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Title: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 11, 2009, 04:19:37 AM
 It is the year of 1946 and New York City's crime rates have been the highest in decades. The as the years go by, the city is overrun by the Five Organized crime Families; Bianchi, Lambardi, Marino, Romano, and Moretti. The Five Families each have their own connections in order to remain "untouchable" by the authorities and for this purpose have allied together to form the strong bond held called The Commission. Each one of the families has their own system of heirachy which is in order of the associates, soldiers, captain, consigliere, the underboss, and the don (KING). But there has been talk of which family is ultimately superior and is entitled to run the city. The Commission is beginning to crumble. Vendettas, arsons, murders, drug trafficking and extortion has caused massive friction between the families as they battle eacther in the struggle for control over the entire city. As New York's finest has run clean out of leads and are facing the struggle to take down the familes for good, furs and humans alike work on both sides. Police have sent in spies, wire taps, and are still searching for loop holes around the legal system to finally make an arrest on the Dons of New York City. As the good citizens of New York scramble for fear that the city is no longer safe, most choose to stay and struggle with the pressure of the crime syndicates. It is up to you to help decide what happens in this epic struggle for control over the city.


The Families:


Bianchi - The Bianchi family is very large in the contruction business as well as drug trafficking, racketeering, and contract killings. They control Greenwhich Village located in the lower half of Manhattan. They are in violation of contruction codes, by-laws, and restrictions.


Lombardi - Own and control the disposal of waste in New York. They run Brooklyn and like the other families, extort store owners for protection money, conrol rackets, illegal gambling rings, contract killings, drug trafficking.


Marino - Own Little Italy and have numerous members inside law enforcement and also carry out the extortion of store owners for protection money, conrol rackets, illegal gambling rings, contract killings, drug trafficking.


Romano - Control New Jersey and have ties in the business of money laundering. They work the harbours and are associated with pier thefts, human cargo, and illegal importing.


Moretti - Are in control of the Bronx. They are in the business foucusing on sweatshops and labour rackets. They too, carry out murder for hire, counterfeiting, assault, drug trafficking, etc.



RULES: Read these if you want to participate.

1. No godmodding. Period. Sometimes your characters are faced with disadvantages. Deal with it.

2. No magic. No exceptions.

3. ALL OOC CHAT SHOULD BE IN THIS THREAD AND THIS THREAD ONLY

4. Please write in past tense like a story to continue the flow of the story. No *actions* please.

5. Stick to the plot. Don't stray. If you've got a back story with your character, incorporate it with the plot. Don't make it more important than that.

6. All types of characters are encouraged. You can be a human in here!

7. This is a serious roleplay. There will be no leaving anyone behind, and you need to be reasonable with your posts. If you pass out, chances are you're not going to post actually being conscience for a bit. You know how to use your common sense so do it.

8. Any breaking of the rules will result in you respectfully leaving the roleplay with an exit post. After you've read all this put an * next to your character's name so that I know you've read the rules.

9. NO ONE LINERS. Put thought into your posts.

10. Have fun, and remember all forum rules still apply here.


Post your character sheet and wait for my approval. DO NOT POST UNTIL I HAVE APPROVED YOUR PROFILE.
Feel free to add any other information about your character that you'd like or think we may need to understand them better so add a bio if you'd like. I only require that you have those five fields for your profile. ALSO: You may be ANYONE (police, mafia, store owner, house wife, etc.) AS LONG AS you contribute equal imortance to the story as any other character. This means no BS, keep flow with the storyline.

NOTE: If you are police or part of a crime family, please be sure to post your rank of authority. Yes, you may be a don or head of investigation, go crazy but don't do anything rediculous.

Name:
Age:
Species:
Status:
Appearance:

Alright, here's mine:

Name: Spike Gambino
Age: 36
Species: Fox
Status: Lombardi Underboss
Appearance: Usually seen wearing a black pinstripe suit with a matching fedora. He wears black leather gloves when not at home in the Brooklyn Compund.

Bio: He is one of the oldest friends and associate to the Lombardi don. Since he was a young child, Spike was looked after by the powerful crime family after his father murdered his mother over an arguement during a divorce. He's supervises most operations for the Lombardi don and isn't afraid to get his hands dirty. He's good with a knife and loyal to his friends as he respects those who respect him.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 11, 2009, 10:15:24 AM
this looks like it'l be pretty awesome....

Name: Kistrev Szabo   *
Age: 18
Species: Cat
Status: Dockside Trafficker... smuggles in drugs, especially nip as felines in the city will pay extortionate prices
Appearance: most often seen on the dockside wearing a bandanna or flatcap, unbuttoned jacket of a thick canvas material which is more protective than it looks and three quarter length jeans...

Bio: Kistrev is an illegal immigrant, this means he jumped aboard the ship, Marian Queen and hid down between two cargo crates to jump back out at New York city several weeks later... a young unprotected feline he was taken by a group from the Romano family, he grew up learning the trade of trafficking on the docks, and now that hes turned 18 Ditch and Jake have decided he can be put to work on some minor buisiness... For the crime he is involved in as well as his life story he is a very cheerfull character and a sleeze at cards, having gained a reputation for being the most tricksome out of all the dockside Romano's when playing any kind of card or betting games... He was taken in by Ditch and Jake, a Wolf and human, who treated him as a younger Romano brother and decided he could help them Dockside..

