Author Topic: writings via a botherd canine (aka: my poems :3)  (Read 4097 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline chealsea lupawn

  • Avid Aardvark
  • *
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years
  • Posts: 58
  • Gender: Male
  • Don't be afraid....plz T.T
    • Awards
  • Species: mutated wolfess
  • Coloring: black
  • Height: not set
  • Build: varries
writings via a botherd canine (aka: my poems :3)
« on: March 01, 2011, 11:00:21 PM »
all my stuff is untitled and in a free meeter. and is a little shaky at times but here's what i have


Innocence lost to gravity
the situation in longevity
A utopia lost to the imagenary
Dystopia looms in grotesque solidarity
Is it a constant?
Is it a variable?
Is it avoidable?
can it be changed?
rearranged?
resolved?
reconsolidated?
decharged?
unarmed?
unscarred?
are we too far?
too perverted?
too exerted?
to be converted?
Is there hope?
can we survive?
strive?
and thrive?
in a new culture more civilized?



------------------------------------------------------


Awareness it's self is a psycosis
false truths brought up in overwhelming doses
and the media is the feeder
and the public are the bleeders
and the truth be less then meager
a message
silent
often ignored

LIES!
the entirety of it all are lies!
so the rich can laugh so the poor can cry
all in the belif in the material
in the shalowness they are jovial
But that is not so
It's not what you have
but it's who you know.

Offline serpington

  • Optimistic Owl
  • ********
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years Top 100 Poster Top 100 Most Online
  • Posts: 1578
  • Gender: Non-binary
    • Awards
  • Species: Changeling
  • Currently: silently watching
Re: writings via a botherd canine (aka: my poems :3)
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 11:21:48 AM »
not bad. some parts didn't make alot of scence but that might just be me. good luck, from one writer to another.
Just quietly watching, wondering if anyone I knew is still here.

Offline chealsea lupawn

  • Avid Aardvark
  • *
  • awards This user has been a forum member for over 10 years
  • Posts: 58
  • Gender: Male
  • Don't be afraid....plz T.T
    • Awards
  • Species: mutated wolfess
  • Coloring: black
  • Height: not set
  • Build: varries
Re: writings via a botherd canine (aka: my poems :3)
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 11:23:32 AM »
thank you and i'd be happy to explain what your confused about ^^

 

Powered by EzPortal

anything