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haiku and poems
« on: September 01, 2009, 12:05:19 AM »
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Re: haiku and poems
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2009, 09:40:31 AM »
Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
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Sorry to break the serious vibe, but... haikus!
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Re: haiku and poems
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2009, 03:34:49 PM »
Good Haikus
Broad subjects and total coverage
Human narrows
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Re: haiku and poems
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2009, 03:36:56 PM »
That wasn't a haiku... haikus go 5-7-5... that only went 3-8-4     ?? o.O
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Re: haiku and poems
« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2009, 03:42:09 PM »
and I've seen one done by a famous japanese poet that went 5-2-4... or something like that, i have the paper somewhere here. Like I said, "Human narrows."
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"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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