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Offline Nintai Tamashii

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Amour
« on: August 14, 2007, 10:50:08 PM »
This was originally done as a french poem. I am in french emmersion (GRADE 9 WOOT!!) and it was done for a project. It is much better in french so sorry if it sounds funny, but remember it wasn't intented to be english.


AMOUR
I'm there before you,
but you can't see me.
I could be the most beautiful girl in the world
but it means nothing.
I am scared,
scared of my emotions
Prehapse you hate me,
prehapse you don't think I'm pretty.
Love, the things it does to our hearts,
and the things we give for it....
My love

The translation is not exact, but it's the only way it makes sense in english, the french version is much better, so here it is.

AMOUR
Je suis la avant toi,
mais tu ne peut pas voir moi.
Je peux etre la plus belle fille du monde,
mais ce faire rien.
Je suis peur,
peur de mes sentiments.
Peut-etre tu deteste moi,
peut-etre tu pense je suis l'aide.
Ah, l'amour les choses ce faire a nos coeurs,
et les choses nous faison pour le...
Mon amour

I know it sucks but give me a brake I'm not very good with poems
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Offline Amy Montgomery

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Re: Amour
« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2007, 11:11:32 PM »
... it's good... i like it french better tho... then again i am in your class so... i got to see it first... anyway ... it's good
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I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everythings nothing without you
I wait here forever just to, to see you smile
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

Through it all, I made my mistakes
I stumble and fall, but I mean these words

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'd bleed my heart out to show
And I won't let go

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Re: Amour
« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2007, 02:32:57 AM »
>.< KIRAI I ALREADY NOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT
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Re: Amour
« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2007, 02:00:46 PM »
but you didn't say anything about me not being able to post something...
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I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everythings nothing without you
I wait here forever just to, to see you smile
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

Through it all, I made my mistakes
I stumble and fall, but I mean these words

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'd bleed my heart out to show
And I won't let go

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Re: Amour
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2007, 04:04:11 PM »
That's brilliant, I could never right anything like that. It sounds even betetr in french. XD


I'm useless at french....???
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Re: Amour
« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2007, 07:34:26 PM »
 :P lol thanks
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Re: Amour
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2007, 10:50:14 PM »
nin? its called A.M. ever heard of it?
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Re: Amour
« Reply #7 on: August 15, 2007, 10:53:55 PM »
 ???
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