I've started writing some poems...

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I was inspired by Broken Hearted Sam and have decided to try writing some poetry:

_Controlling my life_
I'm sick of being what you want me to be,
So tired of you commanding me.
Trying to control my life and who I am,
Why can't you be happy for what I am?
Everything I am you have hidden away,
I'm lying to myself everyday.
I wanna be myself and no one else,
Being anything different is like hell.
I've lost my way and my life,
Unable to live, can't grab the knife.
I can't end it, I cannot live,
My life ain't mine so how can I live?
I'm sick of being what you want me to be,
So tired of you commanding me.
I just pick up the knife,
And happily end my life...

[Dr. Strange]

Very good. Though it seems to ramble a little. try to clean it up. But, all in all, a lovely start.

[Mr. Meerkat]

Very good, i like it


keep it up  

[flames]

Here are a few more I was working on in-lesson at school:

The End, is it true?
Red skies, lots of lightning.
Danger, people crying.
Death stalks us all,
As we hide in a lonesome hall.
The End, is it true?
The End, will I lose you?
Earthquakes, storms and fire,
Our saviour was a liar.
The world dies, we die too,
How can I live if I lose you?
Apocalyptic visions,
Blood-thirsty demons,
All that we know is gone.
The evil deed has been done.
The End, is it true?
The End will I lose you?
How can I survive if you die?
Is this world a lie?
I can’t see you anymore…

Suppressed Rage.
Fire, eternal fire burns.
Anger, Rage, nobody learns.
Suppressed inside,
Rage within my mind.
Building up bit by bit,
There’s no target for me to hit.
Nobody cares about me,
Anger rising as they laugh at me.
Why won’t they learn?
My insides begin to burn…
Rage, Anger, Fire strong,
For inner peace I long…
Grit my teeth and ignore,
Just walk calmly to that door.
I hear a comment about my love, I pause,
The next moment their blood falls…
I lose myself to my frustration,
I wake to a destroyed nation,
Why? Why does everything have to end?
Suppressed Rage cannot bend.
It corrupts you, maims you,
Forces you to do what you don’t wanna do.
Humans become weapons,
People become broken,
All under crimson fire…

Why is it that…?
Why is it that people are in pain?
Why is it that some have nothing to gain?
Why is it that the world is dying?
Why is it that some are lying?
Why, oh why, is it that when I think of you, none of these things matter?

Alone, but happy.
I know not of true love,
I know only of the free-lying dove.
I have never been blissfully embraced,
I have calmly felt the wind on my face.
Lonely I am in this world,
Yet my happiness has never been hurled.
How is it that I am alone and happy?
Shouldn’t I be depressed and angry?
It doesn’t matter anyway,
For I am happy where I lay.
Love would be pleasant for me,
Although being alone still has its glee.
“Alone, but happy” perfectly describes me…

[Dr. Strange]

You know every line doesn't have to rhyme, right? You can have fun with it.

[flames]

I know. It just naturally comes together so that it rhymes.

[Soryu/Miayuki Isumi]

Well done you should check out some of my work.

[flames]

_FireWind_
As intense as a roaring flame,
A tornado twisting, evil's bane.
The one who's there when protection is needed,
The one who fights for their cause...
An avenging blade striking out,
Yet sheltering others in doubt.
What does it mean if they call you a hero?
Should you take notice or continue so?
An inferno, a great spiral of wind,
Never giving up, not even at the end,
Eternal, a Hero,
Honourable Warrior...
Defying death time and time again,
Not once resting 'til the mission is done.
No hesitation and no regrets,
Makes a promise and never forgets:
"I'll save you all even if it kills me!"
Hero of FireWind to-be:
"HoKaze..."

(Based on my 'novel', The Hero Eternal: Warrior)

[Dr. Strange]

I love it! *thumbs up*

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_A Shadow on your Soul_
Depression, eternal Darkness,
Sorrow, broken hearted,
Shadows before a feast.
My Soul, such a mess,
Twilight, mind darkened,
Love is the thing I feel least!

Dark colours engulfing,
Anger, sadness too.
My soul in your teeth, not quite whole,
A new shady dawn of...suffering!
I place A Shadow on your Soul...

_I'm Here..._
It's been a long, tough trek,
Just to see you again.
It is times like these that make me say "Heck!"
Before doing something different in the Den.

It seems so long to both of us,
An eternity of seperation, true.
The people wonder why we make a fuss,
They don't understand what we do.

Don't worry anymore,
Sleep assured.
I'm Here, never leaving again,
The light shining strong telling all two words:
I'm Here...

[Dr. Strange]

*wide eyes*
Holy &*%$ Flames. It's really good!

[flames]

*wide eyes*
Holy &*%$ Flames. It's really good!

Thanks...(You're starting to make me blush)...Although I think they could be a lot better.

_Sorrow of Ages_
It's been a tough path to follow,
It'll all be gone in the 'morrow,
Swept aside by the tears of yesterday...
Yet I have not dealt with Sorrow today,
I just feel it inside of me,
My own tragic melody.
Of the rains of the Past,
That engulf the Present,
Causing Future to slip away...
Ages keep going on,
Sorrow keeps flowing through,
The pains that wait for my goodbye...
As I prepare myself for the twilight of early morn'...

[Dr. Strange]

I am? That's new.

[flames]

I am? That's new.

Indeed. It's not like I've blushed 1001 times already in an RP because of you or anything... :snicker:

Standing Tall.
The world may try to crush me,
It may try to maim me.
But it doesn’t matter if I stand tall.
If I have regrets I shall not succeed,
If I give in I shall never lead.
Everyone may be against us,
But I won’t make a fuss.
I shall never cease my mission,
Never as long as I have determination.
No matter what happens,
I’ll just stand tall…
And happily bear it all.

My Purpose.
What is my purpose in life?
Why do I endure so much strife?
Is life meaningless?
It seems that way to me…
Do we have a goal, a purpose, anyway?
Should we live by our purpose everyday?
I cannot think of my purpose…
Should I make one for myself or should…
Should I live a life with no meaning?
I need an answer I cannot find…
Sometimes I feel so blind…
Just what is a purpose to me?

Chosen.
I open my eyes to see a face,
Of a stranger from another place.
I awake to see a different world,
One which needs a saviour strong.
It keeps on happening,
Keeps on cycling…
I save them and help them out,
Before I’m knocked out.
I wake up to a new world again,
They need my help or all shall end.
It has happened again…
Why me? Why today?
Is this what I’ll do always?
Sometimes I wish I had never woken at all…
But, I’ll endure the pain and save them all.
Is it because I am the Chosen?
I don’t know, but I still, shout:
“I will help you out!”
This is my fate…

The Ultimate Power…
I stand there so tall,
Anticipating the fall.
The fall of a tyrant,
By the one so defiant.
The one that is me,
The one that is to be.
“Why are you so strong? How dare you defy me!?”
Is all he asks as he breathes his last.
I stare into his eyes, stare into his soul,
My eyes ablaze with crimson fire erupting.
“This is the Ultimate Power! This is your undoing!”
“Determination and friendship is what got this going!”
I reach for my blade, with confidence to spare.
And I say: “This is how I dare…”
The battle cry travels across the hills,
The sound of determined fire!
It rages around and grows so strong,
Fuelled by my allies’ admire!
This is…The Ultimate Power…!

[Dr. Strange]

I am? That's new.

Indeed. It's not like I've blushed 1001 times already in an RP because of you or anything... :snicker:

Me? That can't be. Which one??