((sorry for the long bio and everything... if any of that is not to your liking just say and i'l change it  ^_^ ))
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 11, 2009, 03:07:40 PM
Good stuff, Cat. Go ahead and post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 11, 2009, 08:42:23 PM
do you mind if i use this as a basis for a story... i have terrible writers block and this kinda thing helps  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 11, 2009, 10:17:51 PM
nope, go ahead.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Scautty on August 13, 2009, 05:02:58 AM
Name: Escaut Gersemen
Age: 29
Species: Wolf
Status: Loner Hitman/Grifter
Appearance: Changes when in character, but normal apparell consists of dark shirts and pants with light black tennis jacket. See avi for features.

Bio: Wife and children died under a minor gang membership, so as revenge takes out planners of similar crimes or crimes affecting his status on his own or through other minor gangs or groups. Known to be hardcore drinker, and high IQ. Cons include his soft side for children or women, and sometimes runs slow.

Sorry for jumping the gun.  :$
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 13, 2009, 05:04:44 AM
No problem, happened to me too. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 19, 2009, 11:08:01 AM
hey spike, in the rp what day of the week is it?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 19, 2009, 02:45:07 PM
good question. I'll say it's a Tuesday. Sound good?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 19, 2009, 03:33:34 PM
yeah, sounds good.... hmmm... how about at the top of each post you write~~~

the day, eg tuesday:

and then your post so that people know when it is?  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 20, 2009, 05:02:54 AM
Yeah I could do that. I'll post it at the top if the day changes.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on August 22, 2009, 04:15:42 AM
Just a heads up: I'll be leaving for a week and will not be returning until next monday...so...see you guys monday. XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on August 22, 2009, 06:42:17 AM
well im gonna be gone over this weekend.... see ya cliff hiking! XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 04, 2009, 04:34:21 PM
hey spike!.... for my english gcse im using the basics of this rp for part of my coursework... i mean just the names of the gangs... and the generall idea... i think it is most likely different characters cos its only a short part of a novel... that ok with you?  :?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 04, 2009, 04:45:38 PM
I have no problem with that at all Kitt. In fact, it's based off a real life crime syndicate called the Five Families. You can find out more about it if you like.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 04, 2009, 04:51:59 PM
sweet, i'l look up on that, cos this piece is actually for my gcse coursework... and its gotta be crime novel based... so thanks  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 04, 2009, 04:53:29 PM
No problem. If have any questions or comments or need advice, just ask. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 08, 2009, 08:12:13 PM
Someone post in the RP please.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 08, 2009, 08:26:36 PM
sorry spike, its late and i gotta get off... however, to cheer you up i could pm you the begingings of The Commission, A crime novel for you?

((ive been busy all afternoon trying to get this novel for english coursework and histroy homework done  :( .... gah! i shall post tomorrow, or tonight if i can sneak it in, in the time i got left  ;)

edit: i posted! that make ya happy spike? and i'l still pm u teh first chapter of the crime novel if you want  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 08, 2009, 08:45:06 PM
yeah man tha'd be great if you could. Thanks a lot! :D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 09, 2009, 06:32:12 AM
Is it just me? Or does anyone think that it's a little strange that Kistrev was close enough to see the detail of the bomb, but while
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police cars where hurled like toys into the dock
(and they were further away than he was) he was just tossed around and sent
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sprawling into the wall of dock buildings
?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 09, 2009, 01:23:59 PM
Pure luck that he's alive? XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 09, 2009, 01:25:19 PM
Makes sense  ^_^

Name: Jay Kaelin   *
Species: Snowshoe Hare (Rabbit)
Age: 27
Status: FBI agent
Appearance: Innocent, disarming face; dresses warmly to offset the cold New York weather, usually in more casual clothes than bureau regulations; often forgets to take his badge around with him.

Bio: Mobsters killed his parents when he was 5; the memory has stayed with him throughout his life, driving him to become the FBI’s youngest ever field agent – at 24. After 3 years fighting crime on assignment in Chicago (during which, he brought his parents’ killers to justice), he comes to New York to break up the infamous Commision.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 09, 2009, 01:33:14 PM
Nice, Jelly, go ahead and post your intro.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 09, 2009, 03:13:18 PM
pure luck saved Kistrev, not all those hit will have been killed... most are like Kistrev, unconscious from the blast.... i wont post until spike posts again to show the amount of time while Kistrev is unconscious....  ^_^ and yay! jelly's joined!


Post Merge: September 09, 2009, 09:04:53 PM
oooh! plot twist!!!  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 10, 2009, 06:04:52 AM
What country is Kistrev from?

And can I assume that Frankie disposes of bodies by chopping them up, putting them in garbage bags and tossing them into the harbour? (or a body of water somewhere around New York?)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 10, 2009, 03:36:02 PM
im from slovakia... eastern europe.... sorry, i think i forgot to put that onto my character sheet  ^_^ ... i just wrote immigrant...  :P ...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 10, 2009, 08:13:37 PM
What country is Kristev from?

And can I assume that Frankie disposes of bodies by chopping them up, putting them in garbage bags and tossing them into the harbour? (or a body of water somewhere around New York?)

