^ I agree with thy opinion... (i can't do rhyming poems.
This is constuctive critisism!
Your poems are pretty good! They have meaning and ryme! I personally don't like rymes, but that's my oppinion.
Your poems are thoughtfull and planned, witch is good if you're going for a certan effect or feeling, but most of the time poems like those lack emotion. Your poems speak your thoughts, witch gives a cool effect! And they are sometimes tricky to write, so good job!
Have you done some emotional poems by any chance? Because they are pretty cool too! And they give off energy witch makes poems even better. The writing style of the poem defines what feeling or thought you focus on, and the way it should be taken, but you already know that!
Now, I will critise them with feeling, so this might be a little rough.
The fish poem is interesting, but doesn't have any emotion. It feels flat and cheeky. Like you ... it is okay, but the methaphores are a little too forward...
Okay I give up! Your poem is good, even though I don't nesseserly like it.
And what's up with those lines? Are they there to signify add ons?
The time one has interesting methaphores, but lacks emotion. It took a concept or a motive, and just wrote things associated with it.
The monster one is a little silly, but I like the style!
The tales one has ryme, witch I mentioned I don't like that much. The ending is cool, and the meaning is nice!
(And sorry if I had some typos)
Hmm, I'll take take notes and see what I can do on the emotional front, as I can definitely see what your referring to.
This is constuctive critisism!
Your poems are pretty good! They have meaning and ryme! I personally don't like rymes, but that's my oppinion.
Your poems are thoughtfull and planned, witch is good if you're going for a certan effect or feeling, but most of the time poems like those lack emotion. Your poems speak your thoughts, witch gives a cool effect! And they are sometimes tricky to write, so good job!
Have you done some emotional poems by any chance? Because they are pretty cool too! And they give off energy witch makes poems even better. The writing style of the poem defines what feeling or thought you focus on, and the way it should be taken, but you already know that!
Now, I will critise them with feeling, so this might be a little rough.
The fish poem is interesting, but doesn't have any emotion. It feels flat and cheeky. Like you ... it is okay, but the methaphores are a little too forward...
Okay I give up! Your poem is good, even though I don't nesseserly like it.
And what's up with those lines? Are they there to signify add ons?
The time one has interesting methaphores, but lacks emotion. It took a concept or a motive, and just wrote things associated with it.
The monster one is a little silly, but I like the style!
The tales one has ryme, witch I mentioned I don't like that much. The ending is cool, and the meaning is nice!
(And sorry if I had some typos)