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Offline moonwolf101

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forgive me (a sad/dark poem)
« on: September 06, 2015, 04:03:17 PM »
Forgive me

Look what I have done
A mere shadow I am
Nothing more than forgotten
Ropes, chains and knives
Covered with blood
Look what I have done
What have I done?
Everything.
I am to blame
For pain and bloodshed
I have become a monster
I never chose this path
It chose me.
They turn their backs
I watch through tears
Depression is a feeling
Self harm, taking action
Suicide, you have completed your goal
I want to be loved
But darkness consumes me
Causing them to run in fear
I tell them I want them  to help
But they ignore me
I try and talk
But nobody listens
Here I am
What have I done?
I am to blame
Forgive me
For all thy pain
I caused
I will leave now
Forgive me....
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Re: forgive me (a sad/dark poem)
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2015, 03:00:18 AM »
Beautiful and touch home in many area. Though I curious of what was the reason to gave life to this. This seem well experience.
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Re: forgive me (a sad/dark poem)
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2015, 08:05:00 PM »
Thanks! Well I realized that I can write stories, poems, songs, etc. when I do it based on my mood. And I was in a very sad, depressed mood at the time when I wrote this.
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