Well thing is, the Lombardi's are in garbage disposal meaning all the bodies go to the dump with the city's trash; however, all the the trash is sent out on barges in the harbour before making it to a dry land dump. Perhaps by chance, one or two could have fallen from the boat?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 10, 2009, 10:49:55 PM
that's perfect  ^_^

Isn't it about time for Kistrev to pick up his car? I think Spike'd want to talk to him, whether or not he was injured.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 03:57:48 PM
im about to go pick up the car...  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 11, 2009, 04:38:06 PM
and now we need Spike back  :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 04:39:25 PM
yeah, is best if we wait for spike... i mean it IS his roleplay  ;) ....
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 11, 2009, 04:47:19 PM
yeh, and jay needs the meeting to be over before he does anything else anyway : :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 04:53:04 PM
And Kistrev needs Spike to be able to reply in the meeting  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 11, 2009, 09:49:27 PM
Im here. But you guys aren't! *facepaw* anyway I got some news. I won't be on till maybe sunday night or monday moring. I give either of you permission to play my character(s) but don't do anything TOO dramatic while I'm gone XD. Umm, also, I want a 2-3 page limit (which I doubt you guys will be able to fill by the time I'm back that you may RP w/o me just so I'm not reading like a million posts but I don't want to hold you guys back on your fun).
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 09:53:13 PM
hey thats fine spike.... umm one thing... what should it be that was on the ship? im kinda stuck as to what exactly it coulda been... any ideas?  :S
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 11, 2009, 10:05:52 PM
You said immigrants didn't you?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 10:07:37 PM
oh yeah... alright... the romano's are.... wait! ive said too much already   >:3 mwahaha!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 11, 2009, 10:34:44 PM
Hahahaha Yeah. I won't be on much longer so you may need to play the meeting by yourself or get JellyMuffs to help you with it and play me or something.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 11, 2009, 10:46:23 PM
okay.... we wont run too far ahead with ya dun worry.... matter of fact ive gotta attend a wedding tomorrow... so i wont be postin much tomorrow either  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 13, 2009, 12:01:35 PM
Looks like noone wants to play your characters for you Spike (for fear of doing something out of character), so we'll resume this as soon as you make the next post - which would be for Spike and for Callum

EDIT: additionally, I was doing this too, but Spike; do you realise that you keep writing KRistev and not KistRev? I've corrected mine for the most part
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 15, 2009, 12:42:02 AM
WHAT!? his name's Krisrev? :O ... Ok there's too many name's to fix so I'll continue from now on with Krisrev.

ALSO, Jay, Kristev's car was parked in the garage by Spike's guard. Sorry if that wasn't clear in my last post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 15, 2009, 02:25:56 AM
woops, then i'll delete the last post.

EDIT: The post has been changed


Post Merge: September 15, 2009, 10:34:06 PM
Sorry kitt... I kind of spoke for you a little there... but I think it's a pretty logical thing to say
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 16, 2009, 08:48:47 PM
hey i dont mind.... it was in character n' everyfin...  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 16, 2009, 10:03:50 PM
Does nobody ever want to speak for me? XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 17, 2009, 02:49:52 AM
So Callum's a triple agent now? :P

Plot twists!!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 17, 2009, 03:30:28 AM
:O indeed.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 18, 2009, 11:52:24 AM
looks like I'm stuck waiting to see if Kistrev makes a move
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 18, 2009, 02:55:26 PM
oh yeah... sorry mate...  ^_^ i'l get right on it ....
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 19, 2009, 05:30:23 AM
The note tells Kistrev to meet Jay at a specific coffee shop the next day at 10:00am, call in sick to get out of work.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 21, 2009, 02:05:12 AM
Ahh... so he's not officially dead yet, just missing and most likely to be killed
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 21, 2009, 02:09:30 AM
we'll see :O
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 21, 2009, 09:45:14 PM
oh, by the way spike... its KisTRev ... sorry for choosing such an annoying slovakian name  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 21, 2009, 10:02:43 PM
*facepaw*

Sorry, I will eventually get this right.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 22, 2009, 04:30:31 PM
The note says, "Gambino's behind you, don't turn around - that is why this meeting has been how it has been. We cannot come here again; in two days at 7:30pm go to 143 East Houston Street on the Lower East Side - there you'll find the Sunshine Cinema. I've arranged for it to be 'closed' for the evening, that will give us more time and no eavesdroppers for the next meeting. Make sure you are not followed." 

Yeh, it's a long note
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 22, 2009, 04:31:24 PM
umm, when are you gonna give this note to Kistrev?   :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 22, 2009, 04:40:29 PM
right now! ^_^


Post Merge: September 22, 2009, 04:49:33 PM
wow, you made me feel bad about putting that bit about the waitress in there, nice

hehe :P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 22, 2009, 09:11:22 PM
Guys, for next time, I just want to give you a heads up that I would like it if you didn't go posting more than twice before the third person (me) gets back. Sorry I didn't mention this earlier but it's a pain in the arse to catch up as well as makes me feel kinda left out.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 22, 2009, 09:24:37 PM
sorry spike, know how ya feel  :( ... everybody'l keep to the two post limit
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 23, 2009, 12:01:10 AM
there's that tiny addition to the last post "he really did like pie" it was unncecessary, but I laughed a little too much to not put it in - just don't think about it
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 24, 2009, 12:26:03 AM
who's up next? all the characters kinda went home ofter the last bit
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 24, 2009, 01:31:52 AM
I think Kitt is.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 24, 2009, 03:17:16 PM
me? *puts a paw to chest* u was waiting for lil' old me?  :3

and i got an A+ for part of my coursework to do with the Commission  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 24, 2009, 03:45:12 PM
coursework? huh?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 24, 2009, 03:52:04 PM
uh yeah...  spike agreed i could use some of the ideas generated here in some coursework im doing... and i had to do a presentation thing about it and i got an A+ for it and ive given in the part of the crime novel which i will get a mark for at some point...

