AND COLD

Im used to the darkness
The horror of my life
One day I will be gone
Taken by the blade of the knife

Joker Rose
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« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2007, 05:17:07 AM »
 :'( its beautiful
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« Reply #18 on: August 24, 2007, 05:20:49 AM »
lol thank you anklor...

(note: will edit this post if its the last post befor my next poem...no more tonight)
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« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2007, 05:31:29 AM »
 =3 i wuvs it and a pic for ya poam dad ok.

i whant to start writing poams but idk why i don't

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« Reply #20 on: August 24, 2007, 12:30:31 PM »
heh i will wait till then if you do publish them tell me i'll read everyone and rember them verse by verse ^^


(( i know i have no life i rember half the things i read mostly becaus i read it till it means nothing or till i start to read it upside down or backwards O.o yea..i read to much..))



BUT keep them up their really starting to get good and intresting. x__X not like they wernt anyway.
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« Reply #21 on: August 24, 2007, 03:04:13 PM »
wow those are awsome... i can't write poems but not as good as you.. jeez when did you start to write those?
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I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everythings nothing without you
I wait here forever just to, to see you smile
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

Through it all, I made my mistakes
I stumble and fall, but I mean these words

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'd bleed my heart out to show
And I won't let go

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« Reply #22 on: August 25, 2007, 04:32:28 AM »
ive been writing for a long time lol i still dont like my work lol
hears another one for my fans lmao

"The right words"

Twisting turning
Haunting at my mind
Trying to find the words
To tell you that im fine

More eats away
At what’s really on my mind
What im really trying to say
Can’t be completely defined

No more descriptive words
That means nothing to us both
Nothing comes out right
Nothing even comes close

I don’t know how to say it
I don’t know were to go to
I guess what im trying to say
Is ill always love you

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p.s. sorry for the mushy one lol
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« Reply #23 on: August 25, 2007, 04:35:19 AM »
i  love it man its cool
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« Reply #24 on: August 25, 2007, 04:37:20 AM »
thanx and just cause im in the mood to im ganna postr another one

"war?"
 
What is war?
War with self
Simplicities and anger
Bottled on a shelf

Bloodlust fetish
Dripping from the knife
Creeping only in the dark
Demon of the night

Your blood I drink
Your energy I drain
Your anger and anguish
Taking all your pain

Every one is different
No one is the same
We are all alone
No one to share pain

So what is war?
If we are all alone
Is it war with self?
Or is it war with home?


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« Reply #25 on: August 25, 2007, 04:38:41 AM »
 :'( its beautiful and i generaly hate poetry but yours is kick ass
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« Reply #26 on: August 25, 2007, 04:40:28 AM »
im glad you enjoy them.....no more tonight ill post some tomarrow ...gotta find my other book....cant seem to find my other note book and its full of my poems lol anyway goodnight all i will post hear tomarrow
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« Reply #27 on: August 25, 2007, 04:40:59 AM »
nice hun but dad your real good

i'll find a pic soon
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« Reply #28 on: August 26, 2007, 04:57:56 AM »
anothe day another poem

“Tale of two”

Cold hibernation
Hiding from the world
Danger is beyond you
For such a little girl

Cold is oblivious
To some who may enjoy
Walking with out fear
Wile others hide from this boy

Two complete opposites
Living in control
Hallow by their surroundings
Poor tortured souls

Oppressed by their elders
Never given a chance
It’s a never ending game
Ts a never ending dance

Scared to move
In fear of what they say
This girl holds on to nothing
So they play her till she pays

His sins are many
But made up for in good time
He trys to hard
But is in debt with his moral fines

Apart they are nothing
Together they can be great
But for now they are separate
And can only wait for fate

Joker Rose

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« Reply #29 on: August 26, 2007, 05:27:00 AM »
 :lovestruck4: its like me and my girlfriend
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