((im only using ideas such as some of the names and the gang names as well as the setting... the rest is somewhat similar to the style of this rp but with a different story))
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 24, 2009, 03:52:46 PM
naww.. no Jay?   ^_^


Post Merge: September 24, 2009, 04:02:59 PM
you accidentally wrote Jay instead of Jake at one point in your post
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 24, 2009, 04:45:31 PM
haha, i musta been thinking about you.... anyhoo i changed it... so whoever wants can post next  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on September 24, 2009, 08:08:46 PM
and i got an A+ for part of my coursework to do with the Commission  ^_^

xD Thats great Kitt. Congrats!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on September 24, 2009, 08:16:05 PM
thankies spike, the actuall part of the novel i wrote is still being marked... i should have it back by monday  :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on September 25, 2009, 03:44:51 AM
we should probably be able to do more posts for this scene without waiting for Kistrev, it seems like it would be way too much of a coincidence for the cat to just wander in on this


Post Merge: September 26, 2009, 02:18:49 AM
cuute, kistrev's found a girl ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 01, 2009, 01:50:51 PM
I'm gonna be away for 3 days, so this might stall a little. I'll try to post in the morning before I go if there is something to reply to
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 01, 2009, 03:11:17 PM
hey, dont worry, post if you can but it doesnt matter, we'l wait for ya... um, im not sure there is much that i could post for you to reply too though  :/

( :3)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 02, 2009, 01:03:32 AM
I'll see if i can post tonight. I'm real busy with furries @ war xD. If I dont get the chance, it's no big Jay, we'll wait.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 02, 2009, 09:36:58 AM
hey spike, ya may wanna check the furries @ war ooc thread  ;) i added some stuff bout the slovaks in the 1940's...  ^_^


and yeah we'l wait for ya....
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 04, 2009, 02:04:31 AM
Yay! I'm back!  ...had to catch up on 24 threads *puff, puff*  okay, let's get this post going  :P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 04, 2009, 08:08:15 AM
umm.... im not really involved in the posting at the mo, so i guess your waiting for spike.... really it would be a stupid coincidence if i just turned up  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 05, 2009, 11:53:48 PM
oh noes! Jay's gonna get shot!  ...shot at, at the very least it would seem
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 05, 2009, 11:54:54 PM
Everybody gets shot (at) at least once xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 09, 2009, 12:46:48 AM
Run Spike, run! :P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 09, 2009, 12:48:23 AM
IM TRYING! IM TRYING!!! D: D: D:
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 14, 2009, 10:52:29 AM
Totally posted... amnesia fox is gonna wonder why he's handcuffed :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 14, 2009, 07:32:06 PM
He got some sleep it's coming back to him xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 15, 2009, 10:24:14 PM
i posted cos i been gone a lil' while from this rp  0:)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 15, 2009, 10:25:56 PM
it's okay ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 15, 2009, 10:33:02 PM
It's actually really appreiciated, Kitt. Thanks.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 16, 2009, 11:47:29 PM
uh oh Spike, turns out forensic ballistics existed in 1946 >:3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 16, 2009, 11:56:36 PM
too bad Spike carries SEVERAL .38's. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 16, 2009, 11:59:19 PM
 :/ well, I tried



 ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 12:03:58 AM
D: Sorry.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 12:26:58 AM
Can I have permission to do something really cruel?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 12:29:18 AM
...I'm a little unsure. Like how cruel we talking? Drowning puppies cruel? Or eating food in front of starving children cruel?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 12:29:43 AM
I wanna go with the latter
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 12:32:36 AM
yeah sure, go ahead.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 12:47:24 AM
MUHAHAHAHAHA!!    (Jay's not usually like that, but... you already made him chase you once) ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 12:54:58 AM
OOOOOOOH Spike did something naughty. You better do something Jay xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 01:28:44 AM
Jay couldn't be blamed for that, 1. there is no way he could reach Spike with 30 seconds left and 2. the explosion wouldn't leave a trace of why Spike was stuck, so it would just look like a patient was left behind - a sad tragedy


Post Merge: October 16, 2009, 09:29:44 PM
also, sorry if it feels like you're being left out Kitt, maybe if you took a more proactive approach? Maybe you feel that Jay is a threat to your work on the docks, your means of making a living, and plan to 'silence' the bunny... or maybe you realise that you could be an asset to the good guys (that's us) and try to take down the Commission fom the inside


Post Merge: October 17, 2009, 03:02:04 PM
wait, Jay offers to carry Spike and it's madness, but now it's okay??
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 03:08:02 PM
I never said it was. Now Spike got away, and Jay's in a bit of trouble now. :O
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 03:08:35 PM
got away? I think not
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 03:15:42 PM
Got away, no. That's not the plan. He's just got away from you.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 03:17:29 PM
...clearly not yet
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 03:27:56 PM
*takes off sunglasses* ...We'll see.... *puts sunglasses back on*
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 03:32:57 PM
well, looks like you missed again
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 03:37:30 PM
...I think you forget that this is 1946. tape recorders are a fantasy here. Tape recorders in that time were literally the size of a typewriter.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 03:40:00 PM
okay, there was no playback, but actually, sound recording was widely instituted by police at that time due to the invention of recording on thin magetic tape in the 1920's-30's, he wouldn't have been able to play it back on the spot, but he would have the recording


Post Merge: October 17, 2009, 03:41:55 PM
worst comes to worst, he had it hidden in the room, behind the chair he was sitting it - he would have had the backup
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 03:44:58 PM
K we'll go with that.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 17, 2009, 04:16:23 PM
Sorry for the ridiculously long post, but you've already read half of it ^_^


Post Merge: October 17, 2009, 04:31:27 PM
also, I don't think we should take the rp into court, it'll lose al the excitement - this is about the mob, not lawyers :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 17, 2009, 07:43:55 PM
Keep bickering about who's getting in trouble? xD

Its all I can think of doing. Since all the don has to do is pull some strings and Spike's free anyway. :/

What do you wanna do?

Also: Mark isn't a real name. That was fabricated as a cover up for one of the Romano's men.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 18, 2009, 10:25:57 AM
I'm working on a non-violent way of eliminating Callum as a road-block, Jay's been fighting on two fronts for too long ^_^

and that doesn't mean Mark wouldn't have a file, it just wouldn't be very... substantial
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 18, 2009, 04:12:26 PM
Want me to bump Callum off for you? xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 18, 2009, 08:39:15 PM
Oh god, that'd be helpful ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 18, 2009, 10:57:38 PM
I dunno, you'd probably try to arrest me for it.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 19, 2009, 12:06:27 AM
I know I said 'non-violent' but I'm actually considering killing him myself... just don't want another media debacle (people just always happening to be "wondering by")
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 19, 2009, 12:32:22 AM
...That will most defanitely start a war with the Lombardis.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 19, 2009, 01:13:06 AM
Which is why it would be better if you did it... Jay can be civil, he knows when he's been done a favour; he was pretty happy when he thought Callum was dead initially
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 19, 2009, 01:19:25 AM
Well, to Spike, he's wondering why Paul hadn't killed him yet.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 19, 2009, 01:20:44 AM
Yeh, that was confusing to me too... :?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 19, 2009, 01:28:56 AM
There's someone else who did it. Paul knows who but I don't yet. Yes that does sound silly but I haven't thought that far yet. Spike will prolly kill him anyway, find out who it really was, then scold Paul for not telling him.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 19, 2009, 02:00:21 AM
okay, i promise this'll be the last time I say this but... K-I-S-T-R-E-V
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 19, 2009, 02:01:27 AM
isn't that what i said?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 19, 2009, 02:05:40 AM
you can't seem to stop saying K-R-I-S-R-E-V

Quote
something to say to Krisrev when he made it back

Quote
What was Krisrev doing with Agent Kaelin?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 19, 2009, 02:08:53 AM
as long as I have the intention, I'm fine. xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 19, 2009, 02:57:48 PM
hehe  ;) he means well jay
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 22, 2009, 06:58:08 AM
Can I assume that this is happening on Wednesday morning?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 23, 2009, 02:03:59 AM
Yep. To be honest, I have no idea what day it is.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 23, 2009, 08:22:30 AM
sure.... assuming its wednesday is fine with me  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 23, 2009, 08:23:56 AM
'cause remember Kistrev is meeting Jay on Wednesday night at the Sunshine theater... 7:30pm   ((it's in that note he gave Kistrev back at the cafe))
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 23, 2009, 08:26:28 AM
ja, i remember  ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 24, 2009, 04:25:03 AM
and spike, that's the best part, Kistrev hasn't really told him anything yet ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 24, 2009, 04:32:06 AM
But Spike doesn't know that. :O
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on October 24, 2009, 04:34:44 AM
Yeh, but he can probably tell when someone's lying... which Kistrev won't be by denying that he leaked any information - though you might learn about the meeting in the theater...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on October 26, 2009, 03:42:44 PM
Oh the suspense xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on October 26, 2009, 04:33:54 PM
even more suspense  :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on November 12, 2009, 11:48:06 PM
I don't want to sound like I'm complaining... though didn't Kistrev turn down the exact same offer to bring his family across? Seriously, Spike's made the exact same offer as Jay (but I can't actually see him getting the citizenships) and it seems the cat's jumping on it when it just got him all depressed last time it was brought up... about 30 minutes before
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on November 13, 2009, 01:12:19 AM
*shrug* Did Kaelin offer jobs? Maybe that's it.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on November 13, 2009, 01:54:01 AM
He didn't have the opportunity, Kistrev turned down bringing over his family.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on November 13, 2009, 04:02:14 AM
...maybe he just likes taking sides xD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on November 13, 2009, 04:17:17 PM
*taps nose* theres a reason for all this.... obviously i aint gonna tell you guys cos that would ruin it  ;)

dont worry Jay, all should be explained in my next post or two  :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on November 15, 2009, 10:59:21 PM
oooooooooooo suspense is building.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on November 15, 2009, 11:10:46 PM
Umm.. Spike poured Scotch when Kistrev first came in - then he picked up the glass and it was suddenly vodka... is he the alcohol-jesus?
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on November 16, 2009, 02:07:25 AM
What? If you read the whole thing it clearly says Spike poured vodka AFTER they'd finished the scotch...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: JellyMuffins on November 16, 2009, 02:19:07 AM
Woops, bunny's not concentrating apparently ^_^
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on November 19, 2009, 04:18:47 PM
Name: Franco Chan
Age: 22
Species: Fox
Status: Lombardi gambling racket boss and button man
Appearance: Franco is a 6'4" fox with a reputation for the most horrendous killings in the Brooklyn area. Has a small place in Upper Brooklyn covering as a fish market. He is lean, always carrying his coat hook sawed-off under his bulky Trench coat, but has several licenses and his brother, Shiro, is police Sergent on his beat. He works for Lombardi, but will allow anyone in his racket as long as they are quiet. His joint is known as a Brooklyn embassy by the more educated of the mob.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on November 20, 2009, 04:30:40 AM
looks good, Shiro. Go ahead and post. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on December 30, 2009, 11:24:18 AM
it looks like Kistrev can be told to do anything if enough cash is involved  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on December 30, 2009, 06:37:21 PM
I know :D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on December 30, 2009, 10:18:50 PM
*rolls his eyes* immigrants these days  :3
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on December 31, 2009, 04:29:01 AM
These are hard times, Kitt. I'd do it. lol XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on January 08, 2010, 10:29:34 AM
(http://telstarlogistics.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/2007/12/05/independencenyc.jpg)


the shipment is that style of ship, but hollowed out for cargo instead of passengers.... some of THE biggest ships at this time in New York  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on January 09, 2010, 07:28:59 AM
You'll need to point it out to Spike. He's clueless like that. XD
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on January 16, 2010, 06:19:57 PM
Name: Jericho aka
Age:22
Species: wolf
Status: Moretti's hitman
Appearance: 5'8 black and dark reddish fur, (don't know how to describe it) wears the stereotypic mafia outfit and always has a cigarette in his mouth   
Bio: Jericho never wanted to be a hitman or part of the Mafia, he was a family man with a wife and kids, but do to his job was New York's best pyrotechnician ever(he works under the police department). He was to be requited by the Moretti family but refused. After refusing them for some time Moretti gave him one final offer he couldn't refuse. Join the Mafia or see his family die. Doing what he thought was best, He unwillingly join the Moretti's family. He grew sick and tired of the constant jobs he had to do. He waits patiently for his chance to take down the boss leader. And forever leaves the family hoping to never join again. His fighting style involves in many different methods. From lighter and hair spray to mini dynamites, anything that involves explosives  or fire, that his area of expertise. 
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on January 17, 2010, 06:53:53 AM
go ahead and post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on January 17, 2010, 07:04:43 AM
WOOO HOOO!!!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on January 19, 2010, 05:38:23 AM
hey is spike talking to me? or another wolf cause I have yet to arrive my designated area
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on January 19, 2010, 11:42:06 PM
I'm talking to Shiro. Paul is the wolf I was referring to.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on February 02, 2010, 09:06:51 PM
man, im gonna have to keep what goes on in that office within the rules of this forum.... whatta shame  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on February 04, 2010, 04:19:24 PM
Hehe, that is part of the reason i put her in there. you could have a "blackout" scene. Basically say "1 hour later, Kitt walked out of the office, a grin plastered on his face."
Or you could use you're imagination....
you're choice
:P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on February 14, 2010, 09:07:05 AM
Spike, im gonna be in Slovakia for a week, you take control of my character while im gone if ya want  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on February 15, 2010, 06:53:43 PM
Ok Kitt, thanks.

Have fun! :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on March 12, 2010, 11:03:08 AM
Hey Spike, sorry 'bout not posting for ages, internets been playing up at mine and my laptop got eaten alive by a virus for a while....
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Ho'ne Diheart on March 12, 2010, 04:03:24 PM
I am sorry I haven't post for a long time, but I will be resigning this one, Sorry
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on March 31, 2010, 04:40:42 PM
Hey spike, just for simplicities sake:

Kitt's full name -    Kistřev Vladimír Szarda

Kitt's given name (the one he uses most often) -    Kitt Szarda   (Kitt uses this given name in New York seeing as illegal immigrants with names like that are easily caught)

makes it easier for us all  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on March 31, 2010, 08:01:24 PM
That's fine Kitt.

I havent been on this ooc for so long I forgot Shiro quit. :S
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on March 31, 2010, 08:02:36 PM
I didn't quit!
I'm still here!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on March 31, 2010, 08:03:50 PM
OH *facepalm*

Sorry shiro I read the wrong name. >_<
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on March 31, 2010, 09:11:09 PM
I decided i might as well go the whole lot and rewrite part of my character sheet, as well as write Justine/Jesse her own character sheet as well... that okay with ya Spike?  :?


Name: Kistřev Vladimír Szarda   (aka, good ol'  Kitt)
Age: 18
Species: Feline (wild)
Status: Dock Hand and now also an Agent for Mr. Gambino...
Appearance:  coal stained flatcap, unbuttoned jacket of a thick canvas material protected by a waterproof wax layer which is more protective than it looks and three quarter length jeans...


Name: Justine Taylor  (nickname among friends : 'Jesse' )
Age: 18
Species: Feline (domestic)
Status: One of 'Shiro's girls' at his exclusive casino and club...
Appearance: As Shiro put i think, "volumptous" sums her up... short skirt, oh.. you get the picture ;P
Bio: Worked at Shiro's for most of her life, her father died several years ago, her mother still lives in New York and sees her daughter quite regularly... her mother lives in a large apartment in New York... Jesse is an often quiet and outspoken girl compared to some of the others at Shiro's joint...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on March 31, 2010, 10:31:56 PM
Fine by me Kitt. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on April 01, 2010, 04:11:48 AM
"voluptuous" kitt :D

well rounded is another word for it.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: x on April 01, 2010, 04:15:03 AM
Why oh why oh why have I not seen this before? I'm going to start reading this roleplay for the sake of reading, but I was also wondering...is it still open?  o.O I'm a big fan of mafia kinds of things such as this. I would adore it if I could join.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 01, 2010, 04:38:09 AM
It's always open for one more. :)

Make a character sheet for me and you can post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: x on April 01, 2010, 04:42:39 AM
Ohhh boy!  Thank you! :3 I need just a lil bit of time.... :$
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 01, 2010, 04:58:17 AM
No problem
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: x on April 01, 2010, 05:15:58 AM
Name: Sacha Derterani
Age: 37
Species: Squirrel
Status: "Child Rearer" for the Morettis. Is also a major trafficker of said children.
Appearance: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3219239/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3219239/) Sacha is short and round, about 200 pounds of lovin'. She enjoys purple make-up and clothes that show off her body. She always seems to be wearing a snide smile and carrying a cigar or cigarette.

Bio: After growing up rough, Sacha eventually managed to climb up the ranks in the Moretti family and establish herself as a child trafficker for their sweatshops. She rolls hard and has a tounge of steel. She is rather...loose...in her dealings with men and has thereby produced a daughter from an unknown father that she named Lucky....because her daughter's sure as hell 'lucky' that Sacha didn't give the whelp up to the sweatshops. Or worse. Sacha lives for parties. They allow her to forget about her past.

((I hope its alright to add this next char...Sacha wouldn't be the same without her...))

Name: Lucky Derterani
Age: 6
Species: Squirrel
Status: "Sacha's Daughter" is pretty much just what she goes by.
Appearance: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2242928/ (http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2242928/)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 01, 2010, 05:20:42 AM
Sounds good you can go ahead and post. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: x on April 01, 2010, 05:25:03 AM
Hooray!  :3 Thanks for letting me (try and) be a part of this.  B)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 01, 2010, 05:26:24 AM
Remember to follow the rules and have fun! :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on April 01, 2010, 02:56:32 PM
Quote
"voluptuous" kitt

well rounded is another word for it.

I knew what you meant, that was just my spelling failing  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: x on April 05, 2010, 03:13:50 PM
I haven't forgotten about posting!  :$ Just that usually my first posts are quite long, so I spend awhile on making them as good as possible.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 05, 2010, 08:05:22 PM
hehehe that's fine. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on April 10, 2010, 06:26:18 AM
I'm going to post tomarrow, SWEAR. And when Uni swears, you know she's dead serious. If I don't then you can give me a strike or something.  :S
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 10, 2010, 07:05:54 PM
I don't give out strikes in my RP(s). People either post or they don't. It's that simple. I'd feel like an RP nazi if I did.

...but I will be taking you up on that ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Ghost 789 on April 10, 2010, 11:42:31 PM
Name: Starao Kzar *
Age: 29
Species: wolf
Status: Bounty hunter
Appearance: Dark blue jacket, blue jeans, white and black striped tennis shoes. Eyes are dark brown, and fur color is gray
Bio: Starao's parents were killed by Lombardi thugs and swears they will regret it one day. He was sent to an orphanage until he was old enough to get a job. He spent 3 years as a worker for a weapon-making company, and had earned enough to get a house. After he had bought one, he was robbed by another pack of Lombardi thugs, not realizing they were Lombardi, and has decided against joining a gang. He now works as a bounty hunter. Considering he excels in all types of weaponry, it's not a surprise he has a perfect record!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 11, 2010, 02:50:18 AM
Thanks, Ghost. You're free to post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on April 11, 2010, 05:02:54 AM
Okay, well I hope I wasn't stepping out of my bounds with Falder and all that. Just wanted something intense for my first few posts....

On that note, can I get a recap of what's going on right now? That way I can think of a way to integrate myself.....somehow... :S
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 11, 2010, 05:19:03 AM
Actually I really like your post. I think it'll open up for a very intersting story as it unfolds.

For a story recap, let's see...

Spike was an underboss for the Lombardi's. He recruited Kitt who is a dockworker for the Romano's at the New Jersey docks after Spike murdered the Romano Don's son faering that the Romanos now have a personal vendetta against him. Spike had a man on the inside with the FEDs (named Callum) to help keep info on ther other crime bosses and report to the Lombardi Don (Angelo Lombardi). A hit was set out on Spike by another family and was critically shot and hospitalized. After learning that Spike had survived the initial hit, a bomb had been planted in the hostipal in an attempt to kill him. Spike, belonging to a demolition's squad during WWII was able to locate and disarm it. A cop named Agent Kalen had been on Spike's case for a long time and was close to arresting him (played by Arrant who is no longer in the RP). Spike got away during the bomb scare. After a little while it is learned that Angelo Lombardi suffered a heart attack and Spike is to now lead the Lombardi crime synicate and making him Don. Spike and his crew rob and blow up a Romano pier that was used for weapon's trading from Europe and the States. Hundreds die in the blast and gunfire. This has put heat on Spike and the Lombardis from cops and Romano men. Spike meets Shiro who survived the blast and is currently opertating plans with him. Currely, Callum has gone missing but reports say that he is working as a Romano man two timing Spike. Spike is now trying to find a way to kill him and has chosen Kitt with for the job since Kitt is an illegal immigrant and therefore has no record of exisiting. Spike, Kitt, Shiro, and Spike's goons are at the docks right now.


Post Merge: April 11, 2010, 01:26:28 PM
Shiro...I don't know if you know this but Spike's last name is Gambino. Spike Gambino is the Don of the Lombardi family. Spike's son (Gambino's son) is 8 years old...

I think you need to edit your post. :S
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on April 11, 2010, 05:30:28 AM
Thankies Spike! *chesire cat grin*   :D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on April 11, 2010, 05:40:22 AM
holy....
dam
okay i'll change it
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 16, 2010, 04:20:06 AM
Sorry I haven't posted, guys. I've been having some health issues lately.

Also, Ghost, slow it WAY down. You went through an entire scene/hit in a matter of 2 posts. Be descriptive and thoughtful and try to make try to make your posts relevant to what is happening. What you do in the story does have consequences. Try to remember this is 1946. '46 technology only (i.e metal detectors in airports = NO.)

Please and thank you.

Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Ghost 789 on April 16, 2010, 08:36:32 PM
Whoops. Sorry, this is my first serious RP to be honest...
Forgot it was 1946 as well...Sorry... :(
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on April 17, 2010, 04:31:53 PM
thats okay, if it is ur first serious

and thats okay u mixed up the date too. We all make mistakes  (heck, look at some of my earlier posts  :P)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on April 18, 2010, 05:49:34 PM
Nuuu! Stupid wolf cop is getting in the way of my shooting spree!!!  >:(

it was so hard to resist just shooting him, but obviously that would give me away   ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 18, 2010, 06:07:36 PM
hehehe Kitt is met with CHALLENGE! >:D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 20, 2010, 06:28:18 PM
Ghost, 1946. No glocks and no teleporting from your hideout or anywhere else. Please make a note of it. I don't want to keep reminding you. I understand this is your first serious RP but remember that this is a lot like a book. Characters in books do not just show up and do as they please. This post wasn't too bad but try to add in a few things such as leaving your hide out. There are no such thing as glocks and that shooting people/cars randomly on the streets of New York is kind of abrupt and most likely will attract police, scare pedestrians, and might earn you a death sentece from the Lombardi Don. I dunno.

But good way to get involved with everyone else. :)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Alice The Necrofox on April 20, 2010, 06:59:52 PM
Ghost, i wont shoot you, but lose the glock. You don't want to mess with an angry fox with a sawed off. :D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on April 22, 2010, 01:20:07 PM
Oooh bloodeh..... :o ^_^ :o
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 23, 2010, 03:06:12 AM
hehehe you know it. >:P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 26, 2010, 08:27:12 PM
waiting on therebeunicorns
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 28, 2010, 05:19:36 AM
nice post therebeunicorns! XD

Sorry but you're getting kidnapped again.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on April 28, 2010, 05:30:32 AM
Oh snap.  :o

Ignoring her offer AND kidnapping her....that's cold...arctic temperatures over here...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on April 28, 2010, 05:41:29 AM
I'M SORRY!!! D: D: D:
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 06, 2010, 09:04:35 PM
hey, this rp still goin'?  I'm just waitin for Shiro or someone else to post...
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on May 07, 2010, 02:33:54 AM
i was waiting for therebeunicorns but she's been missing lately. :S I'll post.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 07, 2010, 03:07:07 PM
ah right.... well hopefully she'l get back sometime  :/


I Think i'm gonna wait for Shiro to post.... so he can open the door and Kitt will catch up with him, bursting through to finish the job.... epic finale to a veeeery long game of cat and mouse  :P
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Ghost 789 on May 22, 2010, 03:45:36 PM
Okay, I see several things 100% wrong with Shiro's posts...
1.Didn't kill me, I did have a vest, and I just played possum
2.What do Nazis have to do with this?
3.3 words:NOT. A. COP! Bounty hunter. :/
4.I had already made it to the sewers and he said he shot me from the surface...Not much logic there
To be honest I kinda fail at this stuff now... >.<
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on May 25, 2010, 03:54:55 AM
Ok, for the LAST TIME this is 1946.

Everything should fall into place now.

No vests. Kevlar is UNHEARD OF in 1946. Nazis are everywhere, especially in 1946. Shiro was only saying that the cop was a neo-nazi that's all. I don't know what street in New York has a random sewer you can just run into at anytime. Ghost, you need to grasp that there is no randomness in Serious RP. You have to think of this like it being reality. Yea you can make people and things pop up. But you can't just create a sewer tunnel in the middle of a market street. I know you're really trying dude and it was good until you decided to run off after shooting at us. like wtf? Stay around a bit and have fun! Don't poke your head out a hole and then pop back in. That's not what this is. You RP with us. NOT at us.
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on May 26, 2010, 06:45:30 PM
Again, letting the 'Fuhrer' know that I'll be back very soon and ready to play!
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on May 26, 2010, 08:29:17 PM
YAY! :D
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 26, 2010, 08:37:54 PM
I'm just waiting on anyone to post really... personally i wouldnt want to be in Kitt's shoes, nobody wants to have to try and talk to a woman who found out her man is lying to her  ;)
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: x on May 27, 2010, 03:12:03 AM
Sasha says...screw it! She's going to post something since she has an hour anyway.

*tries to force mind to focus!*
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: Armalite_ on May 27, 2010, 03:17:17 AM
*clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap*

I'm glad you're back, Sasha. I was beginning to worry. D:
Title: Re: The Commission (OOC: Discussion and Characters - OPEN)
Post by: KittKat chunky~ on May 27, 2010, 09:55:39 AM
Whoot, Sasha's back!  :P